[Other] The World

[Goetia]

The World

The world I was born into, used to shine like the Sun,
there was never any doubt about what occurred,
there was never any need to worry about the future,
and there was never a time where I was worried for the time ahead.

I soon came to learn that the world wasn’t the paradise I thought it was,
instead, I learnt it was corrupted and dying, by the things we could call humans,
but these aren’t humans, they are disgusting vermin who only destroy to suit their needs,
they aren’t normal people, but warlords and corrupt animals that plague our planet.

These things continue to destroy our planet, despite our efforts,
instead of searching for ways to solve things peacefully,
we kill and initiate wars to determine who is right, when it only determines who is left,
though we will keep trying, and continue to fight for a better future.

Discrimination and corruption courses through the planet, like blood through our veins,
it will always exist, no matter how hard we try, no matter how much we fight,
that is why fighting is almost futile, but to give up is to surrender to Satan,
the world we live in, the planet we inhabit, is dying.

 

[esenn1]

is it urs dude?

 

[EVlL]

nice poem. in fact, that's the fact of our world

 

[Goetia]

is it urs dude?

I wouldn't have posted it if I didn't write it.

nice poem. in fact, that's the fact of our world

Thanks. Yeah, its very saddening to know this is the harsh reality we live in. Some people will try and say it'll only be for a small time, when this will last forever as long as humanity exists. I'm just willing to look at the world for what it is, not for what it can never be, no matter how much we try.

 

[YokoKurama]

<div class="bbWrapper">Nice one Assassin.</div>

 

[Six Paths of Logic]

It is not that good, i mean yeah it is written nicely but it has no real substance.

 

[Goetia]

Nice one Assassin.

Thank you.

It is not that good, i mean yeah it is written nicely but it has no real substance.

Thank you for your input.

 

[Sauce]

This was pretty good.

 

[Goetia]

This was pretty good.

Thanks......

 

[esenn1]

The structure is very nice. The content not that good.

But anyway good efforts. Keep it up bro =D

 

[Goetia]

The structure is very nice. The content not that good.

But anyway good efforts. Keep it up bro =D

Thank you for your input.

 

[Six Paths of Logic]

I wouldn't have posted it if I didn't write
Thanks. Yeah, its very saddening to know this is the harsh reality we live in. Some people will try and say it'll only be for a small time, when this will last forever as long as humanity exists. I'm just willing to look at the world for what it is, not for what it can never be, no matter how much we try.

Arent you following the Naruto series? And This world isnt all "evil"
"All it takes for evil to prevail, is for one good man to do nothing"

Thank you.



Thank you for your input.

And i cant tell if it is sincere or sarcastic

 

[NineSNS]

Nice poem. Now I'm depressed.

 

[Goetia]

Arent you following the Naruto series? And This world isnt all "evil"
"All it takes for evil to prevail, is for one good man to do nothing"

And i cant tell if it is sincere or sarcastic

I am serious when say thank you. It lets me think about where I need to improve.

I do follow Naruto, but the world isn't the same as a manga where feats like that are able to be done.

@UzumakiSama, sorry. That's just the way it is written I guess.