Migster257
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First four chapters written by: Akame
Chapters 5-10 written by: Migster257
Chapter 1 Awakening•
"The sky lit up with fireworks as it started raining, it was a sight to behold as Madara had accomplished the IT"
Madara: Yes I have accomplished true peace! Now I will become a god!
"In a mountainside valley slept a God. As the words reached his ears he opened his eyes letting the world see his Ramengan. And in the blink of an eye had dissapeared"
Madara: There's is no one left to stop my dream, I am the savior!
"As madara went to walk away he felt the presence of a true god, the air filled with storms and the ground started breaking apart"
Lord Teuchi: madara I see you have done the forsaken. I will have to stop you! and put naruto and sasuke in a position where it will look as if they defeated you.
Madara: (laughs" who do you thin----
"Being cut off from speaking madara had fallen and was defeated by lord Teuchi"
Lord Teuchi: I now have to awaken these fodder's and make it look like they won.
Chapter 2 True God•
"As Lord Teuchi had just finished defeating madara by walking past him, he thought of a way to make it seem like naruto and sasuke had won. But wait he had a better idea.
Lord Teuchi: I know! I'll make it seems as black zetsu backstabs madara! To return kaguya. But that means I'll have to give the sage power to allow naruto and sasuke to seal her!
"Teuchi said the following- Ramen Rinne. As he said it the the sage was revived before him, lord Teuchi gave him power and gave him an artificial memory"
Lord Teuchi: now go my fodder, and make it seem real!
"As lord Teuchi was returning to his sleep, he had an even better idea. He would set in motion a plan to show the world the meaning of true ramen!
Lord Teuchi: I will show this world my teachings!
"As lord Teuchi was ready to set out a man appeared before him! Who could oppose lord Teuchi? None other then Willy the god of rice!
Willy: I see you have become a god Teuchi, but it's time for me to stop you and overcome this world with rice!
Lord Teuchi: do you truly believe you can stop me? I will solo you in style!
"Lord Teuchi had used his rinnegan to teleport to willy as he appeared before him, he unleashed Ramensengan. And willy answered with RiceDori"
Chapter 3: Despair
"The ground broke apart, the tides rose, tornadoes appeared and rained started pouring as Two gods faced off against each other"
Lord Teuchi: Willy you truly are worthy of being considered a rival! You have survived every attack I have used up until now!
Willy: It's great to hear the praise from you! I must say the same for you, but I will not allow you to survive much longer!
Lord Teuchi: show me your power willy! I still have much to give! I will teach my ways to the world!
"As lord Teuchi finished speaking he put his hands together and used "Chinra Ramen"
Willy: what is this? Do you plan on taking me with you?
Lord Teuchi: No. I'm going to seal you and then erase you from existence! This world will forget about rice!
Willy: I see, (closes his eyes and smiles) I will unleash my power now!
"Willy had brung forth "Perfect Rice" a collosal armor made of The finest Rice in existence! The perfect defense! And as he swung his sword, Lord Teuchi's sealing technique had been broken!
Willy: This is the power of a god Teuchi! I will finish this now!
Chapter 4: Breakdown
"As willy had used his "PR" he went to attack Teuchi, with almost no chance of escape, Teuchi Revealed His Ramengan(The eyes of a God)"
"And after showing his eyes he used Rimin(ramen Lightning) as he put his hand up, he then brought down as if guiding it! And Rimin hit willy's "PR"
"After the dust had settled, in the floor missing both arms and legs layed Willy in the floor gushing blood"
Lord Teuchi: I told you I would not be defeated! I will set this world in motion and fix it my own way
Willy: (Smiling) I..... I..... I truly believe you can lord Teuchi, however there is one more opponent who will be here shortly! His name is Teuche! Yes your older brother is headed here now! I believe you can stop him now more then ever! Please Teuchi save this world!
"With a shocked look on his face, Teuchi took a knee"
Lord Teuchi: you have to be joking right willy? How can Teuche be alive? Father sacrificed himself to stop him! This isn't possible!
