[CJ] The Sensei and The Lightning Apprentice

[Yuse]

Alright well this is going to be our trading thread.

(Raiton: Rai Shinsei)- Lightning Release: Electrical Reconstruct
Type: Offense/Supplementary
Rank: A
Range: Short - Long
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: N/A
Description: An advance lightning application technique, provided by the user through unique shape manipulation. The user by concentrating on their lightning techniques, will re-create the overall bodily structure of most electrical techniques, "hardening" them or in short, making them more concentrated then before. This technique can be considered a "next level" technique, since it can be used on virtually any lightning technique and bring them up a new level of abilities. Even already tangible/concentrated techniques can benefit this jutsu by its effect granted. The initiation of this technique is done by simply performing an extra hand seal during performance of the initial lightning jutsu, it would allow it to be done within the same time-frame. By having lightning more concentrated, they become less likely to conduct on water, have a specific penetrable offensive ability, less unpredictable through movement, but tougher to hear since its so compacted. Brightness remains relatively the same however. This technique can be considered a unique method of electrical creation. This form of lightning can also be used to combat other energy based techniques without phasing through one another. When this technique is used in conjunction to unfocused lightning techniques, they lose their numbing/paralyzing qualities in exchange for more destructive ones. For example, Nagashi would behave as a focused lightning technique. It would expand from the user more slowly due to being a focused lightning technique and it's effects would by no means be immediate. However, it will become capable of dealing damage and destroying higher ranked (S-Rank and below) techniques following Raiton's elemental strengths and weaknesses.

Note: Can only be used four times
Note: Can only be taught by Yusei
Note: Can't be used on Forbidden rank lightning

 

[Noni]

This hardens electricity to improve destruction, makes it tangible, and difficult to hear. Add this with environment stuff and it becomes a great technique.

 

[Noni]

You will get other stuff eventually but for now...

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(Raiton: Kaminari no Yōna)- Lightning Release: Thunderous Recreation
Type: Offense/Supplementary/Defense
Rank: S
Range: Short - Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: N/A (Depends on technique)
Description: An elemental lightning technique based around shape manipulation, a concept deprived from Lightning Release: Lightning Blades Levitation and the Lightning Shadow Clone. The basic concept is, the user will either release unfocused lightning onto a conductible material (either through touch, or sending a bolt through the air, or ground), or inject this jutsu into preexisting lightning to harness the lightning technique/material. The user is able to create duplicates of the original jutsu. The appearance of the duplicated jutsu is exactly the same as the previous technique, their damaging property, rank, size, and purpose of jutsu is relatively the same as well. This technique can be used on streams, projectiles, humanoids, self-sustaining techs, etc. Most of the time "shocking" to touch, the lightning duplicate will have a certain amount of tangibility to remain in shape. The user can create an extra beast for attack, or another spear of lightning. Alternatively, when used on jutsus/weapons with lightning conducted on it, the user can create a duplicate from that as well (only tangible elements). The difference between using this jutsu on already existing lightning, or on conducted lightning, is that the conducted lightning (such as a kunai with nagashi), will appear to be an exact copy, its internal body composed of electricity, but in appearance looks regular as ever. And when struck, reverts back to a regular state of pure lightning. To the opponents eye's, this method would look simply like a clone of the original technique, though this might not fool some forms of sensory, and dojutsu. These duplicate jutsus can be controlled as a streaming, or can be aimed as a projectile. The duplicates are created short range of the original jutsu, but the user can inject/use this jutsu on techniques from virtually any range. The power of the duplicates is equally divided between the numbers created if needed by the user. A drawback to this jutsu is shape matters, it can be used on shaped/tangible lightning techniques, or tangible materials conducted with lightning. This can not be used on one's self with lightning armor based jutsus.

Note: Can only be used three times
Note: Can only be taught by Noni
Note: A duplicate can last up to two turns max
Note: Can not be used with natural lightning (e.g. Kirin), because of its scarce and how limited it is to control
Note: A duplicate can only be used on one technique at a time, if the user wants to use this technique on another, they would have to re-perform this technique

 

[Yuse]

You are the greatest, read this so many times its not even funny lol.Ok so only a few questions.Is only the replication of conducted lightning appear to be an exact copy like a clone of the user or is that just if its conducted replication.If so does that mean If I were to use this on an earth golem it would be an exact copy of the earth golem but be composed of lightning and visually look like its composed of lightning.Also does controlling a replication via streaming or projectiles depend on the technique or can you choose by that I mean if I were to Make a duplication of senbon would it automatically be made a projectile or would I be able to control it as I would a streaming tech.Final question would be you list it cant be used on ones self but what If I tried to duplicate a clone that had a lightning armor on?

