The Unknown Side: Sad Younger Years (Book one)

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I have eight chapters for this story done. However, I have it temporarily on hold so I can get ll the other story's that I am working on to chapter eight.

You see, I am on wattpad.com. A website for you to read storys that authors can post their unpublished on. I am working on...lets see...three storys on my own, &. And another one that I am workin on with a friend(another Naruto Fan Fiction). not to mention another one I am planning on starting later today, and I have ideas for two more besides that. 'XD
Soemtimes I hate my creativity and lack of time... 'XD heh...heh...heh...

Aaaaaaanyways...On wattpad, this is the descripton that I posted for "The Unknown Side: Sad younger years(book one)"


“Sasuke-Kun?” Kome said
“Yeah?”
“Promise you you'll always treat me like you do now. Just like your best friend?”
“I Promise.”
“Thank you, Sasuke-Kun”


Little does Sasuke Uchiha or Kome Uchi know that that all if about to change. What makes is change? When Itachi murders the Uchiha clan, Sasuke finds out that Kome knew he was going to do it, but she did not do a thing about it. Becuase of it Sasuke cats her out of his life saying "Get the hell out of my life! I never want to see you again! IF I EVER SEE YOU AGAIN I'LL KILL YOU! ”
Five years later, a mysterious girl named Yuri attends the academy. The whole class has no clue what to make of her. Why does she seem so protective of Sasuke? Why is she so nice to him, helping him with everything she can? What did Sasuke ever do for her?




Oh, this story is rated PG 13 for mild laguage by the way. =-) (as far as i can remember, there are onlt 1-2 cuss words to far...but it will for sure increase as the characters get older... *shrugs*)

I'm posting next chapter next. =-D
 
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(This is the prolouge, but I really shoudl change it to chapter one...heh...)

Prolouge

A young Sasuke Uchiha Was walking home from Konoha's ninja academy when He heard shouts he hind him. He looked back and saw the girls about his age.
In front, screaming in terror is a girl with short black hair, her eyes are like a very pale purple. Sasuke recognized her from his ninja tools class, where they learn how to use kunai, pills and such, and he remembers that she is very shy, and lacks self-confidence. Her eyes are wide open as she runs screaming from the second girl.
The second girl is Laughing as hard as she can, running after the screaming girl. She has long black hair that goes down to about her waist, her eyes are like, Sasukes, black as could be. She has her right arm stretched out, with a fist made, except the fist has a small hole in the middle, like she holding something, however. There is nothing there. Sasuke recognizes her from his Taijustu class, he remembers that she always breaks records in how fast she can get people down, however, she always does it in unusual ways, or ways that no one else thinks of, like, no joke, playing leap frog with her opponent to distract/confuse him/her, then she trips him/her, and sits on the legs so the person cannot get up.. She keeps on laughing as she chases the shy girl.
The third and final girl, Sasuke recognizes as Ino Yamanaka. She has pretty blue eyes, and short blonde hair. She is Running after the laughing girl yelling, “Kome! STOP! Leave poor Hinata alone! WHAT ON EARTH ARE YOU DOING THIS TIME? Oh, Jeez, I thought she's your best friend!” Ino yelled, getting rather pissed.
“Snakes! And she is my best friend!” Kome, the laughing girl yelled back.
Ino Face-palmed while still running.
Ino, sasuke remembered, is in his ninjustu class, where they learn how to do simple ninjustu, but will learn more complex ones as they progress.

