The samurai DarkNexus

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DarkNexus was a young boy when introduced to war. He lived in a little village on the outskirts of flourishing rice fields. He worked day by day in the rice fields with his father so that the family can survive in the village. One night he awoke to the screams of his villagers. His eyes opened to reveal a wall of flames and his family struck down by sword. He managed to crawl out the window and when he stood up the whole village was in flames and people were destroying the village and murdering the townsfolk. He did the only thing he knew to do so he hid. After the destruction subsided he was alone. Nobody to turn to but one man. This old man was a friend of the family since before DarkNexus was born. He also knew the way of the sword. With a thoughts of revenge and sadness he sought out the old man known as chibasama kojiro. Once found he was brought in by chibasama. He was trained in the way of the sword for twelve long years. After those long and diffucult years of training he was finally deemed a swordsman. Of the katana. His trails were not yet complete yet. He wanted to be a noble samurai of the sword. So now DarkNexus is on a quest to find his parents murderer and to learn the ways of the samurai

Name: DarkNexus
Age: 25
Location: land of rice patties
Hair: long and black
Build: 6 foot 185 lbs
Demeanor: vengeful yet kind
 

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This bio is a fail you should have followed a template!!! And you need to read the rules this will never be accepted!!!
 

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Here is a link to the bio template edit your bio and add this instead of what you have and you fill it out!!!
 

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Is this supposed to be a bio? If it is, please check and read the rules and formatting of a biography before making one. If you don't follow the formatting, it'll be declined. If it 's not, then I have no idea what it could be xD
 

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It's a good thing that have interest in a samurai bio. Here's few things you need to change.
1. Follow this bio template:
2. Even if your samurai bio is born somewhere else, you need to mention in your bio history that he has been to(or still is in) Land of Iron(your village of alliance) for his samurai training.

One or two pics of the character and a Katana won't hurt right? :p
 
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