Willy: it's the truth Teuchi! I'm sorry but I must be leaving now! I can't hold on to my life force any longer! Farewell Teuchi.
Lord Teuchi: How? How is this possib-
"Unknown: huh? Wait is that you Teuchi? It is isn't it? HAHAHAHA what a surprise!
Lord Teuchi: (with a shocked look) it can't be! How is this possible?
Teuchi: Teuche! You...you're...back
*Teuchi's facial expression is one filled with awe*
But...but...how? Father killed you! I saw it with my own eyes-These eyes only see the truth!
Teuche: Oh, how naive you are, little brother-as you've always been.
A sudden realization dawns upon Teuchi. The fate of the world rested on his hands. A single mistake could cost the fate of humanity, and everything anyone has ever known will be turned to dust.
*Teuchi closes his eyes and lifts his head towards the sky
•Flashback
Teuche: Teuchi, Teuchi, come play with me!
Teuchi, with a smile on his face, sprints towards his brother, accidentally kicking sand towards near bystanders.
Teuchi: What do you want to play-what do you want to play-what do you want to pla-
Teuche: Hmmm... Maybe we can play hide and seek?
Teuchi: Let's play-let's play-let's play-let's play
Teuchi turns around and lifts his arm toward his eyes to cover them.
Teuche swiftly runs the other direction, heading into a nearby alleyway.
Teuchi: Four. Three. Two. One-Ready or not, here I come!
Before Teuchi could move, he feels a hand on his shoulder. The touch was firm, and it had a certain warmth that felt nice. He spins his head and sees a tall man looming over him.
Teuchi: Hi, mister. What do you want?
The stranger remains silent and just stares at Teuchi. His eyes, cold as ice, were staring straight into Teuchi's soul. A chill went down his spine.
Teuchi: Mister, your hand-i-it-it's hurting me.
Teuchi spots a shadow through the corner of his eye. He could feel an immense heat touch his temple, and he blacked out.
•Flashback Continuation
An immense pain on his temple kept bothering Teuchi. Why was everything so... Black. No... It was-Darker than black.
*cue Darker than Black theme song*
Teuchi: Wha-what's that? It-It's a dim light. It's pretty.
Teuchi slowly moves towards the light. A faint voice could be heard echoing through the darkness surrounding him.
The light source becomes brighter and brighter, until a silhouette could be seen. Teuchi mumbles.
Teuchi:Who, who's there?
Teuche: ARE YOU OKAY? I'm-so-sorry-I-hit-you-when-I-was-trying-to-hit-the-*******-
Teuchi:Slow down. You're making my headache worse. What happened?
Teuche: That-that guy, he's from a clan bred from hatred.
Teuchi: Sounds like some stupid manga based off that plot. Probably has a stupid name that rhymes with "Kankuto"
Teuche: Now's not the time for jokes. The Uchiha clan is not to be messed with.
Teuchi: Where is he now then?
Teuche: His charred corpse is over there
Teuchi turns his head around and spots the remains of an old man covered in ash.
Teuchi: You did a number on him. If they were so bad, how'd you get him so quickly?
Teuche: The only way to match darkness, is with darkness that surpasses them.
Teuchi: Sounds deep. Too deep. Deep enough that Adele is probably rolling in it.
•Flashback end
Teuchi returns back to reality and realizes what he has to do.
Teuchi: Are we sure we can't settle this in a civilized manner?
Teuche uses Ramen Kunai and throws them with menacing speed towards Teuchi.
Teuchi pivots and with a slight movement of his neck, dodges the Ramenai.
Teuche: Does that answer your question
Teuchi: Yes. It does.
Teuchi uses Ramen Clone Feint and appears instantly behind Teuche. Teuchi activates Ramenkiri and swiftly moves his arm towards Teuche.
Teuche side steps, but Teuchi is able to graze him on the bottom of his rib.
Teuche: Argh! Son of a *****! I'll skin you and spread alcohol all over you-you *****.
Teuchi smirks.
Teuchi: Someone's a bit irate. Did I accidentally take your candy?
Teuche growls and charges towards Teuchi with a Ramenai. Teuchi grabs his own Ramenai and they clash. A barrage of swings from both sides leave them with open wounds covering their bodies from head to toe.
