ItachiDaSoloKing
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This is my first chapter of my very own story... As you will notice it is inspired mostly by Naruto and I will make sure to end the chapter at the best part too -_- ENJOY.
The Tale Of Afrosuki Nigasaki Chapter 1: Operation Fallen Leaf!
In a Small Leaf Covered Wooden Cabin, in the southwest region of the War-Torn wasteland of Konohagakure resides a small seemingly fragile Old Man, named Oricha The Wiser with long white hair and a set of glowing red Sharingan, a Blade at his side known as The Blade Of Kusunagi, and a long wooden staff for mobile support. Oricha has three Grandsons, a set of twins Itana Uchiha, and Sukai Uchiha, and then Raikou Uchiha with their ages being 10, 10, and 12 respectively.
Oricha is slowly walking through the wooden hallway of his cabin, each step the Old Man takes causes the old wood to creek loudly in response until he arrives at a tall wooden door at the very end of the hallway. Oricha slowly opens the wooden door, similar to the wooden steps; the wooden door creeks loudly in response. Their are three beds in the room, each with an assigned owner specified by a wooden plank on the headboard of each bed. Itana and Sukai share a wooden bunk bed with Itana on top, and the eldest grandson Raikou has his own bed across from the bunk bed.
Itana: Grandpa, can you tell us a story?
Oricha: No! I am too busy I have urgent work to prepare for.
Sukai: Please Grandpa!
Raikou: You promised you would tell us a story tomorrow, and it's tomorrow right now.
Oricha: Alright, alright. A promise is a promise.
Oricha slowly walks across the room toward the wooden book shelf.
Itana: No Grandpa you've read all of those stupid books to us countless times especially The Coup Detat and Tales Of A Gutsy Shinobi.
Oricha: Is that right? Well then I have a story that you've never heard, a story entrusted to me that I will now entrust to you.
Raikou: Really? What story is that?
Oricha pauses for a few seconds with a look of concentration.
Oricha: The Tale Of Afrosuki Nigasaki! The real reason why the shinobi world plunged into the self destruction that is now visually evident today.
Sukai: Tell us!
Oricha: Ok, ok...
There once was a young shinobi named Afrosuki Nigasaki. Afrosuki was unfortunately born during an invasion here in Konoha known as Operation Fallen Leaf. It was an unexpected invasion initiated stealthily by the Tsuchikage and Kazekage, that shook Konoha with devastating force. At the time Afrosuki's parents Neosuki Nigasaki and Karin Nigasaki were walking in the moderately populated street across from Zumiraka Ramen. It was a sunny peaceful spring afternoon perfect for catching fresh air, sight seeing, and eating Ramen. At the most unexpected time a massive Rock Golem emerges from the ground just a few yards away.
Neosuki Thinking: The Hidden Stones revered Rock Golem Technique? So it has started?
As its eye's glow bright Yellowish Orange the massive Rock Golem pulls back its massive rock fist in preparation for attack. Then the massive fist launches forth rapidly toward Neosuki and his pregnant wife. The moment before the massive hand reaches Neosuki a big muscular man dual wielding two Massive Lightning Enhanced Blades the size of Zabuza's executioners blade cuts off the Rock Golems hand in an instant. The moment the man touches the floor he leaps again and with a swift and powerful strike he cuts off the Rock Golems head.
Neosuki Thinking: The Blue Fang?
Karin: Oh no, Neosuki my water broke!
Neosuki: Now? Of all times!
The Blue Fang lands on the ground with a force that cracks the ground beneath him. The Lightning surging through his massives blades slowly disappears as he sheathes them onto his back. He then approaches Neosuki, The Blue Fang then places his hand on Neosuki's shoulder.
The Blue Fang: You owe me one, Neosuki!
Neosuki: Kushimaru! Now is not the time, Konoha is under attack and Karin's water just broke!
Three more Shinobi arrive.
Kushimaru Thinking: The rest of my squad is finally here!
Kushimaru: Hakuzuki and Kohatsu assist me! Hitsune assist Karin, safely escort her outside of the village to the Secret Hideout and help her give birth.
Hitsune: Yes, Sir!
Neosuki looks at Karin with a worried face.
Neosuki: Karin, I must stay here and fight!
Karin: No! Neosuki, Please don't go I don't want you to die!
Neosuki: Trust me! I have to protect Konoha, it's my duty as a Shinobi of The Leaf. Besides I promised we would raise our child together, and I intend to keep that promise!