 

[Yuse]

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#1 Raiton: (Kami no dorei) — Lightning Release: Servants of the Divine
Type: Supplementary/Offensive/Defense
Rank: S
Range: Short - Long
Chakra Cost: 40 ( 5 additional Cp for every turn sustained)
Damage Points: (5-80)
Description: The user will gather a large amount of Lightning Chakra and perform 3 hand seals. The user will then release the chakra, manipulating it to create a creature or creatures composed of extremely focused lightning. These "servants" take on the appearance of small, yellow, cylindrical, creatures with either one or two eyes. The lightning composing their bodies is extremely focused, that it makes little to no sound. These servants require constant chakra and control to stay on the field. The technique revolves around affecting the servants in 3 specific ways. Their first way is through their ability of complete mastery of shape manipulation, allowing the user to freely manipulate their focused body, or parts of it, into any form they desire. For example, the user can manipulate a servants arm to become a spear of lightning, form both arms into a shield of sorts for both offensive and defensive purposes, etc. The second ability comes in two forms. The first form involves reverting the focused electrical bodies of the servant(s) into an unfocused electrical current, similar to a Chidori Nagashi. The other form is simply causing their body to explode into an electrical explosion. However, servants that are self-destructed in anyway are completely lost afterwards.The final ability allows the user to have the servant(s) passively split and combine following basic Rank Splitting principals (e.g. 1 S-Rank Servant can divide into 4 B-Rank Servant & 4 B-Rank Servant can combine into 1 S-Rank Servant.) A user is capable of forming 1 S-Rank Servant or several lower-rank Servant from the beginning. In the event that a Servant is destroyed, the Rank of the existing Servant do not change (e.g. 4 B-Rank Servant are out on the field, one is destroyed and 3 remain, the 3 remaining B-Rank Servant stay B-Rank). Also due to how focused/concentrated the lightning is, it does not get conducted by liquids such as water.

Note: Self destructing count as an additional a move
Note: The rank of each attack or defense of a minion correlates to the specific rank of the minion
Note: The size of each servant is dependent on the rank
Note: Shape Manipulation is limited to the Servants bodies. As such, they cannot release projectile attacks
Note: The Servants last a maximum of 4 turns
Note: Can be used 2 times per battle
Note: No S-rank lightning in the same or next turn.
Note: Can only be taught by Yusei

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Indra - God of Thunder
Type: Weapon
Rank: Forbidden
Range: Short-long
Chakra: 40 (maintaining levitation costs 10 Cp a turn)
Damage: N/A
Description: Legend has it that long ago there lived a Group of Monks that devoted themselves to the art of Lightning.They spent their days amassing as much knowledge as they could on it, through years of research on its abilities and the practice of its uses through ninjutsu. Years passed and their knowledge continued to grow, reaching their final days however the monks feared that all the knowledge they had amassed on the art would fall victim to time, and thus all came to an agreement.They Forged a weapon in which they stored all the knowledge and abilities they had amassed by sacrificing their chakra and their lives.The weapon would be named Indra after the god of Thunder and Rain and the group would forever be remembered as The Monks of Indra.In terms of Appearance Indra has 3 forms.Its basic form is a solid gold ring with a lightning bolt engraved on it.Its second form is a gold lightning bolt shaped sword with a smaller lightning bolt shaped opening near the black handle.And its third and final form is that of a solid gold staff.

Abilities -

Indra's Awareness - Through research and practice the first monk discovered that through the understanding of electrical charges and their pull of one another, that with enough skill one could harness the ability to sense them after completely mastering Lightning release.Able to Sense the world around him through electrical charges, although only limited to objects that contained electricity. Able to sense techniques easily, but otherwise limited to only short range when sensing something other then a technique such as an opponent. This is due to needing to be close to sense the weak or other wise unfocused electrical charges such as that of a human being's. After sacrificing himself, Indra gained the passive ability to grant its user an awareness of the electrical charges around him. This is passively done by the user either wearing Indra as a ring or wielding it in sword or staff form.(This ability is usable only by a user who has a lightning specialty, but to be able to sense things other then techniques up to short range the user MUST have a "Primary" Lightning Specialty)

