The Story of a sennin (orochimaru)

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The Story of a sannin (orochimaru)

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So, I've been thinking, and decided to write a story. The fact i'm bored didn't help much.

We know that Jiraiya said orochimaru left konoha when he lost his parents, and this is about the time he started his experiments.
I'm thinking, Orochimaru had a similiar incident to that of sasuke. His parents were secretly assassinated by the konoha higher-ups for some reason.



Due to this, orochimaru became traumatized and this began his desire to seek learning all jutsu. He was in search of a jutsu to revive his parents. Through his search, he came upon edo tensei and tried to perfect it but throughout all his trials and studies, he could never perfect the jutsu to the point where he could revive without DNA. The necessity of DnA, and his lack of it halted his goals of his parents' revival. But, hiruzen found out about orochimaru's twisted experiments - which was the cause of so many ninjas going missing in konoha. Still, when it came time to put a stop to it and end orochimaru's life, he couldn't bring himself to it. What if hiruzen didn't kill him due to guilt? What if hiruzen knew that he allowed the order on orochimaru's parents, and by extension was responsible for their deaths? The same way he never rejected the order on the uchiha clans assassination? Hiruzen couldn't take orochimaru's life knowing that he was responsible for any apparent suffering he could possibly see in orochimaru, through the direct or indirect killing of his parents. It is for this purpose that orochimaru may have later returned to konoha. Orochimaru may not have wanted to destroy konoha, but he may have been coming to send a message and cause hiruzen intense suffering. Depending on who hiruzen possibly allowed to assassinate orochimaru's parents, orochimaru saw it fit to torture hiruzen with the sight of his two sensei's. Is it possible that orochimaru never had an intention to kill hiruzen? Infact, he never tried to kill him, he only slapped him around and gave him the emotional torture of battling two of his closest friends. Infact, Didn't orochimaru only hurt hiruzen after hiruzen tried a double suicide? It's possible , though orochimaru never came with killing intent and only the purpose of torturing hiruzen through battling his masters, and watching his cherished village assaulted with his own eyes, that when hiruzen tried to seal him away, orochimaru paniced. The though of his death and the end of his goals put him in a situation where he had to make a quick decision and kill hiruzen before he could kill him. So, Orochimaru had to seriously fight back now, and to do this he had to make a decision of using the kusanagi to cause lethal injury to hiruzen before his jutsu was complete. But, let us not forget that Orochimaru shed a tear for konoha before his destruction began. He loved the village, and knew that, though destroying it would severely hurt hiruzen, it would also hurt him. It made him weep, but he knew it had to be done to send his ultimate message, ' You made me suffer, now i'll watch you suffer'.

Now Skip forward a bit, and we learn that orochimaru seeked itachi's sharingan and his reasons were 'to learn all jutsu'. Now, this may be possible as he's seeking a way to revive his parents, and the copy-wheel eye is a useful jutsu in that respect. But a jutsu of revival capabilities couldn't possibly be copied right? But the uchiha could apparently copy edo tensei, so it may have been a viable option. But, Wait, is this really the only reason he wanted the sharingan? Kabuto said:
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So, Orochimaru knew of the potentials to evolve a sharingan into a rinnegan? If he knew this, and since kabuto knew senju + uchiha dna = rinnegan, it's also possible that orochimaru knew of the abilities of the rinnegan. With a rinnegan, he'd be able to use 'creation of all things'. But, as we know, the user dies after using this jutsu to revive another. Well, The release of shikifujiin was also supposed to kill the user, but orochimaru was able to create a loop hole through using body reincarnation. In this same way, it is possible for him to use this rinnegan ability and also escape the grasps of death.

We also learnt that orochimaru did extensive studies with hashirama's dna. to the point where he was trying to mold it into other people (ex. danzou and yamato). It can easily be assessed that orochimaru was possibly perfecting the splicing of hashirama's dna. We know that not everyone survives curse seal implantation, nor do they survive hashi's cells. So, he needed to perfect his methods of successfully splicing hashi's DNA into his own so that he would survive the proceedure of senju infusion. Since he had no senju around at that time, and since (as mentioned before) A strong individual of the senju/uchiha lineage may be required, orochimaru couldn't just use body reincarnation jutsu on anyone; especially not his experiments. They did not have sufficient senju potential. For that matter, Could curse seal actually be derived from the natural energy of hashi's cells? We know it is related to hugo's clan in some way, but can it be possible that it was also doped with hashi's cells and hence why it had such a low success rate of infusion? Anyway, Let's not go into that.

Through his studies, orochimaru could have possibly learnt of the 'creation of all things' jutsu and this is the initial reason he seeked itachi's sharingan and the reason he had done so much studies with hashi's dna. It seems a bit too convinient that orochimaru wanted a sharingan, did experiments with senju dna, and knew uchiha + senju = rinnegan, doesn't it?

