Narutofan4203
Banned
Before you read:
The story takes place 20 years after the Defeat of Madara and Obito, thus the end of Akatsuki. The konoha 11 become the strongest jounin in their village, with the exception of TenTen who stays a chunin. Naruto and Sasuke's final fight killed them both, and Konohamaru becomes the 7th hokage. The story follows a boy named Robon Hyoryu, and his adventures in Konoha. That's all, enjoy!
A boy was pushed into a wall, nowhere to go. He observed as several buildings were blown up instantly, and the screams of innocent children, women, and men alike were heard. People he knew. Friends. He hyperventilated, and whispered, "W-why," The man then put his hand over the boy's neck.
Then, the boy appeared sleeping on a desk, a woman with long-Darkish hair was standing over him, looking angry. "Ah, Tenten-Sensei!", the boy said. "Robon, hat's the Fifth Time you've fallen asleep in class this week! That's a detention". The woman said, as the classmates laughed. Later that day, Robon came to detention.
Tenten ducked down and said, "Look, I know it's hard to study to become a ninja. But you have a test tommorow. If you want to become a shinobi, you must pass the test. Alright?", Robon nodded. He pondered, "How am I going to pull this off..? I keep falling asleep in class.." Robon nodded, someone was looking at him through the window. Though on the inside it sort of creeped him out, he didn't seem to mind on the outside.
The next day came slowly, Robon wishing he didn't have to do any tests, though he had to. He arrived at the academy, and was one of the last ones there. The tests were passed out by TenTen, as she walked back into the front of the classroom and said, "Alright, you may start". Robon was never dumb, infact he was smart, he just didn't put much effort into things.
He did the test, though it felt like it killed him. In the middle of the crowd, he noticed eyes that kept looking directly at him. The same eyes from yesterday, he still didn't really care. Tenten took the tests, after a long wait to grade the tests, she declared "Now to say who passed," everyone waited with complete excitement and anxiety at the same time.
She then spoke, "Leaf Vien, Deth Yami, Inu Ken, Jonetsu Lee, Crystal Arara, Sutokaki Kimiwarui, Draggi Doragon, Manukena Okashi" Robon layed his head down, knowing he failed. Tenten blurted, "And, Robon Hyoryu." Robon's sadness instantly turned into happiness, as he left out a smile. Tenten said "Everyone who failed, I'm sorry. but without passing this test you will not make it as a shinobi, Now the practical test."
They moved in a seperate room. One by one, a student stepped up and were required to use Shunshin no Jutsu, Substitution Jutsu, and clone technique. The genin stepped up one by one. Robon was called last, again.. Robon thought, "Alright, I just have to focus.. I know I can do this.." He heard a whisper that said, "Do your best, Robon.." He thought it was in his head, but he figured out someone in the line of students said it. Robon then stepped up, used Clone Jutsu, Shunshin No Jutsu at a moderate level, substitute jutsu and substituted, but instead of a log a pencil.
TenTen said, "You all pass, congratulations!" She equally passed out forehead protectors, which Robon immediatly wore. The new genin were told to go home for a bit, but to come back later in the day. There was a lot of commotion, and bragging. TenTen then got angry, and shouted "Excuse me," instantly ceasing the commotion. She cleared her throat, and said, "Normally, you learn a while after what team you get, but you're learning instantly today.. Now, Team 1: Manukena Okashi, Draggi Doragon, and Crystal Arara. Team 2: Deth Yami, Jonetsu Lee, Inu Ken. Team 3: Robon Hyoryu, Leaf Vien, and SutokaKi Kimiwarui." Tenten continued on with, "Team 1's Sensei will be Ino Yamanaka, Team 2's will be Shino Aburame, and Team 3's Sensei will be Sakura Haruno. That's all, Team 1, meet your sensei tommorow in the Training Ground number 1, For team 2 training ground number 2, as for team 3.. Well, Number 3." Robon said quietly to himself, "I'm ready for whatever's ahead.. I'm a shinobi now!" But, who really knows what lay ahead for the newly appointed shinobi?
ANND Done. I would like criticism, as it will help me.
