EliteRamenNinja
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I just wrote this on my work and wanted to share it with you people. You like it or not? Maybe I want to write more, so please be honest. And yes, I know my English is not perfect.
It's cold, dark and the smell of hundreds of dead shinobi is terrible. I'm afraid, I'm just an ordinary ninja from Konoha. No elite, not someone with cool techniques or strong powers. What can I do against Obito or Madara. And I'm not even talking about the Juubi, a huge monster. In the past I have already fought against a big dog, but this can not be compared.
I look around me and I see some comrades. Some alive, others dead. I see one of my best friends pierced with a wooden stake. His name was Naiko. He was never afraid, but now he's dead. I look around me again. I see in the distance someone younger then me. He is incredibly strong and brave. His name is Naruto. He is the hero who saved Konoha against Pain. How old is he? 16, 17? He is four years younger than me. His courage inspires me. I begin to crawl forward, towards the enemy. Explosions everywhere, blood everywhere, sadness everywhere. The fear comes back.
But then I see close to me a girl. I recognize her. Her name is Hinata. She is as old as Naruto, but she looks a little older. Somewhat more mature. She's pretty, and that body, wow! She shows no fear too. I pick up all my courage and go forward again. I still throw a quick glance at Hinata's beautiful ass. I feel stronger suddenly.
Obito and Madara are 20 meters away. Naruto and someone with strange eyebrows is fighting with them. I grab my chance to distract Obito. I understand he is doing this because a girl named Rin got killed. So I yell: "Look there, is that Rin?" Obito turns around, he is distracted. Naruto understands my intent and benefits from the opportunity. Obito is defeated.
Now Madara, he is next. But Naruto, Kakashi, 'strange eyebrows kid 'and 'strange eyebrows adult' will deal with him. I feel like a boss. I helped in defeating Obito. I feel strong, I feel brave, I feel like I can handle the world. I think of my friends who died, I need to honor them. I think of my parents who are worried, I think of my girlfriend at home waiting for me. I must protect them. I make my decision, I will attack the Juubi with all my strength. I feel the breath of all mankind in my neck when running. Some shinobi are trying to stop me, but I have chosen my path!
I grab my kunai. I'm with the Juubi now. I jump on one of his tails. I start stabbing. One time, two times, ten times, fourteen times... But it does not help. Another tail of the Juubi beats me to the ground. I feel my ribs cracking. They are all broken. Man man man, what was I thinking?! Me, an ordinary fodder, who would defeat the Juubi?! And look at me now, I'm as flat as a fly. I feel I am almost dead. I see a girl with pink hair running to me. She is a medical ninja, I remember her face. I think she is also a friend from Naruto. She is trying to heal me, but my injuries are too big. She starts crying. Her tears are falling on my crushed body. I want to cry too, but I can't. I don't know why. I think one last time about my parents, about my girlfriend. I hope they will be okay... That the world will be okay. I hope my death will not be for nothing. I hope I lived good. Ha, I wonder... will there be ramen in heaven?
I look around me and I see some comrades. Some alive, others dead. I see one of my best friends pierced with a wooden stake. His name was Naiko. He was never afraid, but now he's dead. I look around me again. I see in the distance someone younger then me. He is incredibly strong and brave. His name is Naruto. He is the hero who saved Konoha against Pain. How old is he? 16, 17? He is four years younger than me. His courage inspires me. I begin to crawl forward, towards the enemy. Explosions everywhere, blood everywhere, sadness everywhere. The fear comes back.
But then I see close to me a girl. I recognize her. Her name is Hinata. She is as old as Naruto, but she looks a little older. Somewhat more mature. She's pretty, and that body, wow! She shows no fear too. I pick up all my courage and go forward again. I still throw a quick glance at Hinata's beautiful ass. I feel stronger suddenly.
Obito and Madara are 20 meters away. Naruto and someone with strange eyebrows is fighting with them. I grab my chance to distract Obito. I understand he is doing this because a girl named Rin got killed. So I yell: "Look there, is that Rin?" Obito turns around, he is distracted. Naruto understands my intent and benefits from the opportunity. Obito is defeated.
Now Madara, he is next. But Naruto, Kakashi, 'strange eyebrows kid 'and 'strange eyebrows adult' will deal with him. I feel like a boss. I helped in defeating Obito. I feel strong, I feel brave, I feel like I can handle the world. I think of my friends who died, I need to honor them. I think of my parents who are worried, I think of my girlfriend at home waiting for me. I must protect them. I make my decision, I will attack the Juubi with all my strength. I feel the breath of all mankind in my neck when running. Some shinobi are trying to stop me, but I have chosen my path!
I grab my kunai. I'm with the Juubi now. I jump on one of his tails. I start stabbing. One time, two times, ten times, fourteen times... But it does not help. Another tail of the Juubi beats me to the ground. I feel my ribs cracking. They are all broken. Man man man, what was I thinking?! Me, an ordinary fodder, who would defeat the Juubi?! And look at me now, I'm as flat as a fly. I feel I am almost dead. I see a girl with pink hair running to me. She is a medical ninja, I remember her face. I think she is also a friend from Naruto. She is trying to heal me, but my injuries are too big. She starts crying. Her tears are falling on my crushed body. I want to cry too, but I can't. I don't know why. I think one last time about my parents, about my girlfriend. I hope they will be okay... That the world will be okay. I hope my death will not be for nothing. I hope I lived good. Ha, I wonder... will there be ramen in heaven?
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