Teuche: You put up a better fight than last time, little kid. Dad had to run just to save your ass.
Teuchi: And dad just had to use his finger to b1tch slap you into oblivion.
The same facial expression a few minutes ago had appeared on Teuche's face again.
Teuchi: Hit a nerve, did I?
Teuche takes out Ramen Shuriken and, with a swift movement of his wrist, sends them flying in Teuchi's direction. Handseals performed by Teuchi at light speed activates Mud Wall: Ramen Style.
The Shurikens are deflected, and Teuchi throws Ramen Smoke Bombs to seal his presence.
•Flashback
Teuche: Come out, come out, wherever you are. C'mon, I won't hurt you.
Teuche spots a slight movement in the nearby bush, and sprints.
Teuchi: Oh, crap!
Teuchi turns and stumbles, but quickly gets up and runs toward a cliff northeast of him.
Teuche: Come back here, you little runt.
Teuchi nears the cliff, and does a little squat. He jumps and turns his body in midair as he descends towards the sea.
Teuche does the same, and jumps off the cliff.
•Flashback End
Teuche: Another one of your little tricks again? Come out! I have no time for measly little games made for toddlers. Act like a man.
Teuchi: Sure thing.
From the remnants left from the Ramen Smoke Bomb, Teuchi comes out and has a Ramengan Shuriken in his hand.
Teuche sees this, and quickly activates Ramendori to counter.
The two brothers start to run on air and collide.
A massive explosion erupts from the collision. Trees are taken from the roots. Mountains around are blown to pieces. The explosion can be seen all the way from the other side of Earth. The explosion continuously grows and grows until a massive crater is left. Nearby towns are destroyed, and no living being can be seen in sight.
Their entire body aches. Blood is pouring out from every limb. Teuchi's white outfit is completely covered with blood.
Teuche: Brother. This is getting tiresome. We shall end this.
Teuchi: Yes, we shall.
Teuche and Teuchi spread their feet apart, and take on a stance, where their feet are shoulder width apart and their hands are clasped together. They stare intently at each other. They open their eyes and activate Ramen Tomoe Rinnegan. Handseals Ox>Rabbit>Dog are performed and Ramenra Tensei is activated. Rocks are sent flying towards the two cores.The gravitation pull is strong enough to pull everything around it, including the two brothers. Both of them use their Ramenkyou Sharingan's Kekkei Genkai to travel into their Ramen dimension.
Teuche: A great place to end it.
Teuchi: Yes. Quite.
They both use Ramen Snipe, essentially countering the other. Ramenteratsu is used by Teuchi, setting Teuche on fire, but Teuche reacts quickly, and uses Ramen Subtitution.
Teuchi: Nice reflexes. A lot faster when there aren't any women around.
The two activate SusaRamen. They swing their swords and clash, just like they did with their physical forms. The vibrations that came from the clash shook their dimension's earth. Teuchi's SusaRamen moves his ethereal hand for a right hook. The hook lands and cracks the side of Teuche's SusaRamen. Teuche uses an oversized Ramenkiri to pierce Teuchi's SusaRamen.
Teuchi performs SusaRamen Explosion and blows both of their SusaRamens to oblivion.
Both are left exhausted.
Teuche: You're such a pain.
Teuchi: The feeling is mutual.
They head towards each other, starting a Taijutsu battle that is similar to Kakashi and Obito's battle. Swings and kicks from both sides leave them bruised. A final Jutsu is performed by Teuchi, the Ramengan, and for Teuche, the Ramenkiri.
Both: LET'S FINISH THIS!
They lower their heads and make their fists collide.
Chapters 5-10 written by: Migster257
Chapter 1 Awakening•
"The sky lit up with fireworks as it started raining, it was a sight to behold as Madara had accomplished the IT"
Madara: Yes I have accomplished true peace! Now I will become a god!
"In a mountainside valley slept a God. As the words reached his ears he opened his eyes letting the world see his Ramengan. And in the blink of an eye had dissapeared"
Madara: There's is no one left to stop my dream, I am the savior!