Indra's Levitation - Through research and practice the third monk discovered the levitating properties of Lightning after stumbling upon and studying the effects of a well known jutsu by the name of Levitating Lightning blades.He realized by shrouding something in lightning consisting of the same properties as that of Levitating Lightning Blades, he could levitate the object and take control over it.Requiring no contact, it is applied by merely releasing an chakra discharge at the intended target which is then changed to extremely focused lightning that shrouds the target and levitates it. This is done by simply preforming a hand-seal while wearing Indra as a ring or waving Indra in its Sword or Staff form, to shroud something in an aura of lightning and control it through levitation. The lightning shroud is purely supplementary it's only purpose is to levitate the target, it does not get conducted by liquids or anything of the sort nor does it shock/harm the target whatsoever due to its extremely focused and condensed nature similar to that of the Raikage's Armor.(This counts as one of the users 3 moves per turn and the initial amount of chakra used is proportionate to the size/rank of the intended target.As well as costing 10 chakra points per turn to maintain. In terms of what can be levitated it is limited only to tangible objects and techniques up to A-rank things of a solid or tangible state like that of earth and liquids, energy based techniques cannot be be effected unless the technique states having a solid property, nor can it be used on living creatures. However due to their relationship wind techniques of any sort, even extremely focused tangible ones can not be levitated.)

Note: Changing Indra's form takes up 1 of the 3 moves
Note: Indra forbids the user of using wind techniques of any kind.
Note: The wielder MUST have a Primary Lightning Specialty to sense things other then techniques and is limited to ONLY Short range
Note: Can only be taught by Yusei
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That technique in particular is very special to me, for reasons that should be obvious. As for the weapon you are the only person who will ever learn it. Any questions?

 

[Noni]

No questions, both dope. More to come I'm sure.

 

[Noni]

You wanted me to post here for your Bday, so here is a post.

 

[Noni]

Yusei linked me this thread, but then asked me to ask someone to teach him a CJ. I feel like he is going a little retarded, what do you guys think?

 

[Mirai]

Yusei linked me this thread, but then asked me to ask someone to teach him a CJ. I feel like he is going a little retarded, what do you guys think?

Indeed he did

 

[Yuse]

Yusei linked me this thread, but then asked me to ask someone to teach him a CJ. I feel like he is going a little retarded, what do you guys think?

You've had quite the influence on me I guess z.z ALL SPAM will be reported by tomo (Just throwing that out there)

 

[Noni]

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(Raiton: Nozomi negurekuto)- Lightning Release: Desiring Neglect
Type: Offense/Defense
Rank: S
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: An advance lightning application jutsu. The user will release a spear projectile out of their body, or mouth. The spear vividly similar to the False darkness spear, and can reach lengths up to four meters. It contains similar traits. Has a serious amount of piercing potential, ripping flesh apart, or bursting through rocks as it travels, and can paralyze anything that comes into contact. What makes this unique is lightning's ability to control other material, with jutsus like Lightning Blade Levitation for example. The user through a simple hand seals, can activate one, of its two special application while performing the spear, creating a sort of electrical field where the spear is the epicenter of this field. The first, offensive base (Snake hand seal), the spear will release electricity (appears like electrical wires) that extends up to mid range from its body in a Omnidirectional manner that acts as a medium for the electrical field distances, anything that is in reach of the electricity will be used as a medium for the spear (metal, rocks, water, etc), and follow the spears trajectory, and target, flanking it from the same side it reached. All the material touch will have a small shock value on contact due to the contact with the electrical wire conducting itself onto material. The second ability is opposite, and more defensive (Dragon hand seal), the spear will once again release those electrical extensions up to mid range, anything that is in reach by them will forcefully be pushed back into a longer distance, or from where they came from, this includes natural material. Both these abilities can be used on opponent's techniques, but must overpower the ranking to do so successfully. This spear can be multiplied when desired through mental command, and by holding the hand seal, can control where, and how they move. Length of the electrical extension can be adjusted from short-mid range for the users need. This spear alternatively can be harnessed by the users hands to be used in close range, and when doing so, due to being in closer contact, can control where the electricity is released from the body of the spear (the tip of the spear, laterally, etc), and still have the same effects needed. To harness the spear, it has to be created from hand.

Note: Can only be used twice
Note: When harnessed, will last up to three turns
Note: One turn cool down before re-use
Note: Can only be taught by Noni
Note: No other S-Rank or above Lightning in the user's same turn