Suddenly, Hinata slipped and fell flat on her back. “Yoi! Ow wow wow wow wow!” She shouted.
“Hinata!” Kome and Ino shouted at the same time, running to catch up to Hinata. Hinata had slipped right in front of where sasuke had stopped to watch, so now they are all there next to sasuke.
“You ok? Sorry for chasing you with the snakes, your just sooooooooo vunerable!” Kome said, chuckleing.
Hinata suddenly slapped Kome upside the head. “Thats for the snakes!” she shouted, then shuddered. “Kome...You know I hate those things!”
Ino glared at Kome “She knows.”
Kome nodded happily. “Yup!” She then turned around to see who was standing behind her. “Oh! Hey sasuke. Nice job taking down Naruto in class today, that sure pissed him off.” Kome laughed.
“Um...Thanks.” Sasuke said, scratching the back of his head. “Dang! I don't even know this girl...and she talking to me!” He thought.
Ino Stood up and smiled nicely at Sasuke. “Heeeeeeeey sasuke!” she said in a flirty tone. Kome kicked her in the shin, making her fall.
“DANG KOME! What was that for?” she yelled.
Kome glared at her. “For crying out loud cuz, leave the poor boy alone, he has enough girls starting to like him, since he, frankly, is cute, and he's getting really good in all his classes. So back off! Ya know you gotta let him breathe, right?” Kome asked, sending a mental message to Ino.
“Erg! Stay outta my head!” Ino said, getting really mad and standing up.
Sasuke backed a few steps away. “Wha?!?” he exclaimed.
“Oh!” exclaimed Hinata, feeling better. “Ino, Sasuke does not know Kome really at all...” she said, going back into her shell.
“Oh yeah!” Ino said “Whoops!” she laughed. “Sasuke, This is Kome Uchi, Shes my Cousin.”
Sasuke had a delayed answer. His eyes narrowed. “Uchi?” He growled “An Uchi?”
“Oh snap....your two clans have a really bad rivalry going on , don't you?” Hinata asked.
Kome smiled and nodded. “Hey, I don't care! I've met Itachi Uchiha, and were friends! Its just stupid gown up stuff going on.” Kome said half to Sasuke, and half to Hinata. “Have you ever even met an Uchi, Sasuke?” Asked Kome.
“Well...N-no...” Sasuke admitted.
“Then why don't you start with me?” she asked.
“Well...” Sasuke said, hesitant.
“Oh c'mon Sasuke! Once you know her Kome's really nice!” Ino said, getting impatient.
Hinata nodded in agreement.
“Well...but what if my dad finds out? He hates the Uchi's!” Sasuke said.
“Now your just making excuses.” Kome said, raising an eye brow.
Sasuke got scared, and backed away more.
Ino, Hinata, and Kome laughed.
“If you will at least talk to me during lunch tomorrow, I'll explain to you how I know that.”
“Fine!” Sasuke snapped pouting.
Kome waved “Bye now, Sasuke! I got to get going now, I'm getting hungry.” She ran off. Hinata followed her, since they both live in the same area.
Ino waved to them. “Bye!” She turned to sasuke. “Bye Sasuke! I better go too.” Ino ran off in a different direction than Kome and Hinata.
Sasuke started to walk home. He smiled.
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Here's how to pronounce names that you might not know how to pronounce from this story.

How to pronounce:
Kome- com-ee
Hinata- Hin-at-ah
Ino- Ee-no
Sasuke- Sas-kaye
Uchiha- oo-chee-ha
Uchi- oo-chee
Konoha- Ko-no-ha
Taijustu-Tie-jist-u
Genjustu- Gen-jist-u
Yananaka- Yam-an-ak-ah
Naruto- Nar-u-to
Itachi- It-ach-ee
 

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Is this All? Or is this just a preview of the story? Also, the story was great in all, but it needs more detail or extra to make the story, IDK, Pop! If it was more, I would probably read it and if it continue like this, I would probably not read any more at all. Sorry, but it's the truth. +Reps though and good luck on future stories.

Edited: Nevermind, was reding the first one. I look dumb. xd

It's like a "Sasuke Love Story"...... Mmmmm. Not really something am interested in, but it did seem nice to read in all. If the story was to progress and had some fighting scenes than I would reconsider, but I don't think so. Sorry. Great story (Prologue) and good luck on future stories.
 
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Is this All? Or is this just a preview of the story? Also, the story was great in all, but it needs more detail or extra to make the story, IDK, Pop! If it was more, I would probably read it and if it continue like this, I would probably not read any more at all. Sorry, but it's the truth. +Reps though and good luck on future stories.

Edited: Nevermind, was reding the first one. I look dumb. xd

It's like a "Sasuke Love Story"...... Mmmmm. Not really something am interested in, but it did seem nice to read in all. If the story was to progress and had some fighting scenes than I would reconsider, but I don't think so. Sorry. Great story (Prologue) and good luck on future stories.
I appreciate you opinion, but Im just saying that you should not judge storys so quickly.

