The United!: The Blonde Hero!

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???: Don't you dare place another hand on that kid!!!

The stranger jumps down the building on to the ground, causing a tidal of wind to expand the area. Ryoksu stands awe struck with the beast behind him and the stranger in front of him.

???: *looks at Ryoksu with a funny curious look* What did you expect Superman?
Hellhound: Its them!! *snarls at the stranger* Bastards......

Ryoksu runs to the stranger side but still has caution since he doesn't know who he is neither.

???: *looks at Ryoksu and back at the beast smirking* Relax....it'll be over before you can say "Mumble berry Google spurts"
Beast and Ryoksu: What?!
???: *looks at both* Never mind.....*he gets pulled surprisingly pulled by the beast but he is calm.*
Beast: Your mine!!!! *he puts his fingers together and it forms a black spear with weird letters around it*

???: Shit!! *he jumps and puts both feet on the blade causing the beast to get confused* Your mine! *he takes out a shiny gun with weird letters as well and points it to his head and pulls the trigger*

A loud rumbling is heard and before the trigger is pulled the beast gets dragged down to the earth, it is encircled by fiery flames and it yells in pain. The trigger gets pulled and the gun lets out a bright blast that can be seen from the outskirts of the city. It leaves a giant crater on the ground and a black burned circle is seen on the ground.

Ryoksu: *is seen on the ground passed out*...........
???: *puts away gun inside his coat* Dam! I did not see this coming. *he bends down to look at Ryoksu and analyzes him* Why in the hell did it choose you? Well time for the questions. *he taps Ryoksu in the head*
Ryoksu: *sits up and breathes like he's just been dragged from drowning in the water* -coughs and speaks with a sore throat- What the hell was that! And who the hell are you?
???: Watch it with the word there buddy. Hasn't your father told you about that word?
Ryoksu: My fath-wait how did you know that?
???: I know more about you than you do yourself.
Ryoksu: *stands up frightened, searches pockets* Dm, I don't have my pepper spray. What is it you want?
???: Listen your head is in overload right now, I can understand. Now lets go off to bed.
Ryoksu: No get away from me.....*backs away and runs, as he's running the stranger reappears in front of him*
???: *places index finger and middle finger on his forehead* Let there be light!

Ryoksu is gone with a blink of an eye. The stranger is alone in the alley.

???: At least that homework was easy. *reaches into phone and opens it* Yeah I saved him.....yeah I know "you told me so' just in time like you said.......alright then you get the twenty bucks, listen I'm going over there right now.....later...I don't want to say that....dude that’s gay......yeah I know were blood you never let me forget it.......fine........I love you to. *hangs up* Sometimes I wonder if we really are related. *disappears into the light*


That same night at exactly 1:00 am -Warehouse.

The same guy that saved Ryoksu enters the door and 4 other guys are seen waiting for him. Some are sitting and some are standing.

???: Dude talk about a **** fest, you couldn't invite any of the girls?

All the men have different colored hair. They all of the same suits as the blonde guy has. A red haired guy steps up and speaks.

???: Roku your late!
Roku: Sorry, I went to put a barrier on the house....so no hellhound is going to creep up on that place.
Ragnaroc: Very wise move brother, but you didn't follow protocol.
Roku: Meh, I figured the boys life was more important than bringing a hellhound to interrogate.
Ragnaroc: *goes face to face* Hm, well next time you do a foolish move like that, I won't be on the other end of this conversation. Now, my twenty dollars. *puts hand out*
Roku: Ugh! *goes into back pocket and pulls out two tens* Here!
Ragnaroc: Two tens? I would have expected a 20 out of you.


A green haired guy, white haired guy and a royal blue haired guy step up and speak.

Caliburn: Back to business you guys come on! You sound like two little girls.
Emperor: Roku, who's hound was it?
Roku: It was Sloth's.
Kawagiri: If my knowledge of those beasts are correct...its name was Alucard, correct?
Roku: *slaps his head* No duh dim wit....Sloth only has one Hellhound. He thinks he's a badass and thinks everyone is trash.
Ragnaroc: What was Alucard doing with the kid?
Roku: That’s what I said, the others said he was just feasting off souls but this time he had a motive or a target.
Emperor: So they finally decided to move and get the boy, huh?
Kawagiri: Yes, you are correct.
Caliburn: So what now?
Ragnaroc: Well since little Roku here was assigned personally to be the boys guardian, he will have to reside in the town and protect him of any threats and show him what his destiny truly is.
Roku: Aw, come on Rag. Its super boring here.
Emperor: Well get caught up with the new style, you look old enough to join school, ans stay close to him.
Kawagiri: And don't forget to get along!
Ragnaroc: Now you got it?
Roku: Yes Mr. Team Captain!

They all back up.

Ragnaroc: You need anything, I'm just a call away.
Emperor: Good luck Roku.
Kawagiri: Don't mess up.
Caliburn: Please don't make us come here again......see ya' on the flip side.
Caliburn, Kawagiri and Emperor: Let there be light!
Ragnaroc: Take regular baths, brush your teeth, and eat 3 square meals a day and no porn!!
Roku: Are you serious dude?

Ragnaroc laughs and snaps his fingers, disappearing in a blink of an eye.

Roku: Ugh!!! Now to apply for school.


Bright and early in the morning- 6:30 am.

*beep, beep*

Ryoksu wakes up as if he was in a nightmare.

Ryoksu: *breathing hard* Ah! thank goodness.....it was a nightmare.

He looks over to his desk and see's his homework nicely done with a happy face on them.

