NARUTOS Rinnegan
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Chapter 1:
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One important factor in this chapter is that Yasuma and Yasume get deeply hurt when they are called freaks, outcasts, and etc… And they react differently every time to those words.
New Character: Nagi: He is the genius of his class. He is the #1 graduate for the class. He knows chunin level fire justsu
Chapter 3
*Scene begins in Yasume’s and Yasuma’s cave
Yasuma: Yasumeeeee, Wake UUUUUp! We can’t be late to school today. Don’t you want to find out who our sensei is?
Yasume whispers to himself: Shut Up, we have like a half hour to get ready,
*Yasuma creeps up behind him: What did you say
Yasume creeped out: N…Nothing
Yasuma: Then get up
*Yasume gets up and Yasuma leaves for school
After 20 minutes Yasume heads for school, while going to school 3 genin come out from the trees and pick on Yasume
Genin #1: Hey Yasume, where’s your sister
Yasume: At school, why?
Genin #2: Nothing, We just heard you were a pretty good fighter
Yasume: So
Genin #3: Let’s fight
Yasume: This isn’t fair
Genin #2: Why cause there’s 3 of us and 1 of you
Yasume: No, because I'm better than you guys
The genins not liking his attitude attack Yasume at the same time
Yasume then jumps up into the air and the genins hit each other
Yasume: Whats wrong, I thought there where 3 of you
Genin #1 angry throws a smoke bomb
All the genins attack Yasume
Yasume gets angry.
One wing comes on his left side of his back and blows away the smoke
The next wing comes and now both wings cut the trees around them and
tears the genins clothes and blows them away
All the genins at once: FREAK!
*The genin run away
*Yasume’s eyes begin to well up as tears begin streaming down his face. Then
he feels the necklace his sister gave him and calms down. The wings
disappear and he starts going to school.\
*Yasume arrives to school
Yasuma: Where were you
Yasume: …
*Yasuma sees Yasume’s eyes puffy and the back of his shoirt ripped
Yasuma: Don’t tell me you used your wings
Yasume: … I was attacked.
Yasuma: You still shouldn’t be using them.
Yasume: So you just want me to get beat up
Yasuma: Until you learn how to control them, you shouldn’t be using the
wings… maybe our new sensei will teach us how
*There now silence in the room.
Ishoku walks in the room
Ishoku: Congratulations for all of you that have graduated
All the graduates: THANK YOU, ASHUGAKE SAMA
Ishoku: This year will be different though. I will take on my own pupils too
Everyone starts talking amongst themselves, even the chunins and jounins
Ishoku: I will take the # 1 girl student, Yasuma. The # 1 boy student Nagi
*Yasuma shrieks because Nagi is the most popular and coolest in there class
Ishoku: Last but not least, the worst graduate, Yasume (if Ishoku really
dotes on the twins, would he really call Yasume the worst?)
*Everyone lauphs at Yasume for being the worst, but Yasume keeps calm
because of his sister’s necklace.
Ishoku settles them down
Ishoku: The rest of you will be assigned by my sister by the same order as I
was assigned mine.
Ishuka: Yes nii-san (I’m pretty sure onee-san means older sister.)
*Ishoku leaves with Yasuma, Nagi, and Yasume
Chapter End
I think this one was longer
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Chapter 2:
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One important factor in this chapter is that Yasuma and Yasume get deeply hurt when they are called freaks, outcasts, and etc… And they react differently every time to those words.
New Character: Nagi: He is the genius of his class. He is the #1 graduate for the class. He knows chunin level fire justsu
Chapter 3
*Scene begins in Yasume’s and Yasuma’s cave
Yasuma: Yasumeeeee, Wake UUUUUp! We can’t be late to school today. Don’t you want to find out who our sensei is?
Yasume whispers to himself: Shut Up, we have like a half hour to get ready,
*Yasuma creeps up behind him: What did you say
Yasume creeped out: N…Nothing
Yasuma: Then get up
*Yasume gets up and Yasuma leaves for school
After 20 minutes Yasume heads for school, while going to school 3 genin come out from the trees and pick on Yasume
Genin #1: Hey Yasume, where’s your sister
Yasume: At school, why?
Genin #2: Nothing, We just heard you were a pretty good fighter
Yasume: So
Genin #3: Let’s fight
Yasume: This isn’t fair
Genin #2: Why cause there’s 3 of us and 1 of you
Yasume: No, because I'm better than you guys
The genins not liking his attitude attack Yasume at the same time
Yasume then jumps up into the air and the genins hit each other
Yasume: Whats wrong, I thought there where 3 of you
Genin #1 angry throws a smoke bomb
All the genins attack Yasume
Yasume gets angry.
One wing comes on his left side of his back and blows away the smoke
The next wing comes and now both wings cut the trees around them and
tears the genins clothes and blows them away
All the genins at once: FREAK!
*The genin run away
*Yasume’s eyes begin to well up as tears begin streaming down his face. Then
he feels the necklace his sister gave him and calms down. The wings
disappear and he starts going to school.\
*Yasume arrives to school
Yasuma: Where were you
Yasume: …
*Yasuma sees Yasume’s eyes puffy and the back of his shoirt ripped
Yasuma: Don’t tell me you used your wings
Yasume: … I was attacked.
Yasuma: You still shouldn’t be using them.
Yasume: So you just want me to get beat up
Yasuma: Until you learn how to control them, you shouldn’t be using the
wings… maybe our new sensei will teach us how
*There now silence in the room.
Ishoku walks in the room
Ishoku: Congratulations for all of you that have graduated
All the graduates: THANK YOU, ASHUGAKE SAMA
Ishoku: This year will be different though. I will take on my own pupils too
Everyone starts talking amongst themselves, even the chunins and jounins
Ishoku: I will take the # 1 girl student, Yasuma. The # 1 boy student Nagi
*Yasuma shrieks because Nagi is the most popular and coolest in there class
Ishoku: Last but not least, the worst graduate, Yasume (if Ishoku really
dotes on the twins, would he really call Yasume the worst?)
*Everyone lauphs at Yasume for being the worst, but Yasume keeps calm
because of his sister’s necklace.
Ishoku settles them down
Ishoku: The rest of you will be assigned by my sister by the same order as I
was assigned mine.
Ishuka: Yes nii-san (I’m pretty sure onee-san means older sister.)
*Ishoku leaves with Yasuma, Nagi, and Yasume
Chapter End
I think this one was longer
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