Yes, Kome and Sasuke will evetually get together, but there is more than that. Like right now in the story, I have gotten to the point that I wanted and I fast forwarded it when they are 12 years old and are about to graguate the academy(i take it back...they have graduated the adademy).

I a trying to keep it as close to Kishi-sama's story line as possible. I am taking key espisodes, rewatching them, and rewriting it a bit. There is love, there is fighting, but with Kome around, there WILL be funnyness. XD
 
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Chapter one

The Unknown Side: Chapter one, Kekkai Genkai's


Hinata was walking along with Kome and Ino, looking for Sasuke.
“Ya see him yet?” asked Ino.
“No...” Hinata replied.
“Diddo” said Kome
After a few more minutes of looking, Hinata finally see's Sasuke.
“There he is! Sitting on that bench!” She exclaimed.
“Oh!” Kome said as she looked.
“Nice job Hinata!” Ino shouted as she started running o Sasuke, waving. Kome want with her, to prevent her from trying to flirt with him more.
“W-wait up!” Hinata stammered.
5 minutes later
Sasuke, Hinata, Ino, and Kome all have their lunches out, and are talking while they eat.
Sasuke is keeping a steady gaze on Kome, wanting her to start.
Kome glanced up from her rice ball. “Just let me finish this ball first, then I'll tell you how I knew what you were thinking yesterday.” She said.
Kome quickly finished her rice ball and began.
“Well...I don't know where to start...There is a lot about my clan...What do you want to know? Lets just do it that way, OK?” She asked Sasuke
Sasuke nodded. “Well, first I want to know how you knew what I was thinking.” He said.
“Yeah...Sorry about that, this part of my Kekkai Genkai, it has a few parts, depending on what level ninja you are. Though baby's, naturally, do not have part of our clans kekkai genkai.”
Sasuke nodded again. “What else? That does not really answer my question.”
Kome nodded as well. “I'm getting to that.” she said.
She continued. “Well...Like you have seen, our Kekkai Genkai allows us to read minds, it also allows a select few, fairly high level ninja, to make illusions that they make real, when other can only make really convincing illusions. At the moment for me, I have trouble reading peoples minds, but I can make fairly good illusions, mostly on myself though.”
“OK, got that, anything else?” Sasuke asked
“Um...” Kome thought for a moment. “Well...There is one more thing, our kekkai genkai is called Copy for a reason.”
“They can copy other special ability’s and kekkai genkai's!!” Ino got excited and butted in.
“Not quite, thought this ability does make us one of the most powerful clans in the world, like the Uchihas.” Kome said.
Hinata nodded. “For the copy part of the kekkai genkai, either you copy the ability, with full power, for up to a week about, or your copy it on about a quarter power, and you have it for ever, and its totally random about which happens” She said to Hinata.
“You scare me now...” Sasuke said to Kome.
Ino and Kome laughed. Hinata smiled a shy smile.
“However, about every hundred and fifty years, there is one ninja from the royal family of my clan that can copy some ability’s fully, or almost fully, and have them forever. Its been about 155 years since the last one, so probably, me, or one of my older, or even younger siblings will be that ninja.”
“Will that ninja become the leader of your clan later on? And wait...Royal family?” Sasuke asked
Ino nodded. “The Uchi clan is the only clan to ever have a royal family, answering your second question.” she said
“Answering your first question, it depends. The person will have to have a good heart, and truly care for all of the Uchi clan, even if there is a has murderer in their mist, you have to love him or her too.”
Kome said.
Sasuke raised an eyebrow. “Do you?” he asked “I mean, would you love a mass murderer?”
Kome looked at the ground. “I honestly don't know...” she murmured. “I guess it might depend who he or she has killed...I don't know...” She shrugged.
“OK...Anything else about you clan I should know?” Sasuke asked.
“Not anything I can think of...” Ino commented.