(Raiton: Eregan Rai Jisshi)- Lightning Release: Elegant Electrical Embodiment
Type: Defense/Offense
Rank: S
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 40 (-10 per turn)
Damage Points: 80
Description: The user will gather lightning chakra throughout their body, and release it on the edge of the users skin all at once. This creates a unique armor of extreme condensed electricity for the user with random electrical wires appear out of it the armor that extends up to short range radius of the user. This doesn't add to Taijutsu but gives a more unique pain and method of attack, numbing on first contact and paralyzing on prolonged contact. Metal weapons will be shredded against the armor as well. Specific usages come along with the armor as well. Defensively, when touching things of solidity, no matter the size, the electricity will be able to ravage along the body, conducting through it, and destroy it to pieces, this makes golems in contact with the opponent vulnerable, roots of wood destroyed with ease, and steel cages less of a threat (this costs a move and is A-Rank) and extends up to the size of the construct it is negating no matter the size, this ability activates whenever the material touches the armor, even when the user is unable to notice the attack. Also, the electricity will prevent earth (KG and CE as well) to be created under the user and their short range radius for the electricity will negate it before its creation/usage (passive) due to the electrical wires created with the armor discharging lightning into the ground. The user can also create electrical whips out of their limbs that are heavily condensed able to restrict the opponent, swing around areas or slice through material/flesh that extend up to mid range. The user can shape the threads to create various tools like spears, spikes, walls, spheres, etc to aid for various purposes, using a hand seal will allow the user to release these weapons as a projectiles (count as a move and is A-Rank). The user can create up to eight constructs at most (with the use of one hand seal) with the power of this technique being split accordingly. While active, the user can only use Lightning and non-elemental abilities. The user will be able to deactivate it mentally with no time wasted. Due to the stress of the electricity the user will be unable to use Taijutsu above C-Rank for three turns, only applicable when armor is active for all 4 turns.

Note: Can only be taught by Noni
Note: Last four turns and can only be used twice per battle
Note: Can not use lightning in same turn deactivated
Note: The abilities that come with this armor can only be used four times before it disperses on its own

(Raiton: Īguru no enchō)- Lightning Release: Extension of the Eagle
Type: Supplementary/Offense/Defense
Rank: A
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 30 (+10 for every shape created)
Damage Points: N/A (Depends on the shape)
Description: An elemental lightning technique based around shape manipulation. The basic concept is, the user will erect a chain, or spear of lightning, out of a users own preexisting lightning technique (not including Chidori). Lightning techniques such as Thunder Dragon Tornado and Lightning Beast Running Technique (and other humanoids) will be able to compliment this technique well, having spear(s) or chain(s) come out the body, for various tasks. This technique is meant to compliment lightning techniques that are focused, or self-sustaining techniques. Some form of lightning combined with other elements (dual elemental technique) can also work with this technique in logical forms. The spear and/or chain are different actually. The spear more lethal, and meant to pierce and deliver serious damage to the opponent (similar to False Darkness Spear), and the chain can actually bind and shock the opponent, paralyzing them in place. Each can reach up to mid range in distance. The user can decide where to raise, and aim the artillery. The user can also decide to control them and continuously move them around the body of the technique (through mental command). A drawback is the user can never perform both a chain and a spear on the same technique, as well as if they decide to erect more of the same shape on a technique, they would have to drain more chakra. The power of this technique is equally divided between the number of created chains/spears.

Note: Can only be used three times
Note: Can only be taught by Noni
Note: A shape can last up to two turns max
Note: A shape can only be used on one technique at a time, if the user wants to change the shape, they would have to re-perform the technique
Note: Can not be used with natural lightning (e.g. Kirin), because of its scarce and how limited it is to control

aight explain lil *****.

 

[Joker]

Nothing to explain, I understand.

 

[Yuse]

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(Raiton: Nozomi negurekuto)- Lightning Release: Desiring Neglect
Type: Offense/Defense
Rank: S
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: An advance lightning application jutsu. The user will release a spear projectile out of their body, or mouth. The spear vividly similar to the False darkness spear, and can reach lengths up to four meters. It contains similar traits. Has a serious amount of piercing potential, ripping flesh apart, or bursting through rocks as it travels, and can paralyze anything that comes into contact. What makes this unique is lightning's ability to control other material, with jutsus like Lightning Blade Levitation for example. The user through a simple hand seals, can activate one, of its two special application while performing the spear, creating a sort of electrical field where the spear is the epicenter of this field. The first, offensive base (Snake hand seal), the spear will release electricity (appears like electrical wires) that extends up to mid range from its body in a Omnidirectional manner that acts as a medium for the electrical field distances, anything that is in reach of the electricity will be used as a medium for the spear (metal, rocks, water, etc), and follow the spears trajectory, and target, flanking it from the same side it reached. All the material touch will have a small shock value on contact due to the contact with the electrical wire conducting itself onto material. The second ability is opposite, and more defensive (Dragon hand seal), the spear will once again release those electrical extensions up to mid range, anything that is in reach by them will forcefully be pushed back into a longer distance, or from where they came from, this includes natural material. Both these abilities can be used on opponent's techniques, but must overpower the ranking to do so successfully. This spear can be multiplied when desired through mental command, and by holding the hand seal, can control where, and how they move. Length of the electrical extension can be adjusted from short-mid range for the users need. This spear alternatively can be harnessed by the users hands to be used in close range, and when doing so, due to being in closer contact, can control where the electricity is released from the body of the spear (the tip of the spear, laterally, etc), and still have the same effects needed. To harness the spear, it has to be created from hand.