So, orochimaru needed to perfect his senju Dna splicing, and also required a sharingan. But how would he get it from itachi? Since Orochimaru was becoming aged, or becoming deteriorated through vast experimenting, it is possible that he needed a way to extend his life and therefore, furthered his studies. he came upon the body reincarnation jutsu, but when he tried to use it, possibly, for the first time, against itachi, he was defeated. Orochimaru knew itachi was too much for him and this put a damper in his plans. For years he extended his youth and swapped bodies to gain more power in the hopes of defeating itachi. This could even be one of the reasons he wanted kimimaro's body since kimimaro had a powerful keikei genkai allowing orochimaru to attain one more counter to itachi's sharingan. But, as fate would have it, kimimaro fell sick and orochimaru's plans may have seemed fruitless, but then he stumble upon the fact that sasuke had awakened the sharingan. Hope was restored to him and he seeked sasuke's sharingan. But, for the same reasons madara seeked a strong senju, or at least a senju on his level, orochimaru's studies showed him that he required a strong uchiha, one who was at least near his skillset. He had to first test sasuke. This could only be done by assessing his skill in the chunnin exams. If sasuke were to die, he would be useless to orochimaru, as not only a sharingan is needed, but also a strong uchiha body. But, sasuke passed orochimaru's tests, and his body seemed like a fit. Orochimaru had his chance again to gain the rinnegan and revive his parents.

Poor orochimaru. Things just never seemed to work out, however. His strong uchiha body inevitably defeated him and he was now sealed inside the very body that would allow his dreams to partially fruit. Orochimaru might have lost hope until itachi appeared. What a perfect oppotunity; Sasuke's chakra was wearing low and losing it's control over orochimaru. Orochimaru was now in the perfect position, he was able to overcome sasuke's binding and release himself. Perfect, right? His arch enemy half dead infront his eye. his body released, and his new uchiha body too exhausted to put up a resistance. Sweet revenge on itachi for defeating him, and sasuke for overcoming him. Nothing could put a stop to orochimaru now. Only thing left is to kill itachi and take over sasuke, but then fate would nut shot once again. Itachi screwed him over for the second time.

¬Side not: orochimaru is starting to remind me of...
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Defeated Thrice. Hands Sealed. Body Sealed. All hopes of seeing his parents completely dashed out the window, and he could now only see the world through anko's CS. What a curse. Was there anything worse that could happen to this poor guy?
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Nope! His luck would suddenly change. That accursed bastard itachi would repay him in the greatest way possible. He would sway sasuke in the opposite direction. Because of this, sasuke see's fit to revive him. Oh, joy! His plans are finally back on course. But are they? Is he really after the same thing?

During his stay in anko, he was able to witness two of closest students duke it out. 1 following in his mimic'ed footsteps and one following their own path. Kabuto, the student who never had parents, then lost his only cherished person; always seeking a purpose to life. Sasuke, the student, like him, who lost his parents and seeked vengeance on those who caused him anguish. Orochimaru could now sit in a third person's view and listen to their pain. Evidently, it was sasuke who clicked with him the most. Sasuke was the one, like orochimaru, who had parents who he lost. And, like orochimaru he walked a confused path of sorrow and hate.

So, Why did orochimaru decide to help sasuke? Because orochimaru may have had an ulterior motive, other than what you assume. After being revived, orochimaru decided to go along with sasuke because he too wanted to question 'those who knew it all'. He seeked answers from hiruzen. He wanted to know why. Why him? Why his parents? For now, Sasuke's goal, also became his goal, and as far as this went he had no problem with going along with sasuke. After all, if orochimaru was truly evil, and truly a harbinger of disaster, why did he have no interest in the war? Now, don't get me wrong. Does this mean that orochimaru gave up on his primary goal to revive his parents? No. If you notice, orochimaru specifically decided to infuse himself with a zetsu. But, 'Agoodboy, you just said he needed a strong senju body! why are you contradicting yourself now!!?!? :devil::devil::devil:". Well, If you'd hold onto your silk laced panties, i'll explain. See, let us not forget that these zetsu are not the zetsu which orochimaru previously knew. These zetsu have been powered up with extra DNA from yamato. Is this sufficient senju DnA to awaken a rinnegan, with the combination of a sharingan? I don't know. But, it is still a ton more DnA that orochimaru ever previously had access too. As we've even been shown, tobirama stated that orochimaru is filled with senju dna now, AND this senju dna is so potent that it gave him enough power to bind even another senju! It isn't impossible to think that he has enough senju dna to enact his goal.