"As madara went to walk away he felt the presence of a true god, the air filled with storms and the ground started breaking apart"
Lord Teuchi: madara I see you have done the forsaken. I will have to stop you! and put naruto and sasuke in a position where it will look as if they defeated you.
Madara: (laughs" who do you thin----
"Being cut off from speaking madara had fallen and was defeated by lord Teuchi"
Lord Teuchi: I now have to awaken these fodder's and make it look like they won.
Chapter 2 True God•
"As Lord Teuchi had just finished defeating madara by walking past him, he thought of a way to make it seem like naruto and sasuke had won. But wait he had a better idea.
Lord Teuchi: I know! I'll make it seems as black zetsu backstabs madara! To return kaguya. But that means I'll have to give the sage power to allow naruto and sasuke to seal her!
"Teuchi said the following- Ramen Rinne. As he said it the the sage was revived before him, lord Teuchi gave him power and gave him an artificial memory"
Lord Teuchi: now go my fodder, and make it seem real!
"As lord Teuchi was returning to his sleep, he had an even better idea. He would set in motion a plan to show the world the meaning of true ramen!
Lord Teuchi: I will show this world my teachings!
"As lord Teuchi was ready to set out a man appeared before him! Who could oppose lord Teuchi? None other then Willy the god of rice!
Willy: I see you have become a god Teuchi, but it's time for me to stop you and overcome this world with rice!
Lord Teuchi: do you truly believe you can stop me? I will solo you in style!
"Lord Teuchi had used his rinnegan to teleport to willy as he appeared before him, he unleashed Ramensengan. And willy answered with RiceDori"
Chapter 3: Despair
"The ground broke apart, the tides rose, tornadoes appeared and rained started pouring as Two gods faced off against each other"
Lord Teuchi: Willy you truly are worthy of being considered a rival! You have survived every attack I have used up until now!
Willy: It's great to hear the praise from you! I must say the same for you, but I will not allow you to survive much longer!
Lord Teuchi: show me your power willy! I still have much to give! I will teach my ways to the world!
"As lord Teuchi finished speaking he put his hands together and used "Chinra Ramen"
Willy: what is this? Do you plan on taking me with you?
Lord Teuchi: No. I'm going to seal you and then erase you from existence! This world will forget about rice!
Willy: I see, (closes his eyes and smiles) I will unleash my power now!
"Willy had brung forth "Perfect Rice" a collosal armor made of The finest Rice in existence! The perfect defense! And as he swung his sword, Lord Teuchi's sealing technique had been broken!
Willy: This is the power of a god Teuchi! I will finish this now!
Chapter 4: Breakdown
"As willy had used his "PR" he went to attack Teuchi, with almost no chance of escape, Teuchi Revealed His Ramengan(The eyes of a God)"
"And after showing his eyes he used Rimin(ramen Lightning) as he put his hand up, he then brought down as if guiding it! And Rimin hit willy's "PR"
"After the dust had settled, in the floor missing both arms and legs layed Willy in the floor gushing blood"
Lord Teuchi: I told you I would not be defeated! I will set this world in motion and fix it my own way
Willy: (Smiling) I..... I..... I truly believe you can lord Teuchi, however there is one more opponent who will be here shortly! His name is Teuche! Yes your older brother is headed here now! I believe you can stop him now more then ever! Please Teuchi save this world!
"With a shocked look on his face, Teuchi took a knee"
Lord Teuchi: you have to be joking right willy? How can Teuche be alive? Father sacrificed himself to stop him! This isn't possible!
Willy: it's the truth Teuchi! I'm sorry but I must be leaving now! I can't hold on to my life force any longer! Farewell Teuchi.
Lord Teuchi: How? How is this possib-
"Unknown: huh? Wait is that you Teuchi? It is isn't it? HAHAHAHA what a surprise!
Lord Teuchi: (with a shocked look) it can't be! How is this possible?
Chapter 5: Emergence
Teuchi: Teuche! You...you're...back
*Teuchi's facial expression is one filled with awe*
But...but...how? Father killed you! I saw it with my own eyes-These eyes only see the truth!