Ryoksu: Hm, I don't remember putting that on my paper.
Ryoksu gets up, takes a shower, changes and goes in the kitchen. His mother and father are sitting there drinking coffee and prepare to go to work. Toku is seen doing his homework.

Ryoksu: Why are you doing your homework in morning? Weren't you supposed to do it yesterday?
Toku: Yes! but someone decided it would be fun to crumple it up and write all over it.
Ryoksu: Are you accusing me of something?
Toku: Yes I am, if I find out it was you I swear I'll end you!
Tsuki: Honey, don't talk to your brother like that! Listen Ryoksu if it was you, you should apoligise.
Ryoksu-thinking-: I have been anxious to do that! too bad it wasn't me.
Suko: Son! do you want to say something?
Ryoksu: Well sorry to disappoint you but it wasn't me.
Toku: Better hope it isn't.
Ryoksu: Whatevers kid. I'm off to school.
Suko: Listen remember that your mother, me and Toku are going to visit your grandma for the weekend. You want to go?
Ryoksu: Nah, I have things to do.
Tsuki: Ok but no party's and no girls allowed in my house, understood?
Ryoksu: Yes ma'. Well see you guys on Monday then. *walks out the door*


During school -10:10 am.

Teacher: Listen everyone! Pay attention! *gets angry and pulls out whistle and blows it*

Everyone gets the teacher's attention.

Teacher: That’s better. Now as you've heard we have a new student coming in today.

Ryoksu is seen daydreaming about his "dream"

Ryoksu -thinking-: It seemed real, man that was one scary dog like thing. I need to stop watching movies man. Toku is right...."Too much Supernatural"
Teacher: Ryoksu!!!
Ryoksu: Ah!! *gets surprised* Yes maam.
Teacher: Did you hear the words that were coming out of my mouth?
Ryoksu: Um, yes, something about a new student?
Teacher: Yes, as a matter of fact here he comes.

The door opens and everyone looks. A 5'7 guy with a white t-shirt, black pants, some white vans and a cross necklace hanging from his neck. He has blonde hair and mysterious yellow eyes.

Teacher: Everyone, please welcome our new student.....
Ryoksu: *to himself* Roku?
Teacher: Roku Ukor!
Roku: Please to meet you all. *looks at Ryoksu and smiles* I think I'm going to have a splendid senior year with you guys.

Ryoksu starts to panic and his eyes open wide.

Roku: Can you show me to my seat, Mrs...*looks at schedule* Sanchez?
Teacher: Yes, well there’s a seat next to Janet over there and a seat next to Mr. Ryoksu Koshima. Pick your choice.

Ryoksu starts to tremble.

Ryoksu: Shoot! He's going to sit right next to me.

Roku immediately goes and sits next to Janet.

Roku: *flirts* Hello I'm Roku, as you can see I'm new here and I would love to have a beautiful girl like you to show me around, what do you think?
Janet: *blushes* Um, well of course your new.
Roku: Yup you bet I am. How 'bout you an me go to a movie tonight?
Janet: *keeps blushing* Um, ok. *grabs pen and writes on a paper* Here's my number and um give me a call so we can set a time.
Roku: Yeah I'l give you a call. *stands up and walks away*
Janet: Wait, where you going?
Roku: Oh sorry about that but I'm going to sit over here and catch up with an old friend. *turns to Ryoksu and sees him looking at him*

Roku snaps his fingers and the area around them changes and they are seen in the afternoon outside there house.

Ryoksu: *jaw drops* What the hell just happened?
Roku: Its time you know the secret and take charge in your destiny Ryoksu.
Ryoksu: What secret? and what about my destiny?
Roku: You'll find out but first *puts out hand and Ryoksu's necklace pops out shining brightly* we have to talk about what this is and what its for.
Ryoksu: Who the hell are you?
Roku: My name is Roku and I am part of the Syndicate, The United! *Roku snaps his fingers*

A bright light consumes him and it vanishes revealing a White Suited Roku, with his black tie, black shoes, the golden "U" as his belt buckle, and those flashing yellow eyes.

Roku: Pleased to meet you!

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No I forgot to put CH.2 on it but I'll link you the first one.

Here's the first chapter for those who want to read it:
 
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this actually seems like it may be a pretty good fanfic... heaven vs. hell: battleground Earth xd

and roku works fast on the ladies O_O
 

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this actually seems like it may be a pretty good fanfic... heaven vs. hell: battleground Earth xd

and roku works fast on the ladies O_O
Thanks, yeah thats basically where my main plot is at xd

Yes he does in fact....he'll probably get some "cutti" that night >.> xd

@Keotsu: Thanks ^^
 

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yeah nice. its coming out prety good my brother.
to the next one!! and make it good!! xd
Akiza-sensei whats to enter to xd
 

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for some reason i think that if i enter a fac fic made by him i am going to have a stupid and embarasing spot.
but wth that actualy fits me perfectly. lol
 

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yea nice...u should include some more ppl u know in it lol
Yes saves the time of making up names U_U
yeah nice. its coming out prety good my brother.
to the next one!! and make it good!! xd
Akiza-sensei whats to enter to xd
Thanks....yeah I'm always hoping you guys will think its good xd


Good job ^_^

Sidenote: man I never get into these fanfics where actual users are used -_-. xd Its always Roku and Rag
Thanks....you just gave me an idea! xd

Roku Ukor? Wtf xd

I'm a pimp :cool:
Interesting chapter
Yeah it'll be mentioned on why I put that in the next chapter ;)
Thnkas....yes you are U_U

i must be Kawagiri Irigawak :|

Scary Yamato Otamay Yracs


and you are the biggest pimp ever U_U
Lol those are funny last names....you should have put SPOILER ALERT!!! lol
 
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