Hinata nodded in agreement with Ino. “Unless you don't know why your clans are fighting...” she said.
“You know...When I think about it...I really don't know why...” Sasuke said. “Is it OK you you to tell me, or do you even know?” he asked Kome.
“Yeah, just as long as you don't tell your parents that I did, and of course I know! I am The---ahhhhh...errrrrrrr...never mind!” Kome said, waving her hands back and forth and getting an anime sweat drop on the back of her head.
“hm?” was Sasuke's reaction, tilting his head in a questioning manner.
Ino chuckled. “Why don't you want him to know that y---” she started
Kome instantly slapper her upside the head.
“DAG NA B IT!!! I don't want him to treat me like others do!! OK?!?!” she shouted at Ino.
Now it was Ino's turn to wave her hands and get a sweat drop. “OK, OK, OK!!” She said back.
“Any way,” Kome continued. “Both of our clans did something to bug the other, so I am not saying that the blame is on just your clan, or just my clan, but it is both of our clans faults that the heads are both being kinda hotheaded, so they cannot settle it nicely.”
“So what did my clan do?” Sasuke asked.
“Your clan stole a secret scroll from my clan.” Kome said.
“Why? Whats so important about the scroll?” Sasuke asked, puzzled.
“To get back at my clan for what we did, and the scroll summons any different creatures when we need them, secrete creatures, and I cannot tell you what, even I only know one.”
“What was that? What did your clan do?”
“We Stole something from your clan.”
“Well this is a lot of stealing...What did you steal?”
“We stole a scroll from you all.”
“Oh geez, another scroll...Now that I think about it, a few years ago, I do remember over hearing my dad and a few other members of our clan talking about a scroll that was stolen...but I decided to leave so I did not get in trouble before I heard what the scroll did, or what it is about... Do you know what it does?”
Kome nodded. “Not what it does, but what it says, It says something about the last great ninja war, and some secretes that really harmed my clan, and almost drove us to extinction...”
“wow...Oh yeah! You guys stole it to find out how they did those things, so you all could defend your self's if it happened again?”
Kome nodded again. “We only stole it though, after your father had refused us borrowing it from him for just about a month several times.”
“Why didn’t he let you have it?”
“Because, I think, it had some stuff about the Uchi in it that your clan does not want us to know that they know...”
“Do you know what that is?”
“Nope, I wish I did though, the more I find out about all this stuff, the more I can hopefully help solve all this stupid stuff...”
Just then the bell to go back to class rang. Kome, Sasuke, Hinata, and Ino all picked up their stuff and started to head to class.
“See you later Sasuke!” Kome and Ino waved as they headed off to their ninja tools class.
Hinata want to her Ninjistu class, and Sasuke went off to his History class.
After school
“Hey, talking about Kekkai Genkai's at lunch made me wonder, what are your two kekkai genkai's, Hinata, Ino?” Sasuke asked as they all walked home.
“I don't really have one.” Ino admitted as the shrugged.
“What about you Hinata?” Sasuke asked .
“Oh, M-mine, Mine is the Byakugan of c-course.” Hinata responded
“What does that do?” Sasuke asked
“I-it gives x-ray vision, and it lets me see the chakra network system. It also sometimes lets us Hyugas see through genjustu.”
“Thats cool. Does it do anything else?”
“Um...N-no. I don't think so.”
“Still cool.” Sasuke smiled.
Hinata smiled shyly back.
Soon it was time for them all to part ways.
“Will we see you tomarrow?” Kome questioned sasuke.
Sasuke smiled and nodded happily.
Hinata smiled, as did Ino.
“Oh, and sasuke?”
“Hm? Yeah Kome?”
“You wanna see an example of my genjustu?”
Sasuke shrugged. “Why not”
Kome disappeared in a puff of smoke. When she came out, she looked different. She looked a bit older, she had short blue hair, a white kimino with little purple fish on it, a yellow obi, and an ambu cat mask.
“WOAH!” Sasuke exclaimed.
After a few more moments of talking they all parted.