Teuche: Oh, how naive you are, little brother-as you've always been.
A sudden realization dawns upon Teuchi. The fate of the world rested on his hands. A single mistake could cost the fate of humanity, and everything anyone has ever known will be turned to dust.
*Teuchi closes his eyes and lifts his head towards the sky
•Flashback
Teuche: Teuchi, Teuchi, come play with me!
Teuchi, with a smile on his face, sprints towards his brother, accidentally kicking sand towards near bystanders.
Teuchi: What do you want to play-what do you want to play-what do you want to pla-
Teuche: Hmmm... Maybe we can play hide and seek?
Teuchi: Let's play-let's play-let's play-let's play
Teuchi turns around and lifts his arm toward his eyes to cover them.
Teuche swiftly runs the other direction, heading into a nearby alleyway.
Teuchi: Four. Three. Two. One-Ready or not, here I come!
Before Teuchi could move, he feels a hand on his shoulder. The touch was firm, and it had a certain warmth that felt nice. He spins his head and sees a tall man looming over him.
Teuchi: Hi, mister. What do you want?
The stranger remains silent and just stares at Teuchi. His eyes, cold as ice, were staring straight into Teuchi's soul. A chill went down his spine.
Teuchi: Mister, your hand-i-it-it's hurting me.
Teuchi spots a shadow through the corner of his eye. He could feel an immense heat touch his temple, and he blacked out.
Chapter 6: Live
•Flashback Continuation
An immense pain on his temple kept bothering Teuchi. Why was everything so... Black. No... It was-Darker than black.
*cue Darker than Black theme song*
Teuchi: Wha-what's that? It-It's a dim light. It's pretty.
Teuchi slowly moves towards the light. A faint voice could be heard echoing through the darkness surrounding him.
The light source becomes brighter and brighter, until a silhouette could be seen. Teuchi mumbles.
Teuchi:Who, who's there?
Teuche: ARE YOU OKAY? I'm-so-sorry-I-hit-you-when-I-was-trying-to-hit-the-*******-
Teuchi:Slow down. You're making my headache worse. What happened?
Teuche: That-that guy, he's from a clan bred from hatred.
Teuchi: Sounds like some stupid manga based off that plot. Probably has a stupid name that rhymes with "Kankuto"
Teuche: Now's not the time for jokes. The Uchiha clan is not to be messed with.
Teuchi: Where is he now then?
Teuche: His charred corpse is over there
Teuchi turns his head around and spots the remains of an old man covered in ash.
Teuchi: You did a number on him. If they were so bad, how'd you get him so quickly?
Teuche: The only way to match darkness, is with darkness that surpasses them.
Teuchi: Sounds deep. Too deep. Deep enough that Adele is probably rolling in it.
•Flashback end
Teuchi returns back to reality and realizes what he has to do.
Teuchi: Are we sure we can't settle this in a civilized manner?
Teuche uses Ramen Kunai and throws them with menacing speed towards Teuchi.
Teuchi pivots and with a slight movement of his neck, dodges the Ramenai.
Teuche: Does that answer your question
Teuchi: Yes. It does.
Teuchi uses Ramen Clone Feint and appears instantly behind Teuche. Teuchi activates Ramenkiri and swiftly moves his arm towards Teuche.
Chapter 7: Aftermath
Teuche side steps, but Teuchi is able to graze him on the bottom of his rib.
Teuche: Argh! Son of a *****! I'll skin you and spread alcohol all over you-you *****.
Teuchi smirks.
Teuchi: Someone's a bit irate. Did I accidentally take your candy?
Teuche growls and charges towards Teuchi with a Ramenai. Teuchi grabs his own Ramenai and they clash. A barrage of swings from both sides leave them with open wounds covering their bodies from head to toe.
Teuche: You put up a better fight than last time, little kid. Dad had to run just to save your ass.
Teuchi: And dad just had to use his finger to b1tch slap you into oblivion.
The same facial expression a few minutes ago had appeared on Teuche's face again.
Teuchi: Hit a nerve, did I?
