The True Shinobi Part 1 (CH 1) ~Pilot~

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Takahiro, Shiori, and Katsuo make their way to the training ground
Shiori- You guys are really at this again? You just fought yesterday.
Takahiro- Were training, you know that. If we are ever going to become leaders we are going to have to keep training.
They arrive at their training ground, a small dirt field surrounded by trees on all sides. The sun shined through the trees onto the dirt.
Katsuo- You ready?
Takahiro- You know I am (Pulls out sword from behind his back)
Katsuo- (Gets hands into a fighting position)
Shiori- Ok, Get ready… Fight!
Katsuo- (Summon a shadow clone) You ready?
Takahiro-(Yells) Fire ball jutsu
The fire erupts from Takahiro’s mouth. Katsuo clearly surprised jumps to the side along with his shadow clone
Katsuo- (Grabs right hand) Chidori! (Runs at Takahiro)
Takahiro- (Starts to sign hand seals) Fire dragon flame missle (Blows a missle of fire towards Katsuo)
The fire races towards Katsuo. Unable to dodge Takahiro gets a direct hit. Takahiro expecting to see Katsuo fall from the trees, but only sees a cloud of white smoke.
Takahiro- What! Where is he? (Looks around helplessly)
Katsuo- (Grabs Takahiro legs from inside the ground. Then pulls him in all away up to his head.) Well looks like I win again Takahiro. You got to watch my shadow clone.
Takahiro- (Struggles to do anything) Damit! You always win. Come and get me out of here
Katsuo- (Pulls Takahiro out)
Shiori- (Runs over) anyone hurt?
Katsuo/Takahiro- Nope!
Takahiro- Next time ill win for sure.
Katsuo- We’ll see about that.
~Everyone walks back to the village~
Katsuo- You lost Takahiro, so you have to buy the ramen
Takahiro- Hmph (Clearly unhappy) What ever
Shiori, Katsuo, and Takahiro all go to the Ramen shop and share a night full of fun and laughters.
 
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Dave

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try to go more into detail
like insted of saying
Takahiro-(Yells) Fire ball jutsu
maybe
Takahiro- quickly forum hand sings as he inhales to produce a massive fire ball
something like that maybe? sorry im not the best at this kind of stuff
 

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it is actually pretty good:p
 

Yokima Yagame

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Nice work ,keep it up (:
 

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I think I like it :) good job :)
 
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