Note: Can only be used twice
Note: When harnessed, will last up to three turns
Note: One turn cool down before re-use
Note: Can only be taught by Noni
Note: No other S-Rank or above Lightning in the user's same turn

(Raiton: Eregan Rai Jisshi)- Lightning Release: Elegant Electrical Embodiment
Type: Defense/Offense
Rank: S
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 40 (-10 per turn)
Damage Points: 80
Description: The user will gather lightning chakra throughout their body, and release it on the edge of the users skin all at once. This creates a unique armor of extreme condensed electricity for the user with random electrical wires appear out of it the armor that extends up to short range radius of the user. This doesn't add to Taijutsu but gives a more unique pain and method of attack, numbing on first contact and paralyzing on prolonged contact. Metal weapons will be shredded against the armor as well. Specific usages come along with the armor as well. Defensively, when touching things of solidity, no matter the size, the electricity will be able to ravage along the body, conducting through it, and destroy it to pieces, this makes golems in contact with the opponent vulnerable, roots of wood destroyed with ease, and steel cages less of a threat (this costs a move and is A-Rank) and extends up to the size of the construct it is negating no matter the size, this ability activates whenever the material touches the armor, even when the user is unable to notice the attack. Also, the electricity will prevent earth (KG and CE as well) to be created under the user and their short range radius for the electricity will negate it before its creation/usage (passive) due to the electrical wires created with the armor discharging lightning into the ground. The user can also create electrical whips out of their limbs that are heavily condensed able to restrict the opponent, swing around areas or slice through material/flesh that extend up to mid range. The user can shape the threads to create various tools like spears, spikes, walls, spheres, etc to aid for various purposes, using a hand seal will allow the user to release these weapons as a projectiles (count as a move and is A-Rank). The user can create up to eight constructs at most (with the use of one hand seal) with the power of this technique being split accordingly. While active, the user can only use Lightning and non-elemental abilities. The user will be able to deactivate it mentally with no time wasted. Due to the stress of the electricity the user will be unable to use Taijutsu above C-Rank for three turns, only applicable when armor is active for all 4 turns.

Note: Can only be taught by Noni
Note: Last four turns and can only be used twice per battle
Note: Can not use lightning in same turn deactivated
Note: The abilities that come with this armor can only be used four times before it disperses on its own

(Raiton: Īguru no enchō)- Lightning Release: Extension of the Eagle
Type: Supplementary/Offense/Defense
Rank: A
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 30 (+10 for every shape created)
Damage Points: N/A (Depends on the shape)
Description: An elemental lightning technique based around shape manipulation. The basic concept is, the user will erect a chain, or spear of lightning, out of a users own preexisting lightning technique (not including Chidori). Lightning techniques such as Thunder Dragon Tornado and Lightning Beast Running Technique (and other humanoids) will be able to compliment this technique well, having spear(s) or chain(s) come out the body, for various tasks. This technique is meant to compliment lightning techniques that are focused, or self-sustaining techniques. Some form of lightning combined with other elements (dual elemental technique) can also work with this technique in logical forms. The spear and/or chain are different actually. The spear more lethal, and meant to pierce and deliver serious damage to the opponent (similar to False Darkness Spear), and the chain can actually bind and shock the opponent, paralyzing them in place. Each can reach up to mid range in distance. The user can decide where to raise, and aim the artillery. The user can also decide to control them and continuously move them around the body of the technique (through mental command). A drawback is the user can never perform both a chain and a spear on the same technique, as well as if they decide to erect more of the same shape on a technique, they would have to drain more chakra. The power of this technique is equally divided between the number of created chains/spears.

Note: Can only be used three times
Note: Can only be taught by Noni
Note: A shape can last up to two turns max
Note: A shape can only be used on one technique at a time, if the user wants to change the shape, they would have to re-perform the technique
Note: Can not be used with natural lightning (e.g. Kirin), because of its scarce and how limited it is to control

aight explain lil *****.