Kushimaru: Karin, Hitsune is one of the most skilled Ninja our villiage has had and is well versed in Medical Ninjutsu thanks to her Kekkei Genkei. Rest assured of your saftey!
Hitsune: Wood Style: Wood Clone Jutsu!(Three clones are formed)
Hitsune and one clone pick up Karin and prepares to depart.
Karin: Neosuki, Kushimaru, please come back alive.
Hitsune and a clone takes off with Karin while one clone loosely follows for sensory/security purposes.
Kushimaru: Hitsune is highly skilled she knows the safest place to go, and the safest way to get their, Karin and your child are in safe hands Neosuki.
Neosuki: Alright then! Kohatsu, Hakuzuki, Kushimaru brace for battle!
Then at that very moment five more Rock Golems emerge from the ground. The Tsuchikage and his two Jounin arrive nearly simultaneously.
Tsuchikage: Konoha shall be punished!... Earth Style: Perfect Rock Golem!
A massive 4 armed Rock Golem emerges, this Golem is the same size as a Perfect Susano'o. One of the Tsuchikage's Jounin jumps on the Right Shouler of the Massive Golem, Another jumps on the Left Shoulder, and the Tsuchikage jumps on the Head of the Golem.
Neosuki: That's Tsuchikage Lord Muzuku and his two highest level Shinobi, Otsutsuchi The Ruthless, and Orotsuchi The Brute! All three are capable of Particle Style Ninjutsu.
Kushimaru: This is bad... Real bad.
Otsutsuchi, Orotsuchi, Muzuku: Particle Style Atomic Dismantle Jutsu!
All three shinobi fire off a beam of energy. The three beams of energy meet/collide to make a massive beam of energy. The massive beam of energy rapidly approaches Neosuki, Kushimaru, Hakuzuki, and Kohatsu.
Kushimaru Thinking: This technique was said to atomize an entire army!
Hakuzuki Thinking: Is this the same technique said to atomize the 8 Tails Biju Bomb!
Neozuki Thinking: Sorry Karin, it seems I have failed.
Kohatsu: Holy Crap!
END
Will they be atomized? Or will Luck play in their favor? Read Chapter 2 of The Tale Of Afrosuki Nigasaki to find out!
The Tale Of Afrosuki Nigasaki Chapter 1: Operation Fallen Leaf!
In a Small Leaf Covered Wooden Cabin, in the southwest region of the War-Torn wasteland of Konohagakure resides a small seemingly fragile Old Man, named Oricha The Wiser with long white hair and a set of glowing red Sharingan, a Blade at his side known as The Blade Of Kusunagi, and a long wooden staff for mobile support. Oricha has three Grandsons, a set of twins Itana Uchiha, and Sukai Uchiha, and then Raikou Uchiha with their ages being 10, 10, and 12 respectively.
Oricha is slowly walking through the wooden hallway of his cabin, each step the Old Man takes causes the old wood to creek loudly in response until he arrives at a tall wooden door at the very end of the hallway. Oricha slowly opens the wooden door, similar to the wooden steps; the wooden door creeks loudly in response. Their are three beds in the room, each with an assigned owner specified by a wooden plank on the headboard of each bed. Itana and Sukai share a wooden bunk bed with Itana on top, and the eldest grandson Raikou has his own bed across from the bunk bed.
Itana: Grandpa, can you tell us a story?
Oricha: No! I am too busy I have urgent work to prepare for.
Sukai: Please Grandpa!
Raikou: You promised you would tell us a story tomorrow, and it's tomorrow right now.
Oricha: Alright, alright. A promise is a promise.
Oricha slowly walks across the room toward the wooden book shelf.
Itana: No Grandpa you've read all of those stupid books to us countless times especially The Coup Detat and Tales Of A Gutsy Shinobi.
Oricha: Is that right? Well then I have a story that you've never heard, a story entrusted to me that I will now entrust to you.
Raikou: Really? What story is that?
Oricha pauses for a few seconds with a look of concentration.
Oricha: The Tale Of Afrosuki Nigasaki! The real reason why the shinobi world plunged into the self destruction that is now visually evident today.
Sukai: Tell us!
Oricha: Ok, ok...
