This is my first Fan fic so try give me constructive critisism 
Sorry if it's too long iswell btw just try bare with me ^^
Prologue
2 months ago
"Come on Akiza you can't be stuck in a castle on a day like this", I said ,"No I have to finish this paper work for my father", she replied.
"Screw your paper work, lets go watch the election for the new president of our town", ,"I'm. Not. Liss. Ning.", she replied in a cheeky manner. I focus my energy to the tips of my fingers and levitate her pen from her hand. "Stop you know we're not allowed use magic if your not a qualified mage", she said as she jumped up and grabbed her floating pen. "I know I was just practising" I replied chuckling while, slightly out of breath.
The sound of trumpets came from a distance. "Well I'm going to watch the election, are you coming or not?", I said but she continues writing.
I ran down the spiral stairs and out the door. I make my way up the empty streets the see a crowd of people standing silently in the town center with their heads pointed towards the mages council, gazing at the Chanselour who stands at the alter.
I squeeze my way through the crowd apoligizing for the bumping and shoving as I do so.
"So has it begun?", I ask Jaden as I walk to him. "Your right on time"
The trumpets stopped.
The Chanselour stood up, "I now announce the new president of Kildrum and the new leader of the mages council, Cliffard Spark!" The crowd erupted in celebration as the chanselour sits down with the others and the new president stands up shaking hands with the other candidates who try to hide there dissapointment with smiles saying, "Congrajulations".
His speech began, " I am very grateful to be the new president of this town.." he continues on with his speech. "I hope to be like that someday", I said lowering my voice, "Not unless I get there first", J replied in a playful manner. "Like that'll ever happen", I said folding my arms. "Chu' talkin 'bout boy, you ain't got no more magic than a headless chicken", ,"Oh ya.." I replied getting quicly aggitated before some person knocks me on the head with their fist saying, "Quiet down". I turned around on the assault when J picked me up, "Let me at hi.." I said aggresively before J covered my mouth. "Ok sir we will", said J attempting a happy face.
As the new president, Cliff, continued his speech it started to slowly rain and picked up rapidly. The crowd was'nt too pushed by this as it was the first election in 5 years. When the president becomes old and not fitting enough for the job he moves on to become one of the chanselours and they decide from someone who is he up in the mages council who will be the next president. The rain did'nt let up. It's been the first time it rained months.
"Something is not right", J said. "I know I got that feeling too". As the new president finishes his speech, the crowd erupts in celebration. Just then I see a figure running along the roof of the mages council, weilding two blades.
I began to shout letting everone know that there was an assassin on the roof but no-one could hear me because of the rain and shoutin in which they were doin. J noticed the assassin also, "Ulric move!" he shouted. The roar of thunder and the celebration from the crowd contributed to the assassins attempts to kill the newly appointed president.
J barged through the crowd knocking half a dozen of people to the left and then to the right trying to get to Cliffard who stands idol, vunrible too an attack while I monuvre my way throug the crowd as I'm much smaller than J. The gaurds try to stop me but I side-step my way around them while J knocks them to the floor with his immence strength. The assassin positioned himself above Cliffard and jumped.
I try concentrate my energy to the palm of my hands to push the killer out of Cliffards path but it was too late. A flash of lighteningand the assassin escaped leaving Cliffard Spark lay in his own pool of blood. Our president who had been elected only a moment ago has just been murdered before all his citizens. I was too late. I was not strong enough.
A fog of silence engulfed the area.
The thunder roared again and all eyes were on me and Jaden. We hear footsteps getting louder, then we see the gaurds coming for us. There is no-where to run. We are surrounded. "You've got the wrong idea" J said cautiously. The head battle-mage stepped out, "Seize them!".
Sorry if theres spelling mistakes xd
CnC I hoped you liked it
Sorry if it's too long iswell btw just try bare with me ^^
Prologue
It was a cold winters night in the land of Mohag. I was delivering a package to our new former alliance, 'The sea-men of the Red Mist'. The blizzard was getting worse and my legs were weak but I had to deliver this package as my leader, Boro, had told me that it was my most important assignment yet.
My co-couriers, Akiza, Jaden, Shune and I paced our way through the desert of snow when, suddenly, we were ambushed. A mysterious man wearing a black robe appeared out from no-where with combat skills and magic far greater than our own.
As he easily defeated us, he approached me as I lay half dead in the snow and whispered to me, "He wants you dead", and vanished into the wind. I was baffled and wondered who the hell was that man and who wants me dead and what the hell is going on!?
