THE RAGE INSIDE part 1 (poem/ epic)

izinagi54

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They think they can hold my soul.
i make sure they look at me in fear.
my eyes need the blood they carry.

My hunger to be sooth with their gore.
they torn my soul in half.
I'll split them two.

their greatest will fall, they shall bawl.
they did ignore my cries as a child.
now they need to fear my rage.

for it is the beast inside let loose.
they cannot turn it off.
the soft bred swine.
martyers to do their work.
THEIR GOD IS DEAD.

i am the one that will manifest itself in it's true form.
for they think i am weak.
but i am stronger then their pathetic armies.
let the slaughter begin.

they destoryed my people.
they killed my father.
desicrated my honor.

now i stand there with their blood to bear on my tongue and lip.
nothing a can sooth my rage.
they will pay... their childern will play with their own fears.
until it rears it's ugly head and slaughters their hopes and futures.
so goes the ways of war... now... i have a score to settle.
 

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hope you like... this is coming from the sick and depraved part of mind and i desire it be a little fullfilled


PS... its about a child soldeir
 

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Well, I think you definitely have a talent for writing. Your language is vivid and descriptive, but I'd love to know what's NOT in the sick and depraved part of your mind(; I'm sure there is plenty of talent and passion there, too.
 

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Well, I think you definitely have a talent for writing. Your language is vivid and descriptive, but I'd love to know what's NOT in the sick and depraved part of your mind(; I'm sure there is plenty of talent and passion there, too.

war is hell..... im the devil
 

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then your ways have only fueled the few
 

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I'm digging the Fiver Finger Death Punch. Saw them in concert last summer.
 

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impressive work. mark a true genious
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