The Tale of Naruto, Beginning

[aunhyuga]

Once lived a boy named , Naruto
Who had a father named Minato,
He was the host of Nine-tails,
But was’nt aware of his own tale,
In the village of Konoha, He was all alone,
In the academy, he couldn’t even make a clone,
He dreamt of being at the top of Konoha’s men ,
And was Fond of eating ramen,
He had a crush on sakura,
Who had a crush on sasuke,
Soon became his rival, Uchiha Sasuke ,
Both had the sensei, Kakashi Hatake,
And along came, Pervy-sage,
Who was taught by third hokage,
Sasuke had a freaking sharingan,
Naruto soon developed rasengan,

 

[epictobi]

inspired!!!! Thank you

 

[venuboppudi]

:noc:

 

[Skylar Knight]

I liked it

 

[Dribbles]

Dayum, nice xd ​

 

[rashida chan]

cool

 

[Waspinator37]

Awesome. I like it. Now, don't be Jiraiya and start writing something like Make-Out Series and then use it as an excuse to look at naked girls.

 

[EggesGabo]

cool

 

[IzunaUchiha2]

Okey dokey not great or that good but ok

 

[SQY]

Sorry but its not even that good, anybody could easily have shortened that out, its just plain.

 

[From the Dark Spire]

This is inspiring. Great job +rep

Could you take a look at my story some time?

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[dlorrah]

they said if you have nothing to say good things to others ..dont say bad.. or you should shut the F**kup

ur poem is good.