The Tale Of The Fourth "1"

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The Tales of the Fourth
" Chapter 1 : Discovering The Rasengen "



We live and die for one reason that we choose, It doesn't matter if we get it or not as long as we are fighting for it .. because in the moment we stop fighting for it, this is the moment we shall be called trash ...



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the winter came kissing summer good bye as leafs of the hidden leaf village was storming everywhere, and the weather began getting colder and colder each day ..


in one of the leafs old alleys walked an yellow haired boy with two ocean-blue eyes under the rain, he found himself starring at the side way where he saw his drunk sensei laying on the ground .


" sensei ?! .. ahh, not again " he said as he helped is sensei to stand and walk him to an chair nearby ..

" minato ?? what are u doing here ? this is an adult place ! " his sensei told him, but minato didn't reply and opened a scroll over his sensei and made the horse hand seal as his sensei vanished with it .. " i think i got to get training alone now ~_~ .. damn you sensei " as he made his way to the training field, he found an red haired girl training there on kunai throwing

" hey there, " minato said with a smile over his face but the girl stared at him then throw her kunais at him, as minato get him kunai out and stopped all her kunais then yalled at her " WHAT IN THE HELL ARE YOU DOING ? ARE YOU SOME SORT OF AN SOY HERE ??! "

the girl smiled " hmph " as she ran away,
" what is it with me today, my sensei can't help me training and this girl .. is it some sort of a dream- " thought minato but unsuspectingly jarayia appeared after him saying " if it isn't young minato "

" sensei ?? " minato asked " is that you ?!"
" yeah, so are you ready for today's training over your own jutsu ?! " asked jarayia excitingly
" my OWN jutsu ? but am i ready to make it " asked minato confusingly

" YES YOU ARE ! and don't forget that zarami made his jutsu two years ago, you got to catch up you know " answered jarayia with an smile " so what are you waiting for ?! "

" but sensei are you sure that you are not drunk now ?! " asked minato while staring over jarayia
" no, i woke up after you return me home, STOP LOOKING AT ME LIKE THAT " yalled jarayia at minato <.<

" but zarami is a fire element user and me, i use wind U_U .. i can never get defeat his jutsu " whispered minato

" NOT IF " said jarayia " not if you made it stronger, the weapon is as strong as his holder, that is what my sensei used to say "

" alright sensei i shall start over making it here and now !! " said minato proudly then realized that he don't know how" .. but how ?! >.< "

" think of the way you like it to be " said jarayia " this is a hard thing, but you are smart .. you will figure it out .. i got to go now, see you around " as he disappeared

" what the ?! sensei ?!" said minato confusingly as he set down near a tree and began thinking " .. the way of the jutsu .. " he thought as he fell a sleep


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Minato found him self facing zarami " his rival " as they clashed kunais then jumped back at the same time while throwing shurikens, minato used an strong wind blast attack but zarami overcome it with an fire ball, " what now ? how to win him ? " minato thought as zarami released an fire ball that he holds with his hand as he ran toward minato " what shall i do what ? shall i do ? " he thought confusingly as zarami got near of him minato closed his eyes as wind stormed in an spring ball like that he hit it with the fireball .. minato was surprised that he wasn't blasted yet so he open his eyes and look at the ball eating zarami's fire ball and transform to a fire-wind ball " what ?? " as he looked at zarami how looked completely confused which made him more confident as he screamed " RASENGEN ! " the ball maximized and clashed through zarami as a storm...

minato woke up excitingly screaming " RASENGEN !! "
" so you got yourself a jutsu ?!" asked jarayia
" I THINK SO ! " he answered

next chapter : The Element Of Speed
 

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Good you are writing a story on Minato but i donno still, even though rasengen is far more better, i dont think it will defeat fire element, how can some one hold fireball i though they will split it, and Minato learned that in 2 years so i assume as it is your own fanfiction you can change something
 

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@ ben : its ok i hate konoha too, but i like the fourth

@ rahul : it was a dream when he used it, did u even read it?? and i didnt say that wind can destroy fire too .. its just a dream
 

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great work i like it man ...sent me the nxt chapters link as soon as it is ready

i think red hair girls atitude should be more like naruto's..you should keep that in your mind for future chapters...

and who is zarami..is he a real character from naruto or you have created it??
 

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thanx all :D

she is naruto's mother .. her attitude is like that for a reason dude and am not gonna let this story get anything less then more perfect then before ! i promise U_U

and wat do u think of the spelling\grammer was it good enough ?!

and am gonna vm all how posted here or told me wat do they think about it xd

thanx everyone and tell ur friends to read it too plz if u can
 
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