Love you too Senpai ^^

Desiring neglect allows the user through the offensive method to be able to release a spear of lightning similar to false darkness, with the inherent ability to release electric wires from itself and draw in conductive material towards it like rocks, water, weapons all with a small amount of electricity allowing them to shock. The latter is very versatile and can do a lot of damage depending on the terrain or combos used with broken section of rock for example become deadly as they all get drawn in towards the spear which even if not directly impaling someone could do damage via the materials it draws towards the opponents direction. The defensive method is even better to me, even if the opponent try to pull a fast one or general got a technique off before the user, as long as this technique overpowers it in rank it repels the techniques of the opponent. All in all awesome jutsu


I remember asking you for this one lol. You wanted a lightning armor but needed to achieve one in a unique way, since focused lightning covering the body was not only overdone as a custom but somewhat patented by the raikage. The result was reversing the process as the armor unlike the latter version allowed you to paralyze on contact but was also extremely destructive. One of the concept you introduced in this technique was one you had me expand on in my own works, the ability to release a discharge of electricity that would tear anything to shreds upon physical contact regardless of the size, a pseudo absolute defense as it passively releases the discharge upon contact without needed you to direct it at all still costing a move of course. That and my personal favorite part is the negation of earth techniques and CEs beneath the user, as the lightning chakra negates any chakra beneath the user as well due to their being electrical wires unseen by the target below the user. And last but certainly not least are the whips released which can be used to form various construct never exceeding 8 at a time however and logically the power being split for every construct and even able to release them as projectiles. Oh and that restriction "Can not use lightning in same turn deactivated" You sly dog, I gotta try that one.

Extension of the eagle simpler then the other two but still very versatile. Essentially the user is capable of releasing from his own lightning techniques either spears of a focused nature with the obvious intent of attacking and causing more harm in different situations. Or releasing chains meant to bind the target and shock him, paralyzing him in the process. They are capable of extending to that of Mid range but they cant be used together at the same time, individually however one can make several of either the chains or spears. Also, the user remains in control of them able to move it around the body of the technique released from. And of course for ever chain or spear released the power is divided.

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Indra - God of Thunder
Type: Weapon
Rank: Forbidden
Range: Short-long
Chakra: 40 (maintaining levitation costs 10 Cp a turn)
Damage: N/A
Description: Legend has it that long ago there lived a Group of Monks that devoted themselves to the art of Lightning.They spent their days amassing as much knowledge as they could on it, through years of research on its abilities and the practice of its uses through ninjutsu. Years passed and their knowledge continued to grow, reaching their final days however the monks feared that all the knowledge they had amassed on the art would fall victim to time, and thus all came to an agreement.They Forged a weapon in which they stored all the knowledge and abilities they had amassed by sacrificing their chakra and their lives.The weapon would be named Indra after the god of Thunder and the group would forever be remembered as The Monks of Indra.In terms of Appearance Indra has 3 forms.Its basic form is a solid gold ring with a lightning bolt engraved on it. Its second form is a gold lightning bolt shaped sword with a smaller lightning bolt shaped opening near the black handle. And its third and final form is that of a solid gold staff or Shakujo.

Abilities -

Indra's Awareness - Through research and practice the first monk discovered that through the understanding of electrical charges and their pull of one another, that with enough skill one could harness the ability to sense them after completely mastering Lightning release. Able to sense the world around him through electrical charges. Able to sense techniques easily (Any technique) and by extension genjutsu via sensing the disruption in the electric waves affecting the brain (Like normal sensing simply allows the user to know he is under the effects of an illusion, does not affect the actual illusion in anyway), but otherwise limited to only short range when sensing something other then a technique such as an opponent. This is due to needing to be close to sense the weak or other wise unfocused electrical charges such as that of a human being's. After sacrificing himself, Indra gained the passive ability to grant its user an awareness of the electrical charges around him. This is passively done by the user either wearing Indra as a ring or wielding it in sword or staff form.(This ability is usable only by a user who has a lightning specialty, but to be able to sense things other then techniques up to short range the user MUST have a "Primary" Lightning Specialty)

Indra's Levitation - Through research and practice the third monk discovered the levitating properties of Lightning after stumbling upon and studying the effects of a well known jutsu by the name of Levitating Lightning blades. He realized by shrouding something in lightning consisting of the same properties as that of Levitating Lightning Blades, he could levitate the object and take control over it. Requiring no contact, it is applied by merely releasing an chakra discharge at the intended target which is then changed to extremely focused lightning that shrouds the target and levitates it. This is done by simply preforming a hand-seal while wearing Indra as a ring or waving Indra in its Sword or Staff form, to shroud something in an aura of lightning and control it through levitation. The lightning shroud is purely supplementary it's only purpose is to levitate the target, it does not get conducted by liquids or anything of the sort nor does it shock/harm the target whatsoever due to its extremely focused and condensed nature similar to that of the Raikage's Armor. (This counts as one of the users 3 moves per turn and the initial amount of chakra used is proportionate to the size/rank of the intended target. As well as costing 10 chakra points per turn to maintain. In terms of what can be levitated it is limited only to tangible objects and techniques up to A-rank things of a solid or tangible state like that of earth and liquids, energy based techniques cannot be be effected unless the technique states having a solid property, nor can it be used on living creatures. However due to their relationship wind techniques of any sort, even extremely focused tangible ones can not be levitated.)

