The Wind & The Ocean

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The wind and the ocean;
The sound of her voice.

It seems like only yesterday I was hugging her neck;
But the actions I took, took her away.

From the sound of the ocean I can hear her calling;
Calling, "I love you" with all her heart.

I'll never be sure, I'll never be quick;
To know if it was really her on that faithful night?

Loved ones are precious;
No matter present or past.

I leave you know with only advice;
Never leave your dear loved on, you'll pay the ultimate price.​
 

Bluetwilight

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it's a nice poem ryhmes are good
 
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Bellisimo! (Beautiful) so sweet! :D
 

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it was the loveliest poem i had ever read nice-work
 
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