Teuche takes out Ramen Shuriken and, with a swift movement of his wrist, sends them flying in Teuchi's direction. Handseals performed by Teuchi at light speed activates Mud Wall: Ramen Style.
The Shurikens are deflected, and Teuchi throws Ramen Smoke Bombs to seal his presence.
•Flashback
Teuche: Come out, come out, wherever you are. C'mon, I won't hurt you.
Teuche spots a slight movement in the nearby bush, and sprints.
Teuchi: Oh, crap!
Teuchi turns and stumbles, but quickly gets up and runs toward a cliff northeast of him.
Teuche: Come back here, you little runt.
Teuchi nears the cliff, and does a little squat. He jumps and turns his body in midair as he descends towards the sea.
Teuche does the same, and jumps off the cliff.
•Flashback End
Teuche: Another one of your little tricks again? Come out! I have no time for measly little games made for toddlers. Act like a man.
Teuchi: Sure thing.
From the remnants left from the Ramen Smoke Bomb, Teuchi comes out and has a Ramengan Shuriken in his hand.
Teuche sees this, and quickly activates Ramendori to counter.
The two brothers start to run on air and collide.
A massive explosion erupts from the collision. Trees are taken from the roots. Mountains around are blown to pieces. The explosion can be seen all the way from the other side of Earth. The explosion continuously grows and grows until a massive crater is left. Nearby towns are destroyed, and no living being can be seen in sight.
Chapter 8: Final Battle
Their entire body aches. Blood is pouring out from every limb. Teuchi's white outfit is completely covered with blood.
Teuche: Brother. This is getting tiresome. We shall end this.
Teuchi: Yes, we shall.
Teuche and Teuchi spread their feet apart, and take on a stance, where their feet are shoulder width apart and their hands are clasped together. They stare intently at each other. They open their eyes and activate Ramen Tomoe Rinnegan. Handseals Ox>Rabbit>Dog are performed and Ramenra Tensei is activated. Rocks are sent flying towards the two cores.The gravitation pull is strong enough to pull everything around it, including the two brothers. Both of them use their Ramenkyou Sharingan's Kekkei Genkai to travel into their Ramen dimension.
Teuche: A great place to end it.
Teuchi: Yes. Quite.
They both use Ramen Snipe, essentially countering the other. Ramenteratsu is used by Teuchi, setting Teuche on fire, but Teuche reacts quickly, and uses Ramen Subtitution.
Teuchi: Nice reflexes. A lot faster when there aren't any women around.
The two activate SusaRamen. They swing their swords and clash, just like they did with their physical forms. The vibrations that came from the clash shook their dimension's earth. Teuchi's SusaRamen moves his ethereal hand for a right hook. The hook lands and cracks the side of Teuche's SusaRamen. Teuche uses an oversized Ramenkiri to pierce Teuchi's SusaRamen.
Teuchi performs SusaRamen Explosion and blows both of their SusaRamens to oblivion.
Both are left exhausted.
Teuche: You're such a pain.
Teuchi: The feeling is mutual.
They head towards each other, starting a Taijutsu battle that is similar to Kakashi and Obito's battle. Swings and kicks from both sides leave them bruised. A final Jutsu is performed by Teuchi, the Ramengan, and for Teuche, the Ramenkiri.
Both: LET'S FINISH THIS!
They lower their heads and make their fists collide.
Sneak Peek to finale:
*blood dripping from his mouth
and it seems like your choices led you to defeat me
Teuche uses Ramenui and aims it at Teuchi
regret anything
strangle the old hag to death
A voice that resembled that of a woman's spoke
All Teuchi felt was a breeze, then everything went black.
In the blink of an eye, she was gone *
Chapters get released on Christmas Eve. Be ready.
*blood dripping from his mouth
and it seems like your choices led you to defeat me
Teuche uses Ramenui and aims it at Teuchi
regret anything
strangle the old hag to death
A voice that resembled that of a woman's spoke
All Teuchi felt was a breeze, then everything went black.
In the blink of an eye, she was gone *
Chapters get released on Christmas Eve. Be ready.
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