There once was a young shinobi named Afrosuki Nigasaki. Afrosuki was unfortunately born during an invasion here in Konoha known as Operation Fallen Leaf. It was an unexpected invasion initiated stealthily by the Tsuchikage and Kazekage, that shook Konoha with devastating force. At the time Afrosuki's parents Neosuki Nigasaki and Karin Nigasaki were walking in the moderately populated street across from Zumiraka Ramen. It was a sunny peaceful spring afternoon perfect for catching fresh air, sight seeing, and eating Ramen. At the most unexpected time a massive Rock Golem emerges from the ground just a few yards away.
Neosuki Thinking: The Hidden Stones revered Rock Golem Technique? So it has started?
As its eye's glow bright Yellowish Orange the massive Rock Golem pulls back its massive rock fist in preparation for attack. Then the massive fist launches forth rapidly toward Neosuki and his pregnant wife. The moment before the massive hand reaches Neosuki a big muscular man dual wielding two Massive Lightning Enhanced Blades the size of Zabuza's executioners blade cuts off the Rock Golems hand in an instant. The moment the man touches the floor he leaps again and with a swift and powerful strike he cuts off the Rock Golems head.
Neosuki Thinking: The Blue Fang?
Karin: Oh no, Neosuki my water broke!
Neosuki: Now? Of all times!
The Blue Fang lands on the ground with a force that cracks the ground beneath him. The Lightning surging through his massives blades slowly disappears as he sheathes them onto his back. He then approaches Neosuki, The Blue Fang then places his hand on Neosuki's shoulder.
The Blue Fang: You owe me one, Neosuki!
Neosuki: Kushimaru! Now is not the time, Konoha is under attack and Karin's water just broke!
Three more Shinobi arrive.
Kushimaru Thinking: The rest of my squad is finally here!
Kushimaru: Hakuzuki and Kohatsu assist me! Hitsune assist Karin, safely escort her outside of the village to the Secret Hideout and help her give birth.
Hitsune: Yes, Sir!
Neosuki looks at Karin with a worried face.
Neosuki: Karin, I must stay here and fight!
Karin: No! Neosuki, Please don't go I don't want you to die!
Neosuki: Trust me! I have to protect Konoha, it's my duty as a Shinobi of The Leaf. Besides I promised we would raise our child together, and I intend to keep that promise!
Kushimaru: Karin, Hitsune is one of the most skilled Ninja our villiage has had and is well versed in Medical Ninjutsu thanks to her Kekkei Genkei. Rest assured of your saftey!
Hitsune: Wood Style: Wood Clone Jutsu!(Three clones are formed)
Hitsune and one clone pick up Karin and prepares to depart.
Karin: Neosuki, Kushimaru, please come back alive.
Hitsune and a clone takes off with Karin while one clone loosely follows for sensory/security purposes.
Kushimaru: Hitsune is highly skilled she knows the safest place to go, and the safest way to get their, Karin and your child are in safe hands Neosuki.
Neosuki: Alright then! Kohatsu, Hakuzuki, Kushimaru brace for battle!
Then at that very moment five more Rock Golems emerge from the ground. The Tsuchikage and his two Jounin arrive nearly simultaneously.
Tsuchikage: Konoha shall be punished!... Earth Style: Perfect Rock Golem!
A massive 4 armed Rock Golem emerges, this Golem is the same size as a Perfect Susano'o. One of the Tsuchikage's Jounin jumps on the Right Shouler of the Massive Golem, Another jumps on the Left Shoulder, and the Tsuchikage jumps on the Head of the Golem.
Neosuki: That's Tsuchikage Lord Muzuku and his two highest level Shinobi, Otsutsuchi The Ruthless, and Orotsuchi The Brute! All three are capable of Particle Style Ninjutsu.
Kushimaru: This is bad... Real bad.
Otsutsuchi, Orotsuchi, Muzuku: Particle Style Atomic Dismantle Jutsu!
All three shinobi fire off a beam of energy. The three beams of energy meet/collide to make a massive beam of energy. The massive beam of energy rapidly approaches Neosuki, Kushimaru, Hakuzuki, and Kohatsu.
Kushimaru Thinking: This technique was said to atomize an entire army!
Hakuzuki Thinking: Is this the same technique said to atomize the 8 Tails Biju Bomb!
Neozuki Thinking: Sorry Karin, it seems I have failed.
Kohatsu: Holy Crap!
END
Will they be atomized? Or will Luck play in their favor? Read Chapter 2 of The Tale Of Afrosuki Nigasaki to find out!
