The tale of naruto.

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PART 1: THE NEW MISSION
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tsunade: KONOHA IS IN GREAT DANGER WE NEED YOUR HELP.........?



TUSANADE HAS CALL TEAM KAKASHI TO HER OFFICE TO GIVE AN IMPORTANT NEWS.




SAKURA: what happened tsunade sama? why are you so tense?

TSUNADE: listen everyone the village will be under attack at any time.

kakashi: what are you saying tsunade sama!

tsunade : the akasuki is on the move they want revenge.

naruto: REVENGE?

tsunade: yes they think we kill there leader pain?

kakashi: but!

TSUNADE: NARUTO.

tsunade: NARUTO JIRIAYA IS DEAD.

NARUTO: WHAT.....

tsunade : he has been killed by one of his former student and akatsuki member konan.

tsunade: jiraiya was send to secret mission to find the leader of akatsuki and he heard the rumors about him that he was hiding in the hidden rain village.

tsunade: jiraiya was send to secret mission to find the leader of akatsuki and he heard the rumors about him that he was hiding in the hidden rain village.jiriaya found him .He was one of his former student nagato . According to legendary sage this nagato kid possesses the legendary rinnegein.

kakashi: what the legendary rinnegein.Is this thing even exist?

tsunade: yes it did and jiriaya was the only one who figured out his secret and with that he was able to end him.

naruto: what??

tsunade: jiriaya used all of his power to defeat him and in the end he used all of his chakra and was in no shape to fight and he was killed by pein's partner konan the student of jiriaya.

naruto: this cant happened .ero sannian can not be dead .


tsunade: naruto now the akatsuki is planing to destroy konoha we need to stop them.if jiriaya were alive he'd say the same thing.

naruto: but how do we stop them??

tsunade: By learning the sage mode.

naruto: sage mode? what is that?

tsunade: you know it soon .its time to resume your training.you are going to mount myubouku .NARUTO only you are the one who could stop akatsuki and can save konoha.

naruto: if this is the to save konoha then I'll go.



UNKNOWN PERSON: foolish people,nobody could stop me .THE VICTORY IS MINE.

KONAN EVERYTHING IS READY?

KONAN: yes.

UNKNOWN PERSON: WE ARE GOING TO ATTACK KONOHA.

END OF CHAPTER 1


LINKS TO ALL CHAPTER:
CHAPTER 1: [URL2=http://www.narutobase.net/forums/fanfiction/51376-tale-naruto.html]THE NEW MISSION[/URL2]
CHAPTER 2:[URL2=http://www.narutobase.net/forums/fanfiction/51407-tale-naruto-part-2-a.html]THE TRUTH[/URL2]
CHAPTER 3:[URL2=http://www.narutobase.net/forums/fanfiction/51462-tale-naruto-chapter-3-a.html]THE WRATH OF AKATSUKI[/URL2]
CHAPTER 4:[URL2=http://www.narutobase.net/forums/fanfiction/51542-tale-naruto-chapter-4-part-1-a.html]PART 1:THE SAME OLD NARUTO[/URL2],[URL2=http://www.narutobase.net/forums/fanfiction/51674-tale-naruto-chapter-4-part2.html]PART 2 :THE BATTLE BETWEEN THE MASTER AND STUDENT[/URL2]
CHAPTER 5:[URL2=http://www.narutobase.net/forums/fanfiction/51816-tale-naruto-chapter-5-a.html]FRIENDS VS FRIENDS[/URL2]
CHAPTER 6:[URL2=http://www.narutobase.net/forums/fanfiction/52256-tale-naruto-chapter-6-a.html]THE ONE WHO CAN SAVE US[/URL2]
CHAPTER 7:[URL2=http://www.narutobase.net/forums/showthread.php?t=53578]SASUKE VS NARUTO[/URL2]
CHAPTER 8:[url2=http://www.narutobase.net/forums/showthread.php?t=55033]NARUTO'S PAIN[/url2]
 
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Are you Princess Gaga? [Princess?]
That was kinda offending...

Well i can`t say i liked it..it would be good if it was longer and didn`t "cut to the chase" immidietaly,what i am trying to say is that you need at least one chapter to explain the time,if anything has changed from the world we know in Anime and Manga,you just go into battle immidietaly...
 
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