Note: Changing Indra's form takes up 1 of the 3 moves
Note: Due to Indras hate for wind any wind technique preformed by the user requires + 10 chakra
Note: The wielder must have a Primary Lightning Specialty to sense things other then techniques and is limited to only Short range
Note: Indra is Indestructible
Note: Can only be taught by Yusei

Raiton: (Kami no dorei) — Lightning Release: Servants of the Divine
Type: Supplementary/Offensive/Defense
Rank: S
Range: Short - Long
Chakra Cost: 40 ( 5 additional Cp for every turn sustained)
Damage Points: (5-80)
Description: The user will gather a large amount of Lightning Chakra and perform 3 hand seals. The user will then release the chakra, manipulating it to create a creature or creatures composed of extremely focused lightning. These "servants" take on the appearance of small, yellow, white or blue, cylindrical, creatures with either one or two eyes. The lightning composing their bodies is extremely focused, that it makes little to no sound. These servants require constant chakra to stay on the field. The technique revolves around affecting the servants in 3 specific ways. Their first way is through their ability of complete mastery of shape manipulation, allowing the user to freely manipulate their focused body, or parts of it, into any form they desire. For example, the user can manipulate a servants arm to become a spear of lightning (extends to that of mid-range), form both arms into a shield of sorts for both offensive and defensive purposes, or manipulation for supplementary uses such as manipulating their arms into wings to fly and etc. The second ability comes in two forms. The first form involves reverting the focused electrical bodies of the servant(s) into an unfocused electrical current, similar to a Chidori Nagashi, they can revert back to focused form through a handseal. The other form is simply causing their body to explode into an electrical explosion. However, servants that are self-destructed via the electrical explosion method are completely lost afterwards. The final ability allows the user to have the servant(s) passively split and combine following basic Rank Splitting principals (e.g. 1 S-Rank Servant can divide into 4 B-Rank Servant & 4 B-Rank Servant can combine into 1 S-Rank Servant.) A user is capable of forming 1 S-Rank Servant or several lower-rank Servant from the beginning. In the event that a Servant is destroyed, the Rank of the existing Servant do not change (e.g. 4 B-Rank Servant are out on the field, one is destroyed and 3 remain, the 3 remaining B-Rank Servant stay B-Rank). Also due to how focused/concentrated the lightning is, it does not get conducted by liquids such as water (This of course does not apply to when a servants reverts to unfocused electricity).

Note: User can only use lightning based techniques or techniques utilizing basic chakra while sustaining the servants.
Note: The rank of each attack or defense of a servant correlates to the specific rank of the servant
Note: The size of each servant is dependent on the rank
Note: Servants destructing into an electrical explosion are completely lost afterwards
Note: Shape Manipulation is limited to the Servants bodies. As such, they cannot release projectile attacks
Note: The Servants last a maximum of 4 turns
Note: Can be used 2 times per battle
Note: No S-rank lightning in the next turn.
Note: Can only be taught by Yusei

Both Got some nice updates. Indra can now officially sense any technique as well as Genjutsu, and instead of forbidding the user from the use of wind it makes him spend an extra +10. Servants got a nice update too, the limbs can now extend to midrange and supplementary shape manipulation for things like flight can be done, and finally reverting to unfocused electricity no longer destroys the servant and they can be reverted to focused form via a hand seal.

 

[Noni]

Good explanation, got no questions for those updates.

 

[Yuse]