But little did I know this was just the beginning. The beginning of an adventure far greater than you could ever imagine.
So I'm going to tell you my story, my adventure, or my tale as I shall call it.
The tale of Ulric Nakara
My co-couriers, Akiza, Jaden, Shune and I paced our way through the desert of snow when, suddenly, we were ambushed. A mysterious man wearing a black robe appeared out from no-where with combat skills and magic far greater than our own.
As he easily defeated us, he approached me as I lay half dead in the snow and whispered to me, "He wants you dead", and vanished into the wind. I was baffled and wondered who the hell was that man and who wants me dead and what the hell is going on!?
But little did I know this was just the beginning. The beginning of an adventure far greater than you could ever imagine.
So I'm going to tell you my story, my adventure, or my tale as I shall call it.
The tale of Ulric Nakara
2 months ago
"Come on Akiza you can't be stuck in a castle on a day like this", I said ,"No I have to finish this paper work for my father", she replied.
Akiza- Akiza is a small 17 year old girl I've known since my childhood. She has short brown hair and bright blue eyes. She always wears a blue hair band that gives her a fringe with one strip of hair reaching down and gently kissing her cheek. She is one of the Chanselours daughter.
The sound of trumpets came from a distance. "Well I'm going to watch the election, are you coming or not?", I said but she continues writing.
I ran down the spiral stairs and out the door. I make my way up the empty streets the see a crowd of people standing silently in the town center with their heads pointed towards the mages council, gazing at the Chanselour who stands at the alter.
I squeeze my way through the crowd apoligizing for the bumping and shoving as I do so.
"So has it begun?", I ask Jaden as I walk to him. "Your right on time"
Jaden (J) - J is one of the most skilled mages that ever stepped foot into this town. His clothes are always too tight for him due to the collosal size of his muscles. He always wears black sunglasses and has his long hair combed back, reaching the bottom of his neck. Of all these features, his signature was his enormous battle-axe he carries on him at all times
The Chanselour stood up, "I now announce the new president of Kildrum and the new leader of the mages council, Cliffard Spark!" The crowd erupted in celebration as the chanselour sits down with the others and the new president stands up shaking hands with the other candidates who try to hide there dissapointment with smiles saying, "Congrajulations".
His speech began, " I am very grateful to be the new president of this town.." he continues on with his speech. "I hope to be like that someday", I said lowering my voice, "Not unless I get there first", J replied in a playful manner. "Like that'll ever happen", I said folding my arms. "Chu' talkin 'bout boy, you ain't got no more magic than a headless chicken", ,"Oh ya.." I replied getting quicly aggitated before some person knocks me on the head with their fist saying, "Quiet down". I turned around on the assault when J picked me up, "Let me at hi.." I said aggresively before J covered my mouth. "Ok sir we will", said J attempting a happy face.
As the new president, Cliff, continued his speech it started to slowly rain and picked up rapidly. The crowd was'nt too pushed by this as it was the first election in 5 years. When the president becomes old and not fitting enough for the job he moves on to become one of the chanselours and they decide from someone who is he up in the mages council who will be the next president. The rain did'nt let up. It's been the first time it rained months.
"Something is not right", J said. "I know I got that feeling too". As the new president finishes his speech, the crowd erupts in celebration. Just then I see a figure running along the roof of the mages council, weilding two blades.
I began to shout letting everone know that there was an assassin on the roof but no-one could hear me because of the rain and shoutin in which they were doin. J noticed the assassin also, "Ulric move!" he shouted. The roar of thunder and the celebration from the crowd contributed to the assassins attempts to kill the newly appointed president.
J barged through the crowd knocking half a dozen of people to the left and then to the right trying to get to Cliffard who stands idol, vunrible too an attack while I monuvre my way throug the crowd as I'm much smaller than J. The gaurds try to stop me but I side-step my way around them while J knocks them to the floor with his immence strength. The assassin positioned himself above Cliffard and jumped.
I try concentrate my energy to the palm of my hands to push the killer out of Cliffards path but it was too late. A flash of lighteningand the assassin escaped leaving Cliffard Spark lay in his own pool of blood. Our president who had been elected only a moment ago has just been murdered before all his citizens. I was too late. I was not strong enough.
A fog of silence engulfed the area.
The thunder roared again and all eyes were on me and Jaden. We hear footsteps getting louder, then we see the gaurds coming for us. There is no-where to run. We are surrounded. "You've got the wrong idea" J said cautiously. The head battle-mage stepped out, "Seize them!".
Sorry if theres spelling mistakes xd
CnC I hoped you liked it