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How to Pronounce:
Kekai genkai: keke gen-kai
chakra: chak-ra
kimino: Keem-in-no
obi: oh-bee
 
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Chapter thee, the prank

The Unknown Side: Chapter 2, The prank

Ino looked nervously around. “Good...No Kome in sight!” she though to herself. “There he is!” She exclaimed as she saw Sasuke walk out of the academy to go eat his lunch. She walked up to him and smiled big. “Heeeeeeeeey sasuke! Wha'cha doin'?” She asked.
Sasuke looked to see who was talking. “Oh! um..Hi Ino, I'm about to go eat my lunch...Wanna come?” Sasuke said. “Heh heh heh...This is gonna be awesome!” He said to in his head.
“Sure!” Ino said happily since normally sasuke try's to get away when kome is not around to keep her off of him.
5 minutes later
Sasuke and Ino are now eating when Hinata walks up. “You guys seen Kome, She's supposed to eat quickly, then help me with my taijistu...” She said.
“Nope!” Ino said happily.
Sasuke smiled. “No, not since our taijistu class.” he said. His smile getting bigger. “She doesn't suspect a thing!” he said in his head, out loud he chuckled.
“Whats so funny, Sasuke?” Ino said leaning t'words him.
Sasuke got a sweat drop and waves his hands in front of him while smiling a fake smile. “Nuthin'!” he said quickly, then looked away and started stuffing his face.
Ino was puzzled. “Well...OK, if you say so.” she said, raising an eye brow.
Then sasuke walks up, sits on the bench, and starts to eat. Ino forgets everything.
“Heeeeeeeeey, Sasuke!” she said “How are y-- Wait a minute!” she exclaimed. She then starts looking between the two sasukes. Her heart starts beating faster and she gets more and more creaped out.
Hinata's eyes get wide as she starts to back away. Slowly.
Both sasukes smile and scoot t'words Ino at the same time. Ino eyes get wide.
“You look pretty today, Ino.” They both say.
Ino passes out.
The sasukes and hinata burst out laughing.
10 minutes later
“wait..wha?” Ino says as the wakes up. She finds she had been moved top under the tree with the swing on it, the boy naruto was on the swing. One of the sasukes was talking with him. The other was talking with hinata.
“Well it sad that your so ignored, I'll be your friend if you want, just remember the prank, I don't really look like this.” The sasuke talking with naruto smiled.
Naruto smiled back happily.
Ino sat up and looked over to the other sasuke and hinata.
“That was the best prank ever!” the sasuke said.
Hinata nodded shyly and smiled.
“You did really well!” the sasuke added.
“Not as well as you and the other 'sasuke', you two were around her more.” Hinata said.
“Not really, you were around more than I was!” the sasuke argued. “The other sasuke was around the most! He did the best, you the second, me the third. Though none of it would of been possible with out any one of us.” The sasuke finished
“Oi oi oi oi!” Ino said. “So many sasukes...my...head...owch...” Ino complained, leaning back against the tree.
“Hu? Oh! Ino's awake!” hinata exclaimed.
The two sasukes and hinata, and even naruto gathered around Ino.
“Ya ok?” The sasuke who had been talking to naruto said.
Ino glared at the sasuke. “What happened? Are one of you sasukes even the real one?” she growled.
The sasuke who had been talking with hinata spoke up. “I'm the real sasuke.” he chuckled.
“Then who's this, and how do you look like sasuke?” Ino growled at the fake sasuke.
The sasuke laughed and did a hand symbol. A cloud of smoke appeared and covered him. When it cleared, Kome was there. “Got'cha!” she shouted, laughing. “Ever heard of a transformation jistu?” she asked.
Ino groaned. “I should of known...” she grumbled.
Naruto and everyone laughed at that.
“Not funny!” Ino shouted.
Hinata shook her head, disagreeing with Ino.
The real Sasuke kept right on laughing.
Kome started to roll on the ground, clutching her sides that were hurting from laughing so hard.
Naruto laughed with them.
“I'm Kome Uchi, by the way.” Kome said to naruto.
Naruto nodded. “Neat name, what does it mean?” he asked.
Kome thought for a moment, then shrugged. “I dunno.” she said with a big smile.
Everyone chuckled at that, excluding Ino of course.
Then Iruka came over “What happened here, why were you are laughing so hard? Why does Ino look so mad?” he asked them all.
That comment made everyone think of the prank, Kome had explained the prank to naruto, and they all burst out laughing.
“WE PRANKED INO!” Kome shouted.
At that they all laughed even harder.
Ino Humphed, got up and walked away.

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How to pronounce:
Naruto- nar-u-toIruka- ear-u-ka
 
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