What will orochimaru do, then? He has his pseudo-immortality, so time is not a factor. He has, quite possibly, enough senju dna. He also has all of his jutsu. What is he missing? A sharingan. But, would he necessarily need to take sasuke's own? That may not be the case. See, the war isn't over. And, Sasuke actually isn't the only uchiha left. There's still one more - obito. Though orochimaru possibly respects sasuke's goals, and sasuke's understanding of his suffering, orochimaru doesn't need to give up on his goal. Even if he were to forgo sasuke's body, he is still well and capable of taking another. Now, you may wonder, 'how the actual **** is orochimaru going to take demi-god obito's body...?' With a little help, a little genius, and a lot of strategy. With the help of the army wearing down obito to the point where resistance would become harder, and the paralysing poison of his white snake form, orochimaru could evidently get obito into a position where he's able to takeover his body. With this, orochimaru would attain an uchiha body which is compatible with a rinnegan(since obito is able to use one), and the abilities of obito's kamui. Now, you may wonder again? 'Obito only has one eye...' Yes, but he also has a shrine of sharingan. What orochimaru needs is his uchiha body, not necessarily his specific sharingan eye. BUT, in the off chance that, through all his research, he knows none of this is possible, there's still sasuke's body ripe for the picking. Paralyzing poison, edo tensei, and orochimaru in general is plenty enough attack power to exhaust sasuke to the point where resistance is futile.

In the end, whether orochimaru attains his dreams of seeing his parents again is all up to how the war unfolds and how effectively he's able to let go of the past (i.e his parents). But, as of now, he is half way along his journey of attaining the rinnegan to revive his parents.



*This is only a theory, and it is up to the reader to take it however they please. You may agree or disagree, this is my interpretation of why orochimaru does what he does, but all content posted in this thread ais fictitious and part of the author's imagination. Only a fool would take it is as hard evidence.

Hope you enjoyed the read!
 
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Is this a Fanfic and if it isn't.... Then....
When did Oro became a sennin..?? XD XD
 

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Pretty nice story. I like!!!
 

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Is this a Fanfic and if it isn't.... Then....
When did Oro became a sennin..?? XD XD

I decided to add a disclaimer ;)

EDIT: That was supposed to be sannin XD
 
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i never could relate with orochimaru, but after read your fanfic or real backstory, its like snap..
now i can feel his pain..
good read nonetheless
 

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i never could relate with orochimaru, but after read your fanfic or real backstory, its like snap..
now i can feel his pain..
good read nonetheless

yea, i just made a theory. but since i have 0 supporting evidence for 80% of it, i'll just leave it as a fanfic. i just really tried to think of reasons for why orochimaru left konoha. why he attacked konoha but never once did he really fight hiruzen himself, or try to hurt him. and why he's going along with sasuke. it just eventually started to turn into a story and i decided to turn it into one :D
 

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I really like this for two reasons 1 is the fact it makes a lot of sense and 2 it leaves room for the best antagonist in the series in my opinion to wreck shit again
 

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I really like this for two reasons 1 is the fact it makes a lot of sense and 2 it leaves room for the best antagonist in the series in my opinion to wreck shit again

Thanks. It started off as a theory :) appreciate the rep attempt but your rep power is too low :p
 

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nice bro nice, you can make other fanficts regarding other characters as well, such as Kisame =D
 

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nice bro nice, you can make other fanficts regarding other characters as well, such as Kisame =D

Kisame eh? Hmm... I was thinking of maybe trying a sakura one when I had the time and determination, but I think I'd much rather kisame. I'll read up on his different manga pages and get something going later on :)
 

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Is it possible that orochimaru never had an intention to kill hiruzen? Infact, he never tried to kill him,

He stabbed him in the chest with a katana.

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Thats a hell of a story

have some rep:cool:
 

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While I liked it, a lot. Not all details are correct. . Orochimaru left Konoha many many years after his parents death. He lost them as a child. He abandoned Konoha around the time the Fourth Hokage was chosen.

So, is this your story? Or. . Is this some preview/teaser for it?
 

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While I liked it, a lot. Not all details are correct. . Orochimaru left Konoha many many years after his parents death. He lost them as a child. He abandoned Konoha around the time the Fourth Hokage was chosen.

So, is this your story? Or. . Is this some preview/teaser for it?

Its my story Lol. Basically a sort of background/life of Oro.
During narutos training jiraiya said Oro lost his parents and later left konoha. I didnt really remember all that detail about when his parents died but it didn't really matter to the story. It doesn't change the part about him possibly leaving konoha because of his parents. He use to experiment in konoha and hiruzen sorta drove him out I guess, but it could be this is why he started his experiments and all this ties to his parents.

Anyway a lot of it isn't fact of manga but I wanted to offer something with factual details but with also some imagination to give Oro a nice back story and what not. Can't really say what happens after the end since its based on current events.
 
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