Spoiler

(Raiton: Shusei Bolla)- Lightning Release: Bolla's Modification
Type: Supplementary
Rank: A
Range: Short - Long
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: N/A (Depends on the jutsu)
Description: The user will perform one hand seal and release their chakra towards pre-existing lightning, specifically lightning that is either "focused" (lightning that retains a shape, or has powerful piercing ability, such as a Spear or Animal) or "unfocused" (lightning that does not retain a shape, and destructive, such as the nagashi). Using a concept that has been shown from various lightning jutsus (specifically with the Chidori variants), the user will take a hold of their lightning chakra, and forcefully turn that chakra into the opposite composition it is retaining at that moment. Essentially the user at will, will be able to turn focused lightning, by willfully dispelling its shape, turning it into a unfocused lightning source. When turning it into an unfocused lightning source, it becomes heavily similar to the Nagashi, having numbness and destructive capability of against solid matter. Unfocused lightning also has a unique property of conducting and combining with other material and elements, when doing that it would add a 20+ damage. The same is for unfocused lightning, where the user will inject their chakra and turn the unfocused lightning source, and turn it into a specific shape, the unfocused lightning would come together to create the shape of lightning spear (Similar to the Lightning Release: False Darkness Spear). To allow for unfocused lightning to turn into a spear, the user will perform this technique first, and then the inject itself into a unfocused lightning source/technique that will either be dormant (read further) or created right after through a technique. From their the user will be able to control the unfocused lightning source to allow for the manipulation to occur. A similar process as streaming techniques, after the spear is created, the user doesn't need to focus on it no longer for that scenario. The spear will have a clean piercing power and a certain amount of tangibility. Note the size, rank, and damage capabilities depend on the initial current of the first lightning (i.e. a B-Rank will inflict 40 damage). That rule only applies to unfocused techniques made focused. Focused techniques transformed into an unfocused surge will have no damage capabilities but they will be capable of paralyzing the opponent in the same way as Chidori Nagashi. The larger the initial technique was will dictate the size of the reformed technique. When a focused technique is turned into an unfocused surge of lightning, the lightning will spread out in such a way that it encompasses short-range around the area the jutsu originally encompassed. This jutsu can fully be used on lightning that is combined with other materials or conducted on other constructs (such as water, metal, earth, etc). By simply turning the surface of the lightning into focused or unfocused lightning, however this comes with a drawback, where the initial elemental combo will no longer be in effect for that material it is conducting, destroying it and rendering it useless. This jutsu can be used on dormant lightning, for there is evidence of lightning remaining dormant, things like holding the nagashi on a sword, or lightning currents in water sources/techniques (the user would still need to inject this technique into that lightning source to take control and manipulate it). Evidence of this kind of advance shape manipulation and reformation is present by taking evidence of the various chidori variants, and how they can turn into different shapes or perform different attacks/tasks. This is simply an advance offset of that mechanism in lightning. Another note is, when the user manipulates the lightning's form, they can re-aim the lightning (like a projectile), or remain focus and stream the lightning.

Note: Can only be taught by Noni
Note: Can only be used three times per battle
Note: Cannot be used on an opponent's technique
Note: This jutsu can only be used once per technique, so when the form of lightning is changed, it can not be reversed
Note: Can not be used with natural lightning (e.g. Kirin), because of its scarce and how limited it is to control

- Awesome technique compliments a lightning dominant arsenal like no other. It allows one to change the composition of their lightning techniques from either focused to non focused or non-focused to focused. In the case of turning it to unfocused it becomes conductible adding a plus 20 damage. Or if the user were to focus it and manipulate it into a spear it gains the tangibility and piercing aspect. Overall I could write alot more but thats the core. Great jutsu very useful. Thanks Senpai

 

[Noni]

You aint learning bolla. Post Plasma protection.

 

[Penguin]

You aint learning bolla. Post Plasma protection.

I concur. Post Plasma please.

 

[Yuse]

Spoiler

( Raiton: Purazuma Bōru ) - Lightning Release: Plasma Ball
Rank: B
Type: Offensive, Defence
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 20 (-5 per turn active)
Damage points: 40
Description: The user manipulating their chakra generates a plasma barrier around them to serve as a defence which protects them from incoming attacks, even from something as wide-ranged as the Quicksand Waterfall Flow. However the user cannot use other techniques besides lightning release or physical based techniques while sustaining the technique. The user can rush at their opponents even if the barrier is active and use it to ram against them. The shield can be used offensively, by discharging the electricity in the direction of their choice in a wave resulting in using the energy of the barrier and ending its effects.
Note: Technique remains active for 3 turns.

I hate you. Advancement of previous lightning techniques. Creates a barrier of plasma around you. Good defense and can be released as a wave. Lasts 3 turns but the bad thing is you can only use lightning and physical based attacks while sustaining it.

 

[Noni]

Ha . I'll be sure to give Bolla to the homie Joker and Penguin. Should fill the spots up.

 

[Penguin]

Spoiler

( Raiton: Purazuma Bōru ) - Lightning Release: Plasma Ball
Rank: B
Type: Offensive, Defence
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 20 (-5 per turn active)
Damage points: 40
Description: The user manipulating their chakra generates a plasma barrier around them to serve as a defence which protects them from incoming attacks, even from something as wide-ranged as the Quicksand Waterfall Flow. However the user cannot use other techniques besides lightning release or physical based techniques while sustaining the technique. The user can rush at their opponents even if the barrier is active and use it to ram against them. The shield can be used offensively, by discharging the electricity in the direction of their choice in a wave resulting in using the energy of the barrier and ending its effects.
Note: Technique remains active for 3 turns.

I hate you. Advancement of previous lightning techniques. Creates a barrier of plasma around you. Good defense and can be released as a wave. Lasts 3 turns but the bad thing is you can only use lightning and physical based attacks while sustaining it.

I've seen monkey's make better jutsu than this. I void my trade, pleb.