The story takes place 20 years after the Defeat of Madara and Obito, thus the end of Akatsuki. The konoha 11 become the strongest jounin in their village, with the exception of TenTen who stays a chunin. Naruto and Sasuke's final fight killed them both, and Konohamaru becomes the 7th hokage. The story follows a boy named Robon Hyoryu, and his adventures in Konoha. That's all, enjoy!
A boy was pushed into a wall, nowhere to go. He observed as several buildings were blown up instantly, and the screams of innocent children, women, and men alike were heard. People he knew. Friends. He hyperventilated, and whispered, "W-why," The man then put his hand over the boy's neck.
Then, the boy appeared sleeping on a desk, a woman with long-Darkish hair was standing over him, looking angry. "Ah, Tenten-Sensei!", the boy said. "Robon, hat's the Fifth Time you've fallen asleep in class this week! That's a detention". The woman said, as the classmates laughed. Later that day, Robon came to detention.
Tenten ducked down and said, "Look, I know it's hard to study to become a ninja. But you have a test tommorow. If you want to become a shinobi, you must pass the test. Alright?", Robon nodded. He pondered, "How am I going to pull this off..? I keep falling asleep in class.." Robon nodded, someone was looking at him through the window. Though on the inside it sort of creeped him out, he didn't seem to mind on the outside.
The next day came slowly, Robon wishing he didn't have to do any tests, though he had to. He arrived at the academy, and was one of the last ones there. The tests were passed out by TenTen, as she walked back into the front of the classroom and said, "Alright, you may start". Robon was never dumb, infact he was smart, he just didn't put much effort into things.
He did the test, though it felt like it killed him. In the middle of the crowd, he noticed eyes that kept looking directly at him. The same eyes from yesterday, he still didn't really care. Tenten took the tests, after a long wait to grade the tests, she declared "Now to say who passed," everyone waited with complete excitement and anxiety at the same time.
She then spoke, "Leaf Vien, Deth Yami, Inu Ken, Jonetsu Lee, Crystal Arara, Sutokaki Kimiwarui, Draggi Doragon, Manukena Okashi" Robon layed his head down, knowing he failed. Tenten blurted, "And, Robon Hyoryu." Robon's sadness instantly turned into happiness, as he left out a smile. Tenten said "Everyone who failed, I'm sorry. but without passing this test you will not make it as a shinobi, Now the practical test."
They moved in a seperate room. One by one, a student stepped up and were required to use Shunshin no Jutsu, Substitution Jutsu, and clone technique. The genin stepped up one by one. Robon was called last, again.. Robon thought, "Alright, I just have to focus.. I know I can do this.." He heard a whisper that said, "Do your best, Robon.." He thought it was in his head, but he figured out someone in the line of students said it. Robon then stepped up, used Clone Jutsu, Shunshin No Jutsu at a moderate level, substitute jutsu and substituted, but instead of a log a pencil.
TenTen said, "You all pass, congratulations!" She equally passed out forehead protectors, which Robon immediatly wore. The new genin were told to go home for a bit, but to come back later in the day. There was a lot of commotion, and bragging. TenTen then got angry, and shouted "Excuse me," instantly ceasing the commotion. She cleared her throat, and said, "Normally, you learn a while after what team you get, but you're learning instantly today.. Now, Team 1: Manukena Okashi, Draggi Doragon, and Crystal Arara. Team 2: Deth Yami, Jonetsu Lee, Inu Ken. Team 3: Robon Hyoryu, Leaf Vien, and SutokaKi Kimiwarui." Tenten continued on with, "Team 1's Sensei will be Ino Yamanaka, Team 2's will be Shino Aburame, and Team 3's Sensei will be Sakura Haruno. That's all, Team 1, meet your sensei tommorow in the Training Ground number 1, For team 2 training ground number 2, as for team 3.. Well, Number 3." Robon said quietly to himself, "I'm ready for whatever's ahead.. I'm a shinobi now!" But, who really knows what lay ahead for the newly appointed shinobi?
ANND Done. I would like criticism, as it will help me.
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