The Prize Fighter : testing out my story for my manga.

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The Prize Fighter

Kado: You Guy's Pack Everything??

Yoma: You Mean Pack Everything For a Long A** Walk?? Hmmm Lemme See, Check!! :p


Kado: Come On Yoma, Its Not That Horrible, Just About a 30 Mile Walk And We'll be in The Next Town.

Yoma: Hmph, * I Bet The Pro's dont Have to Walk Anywhere*


Kado: Yoma, Look Before You Walk.

Yoma: What's That's Suppose to Mean?? Are you Saying I need to Think Before I act? Are you Implying That I Shouldnt Be Coming On This Journey Kado?! Are You Saying..........AARRRGGGHHH!!!


Kado: Well Actually I Was Talking about Those Set Of Stairs You Were About to Fall On. But Yes You should Also think Before You Act :rolleyes:


Okai: Yoma??? ..... :flaw:*knocks on head* Yooooommmmaaa??? hmm kinda sad how Kado's eyes are bandaged up and you werent the one who saw the stairs.

Yoma: he....he....he.... No Mary!!!....... Mommy Loves Me More!!!


Kado: Okai you know i can see threw these bandages. I just like fighting with them so I can close my eyes and rely on my other senses. Do you have everything?? We arent gonna be back for a while.

Okai: Yeah, but you know... Its weird. We Trained every day in this town.

Kado: Yeah, but lets make sure that our training wont go to waste!

Okai: Your right Kado. But before we leave, i need to stop at the orphanage. I need to tell Sonya good bye. Can you get momma's boy conscious while i grab my stuff?

Kado: Yoma????? Wake up. * taps head with sword*

They set out and head for the Orphanage​

Yoma: haaa!!!!! I cant wait to leave this town and become a top notch pro!!!

Kado: Yet you cant watch out for a set of stairs:sy:

Okai: Can you guys wait while I go inside?? I need to tell her goodbye. * walks in the towns Orphanage*

Kado: You think Okai will be okay?

Yoma: Hard to tell, they did grow up together here. Besides us, Sonya was his bestfriend. We need to cheer Okai up when he comes out!!!

Okai: Sonya, Ill always keep intouch. And its not like im leaving forever.... it's just for a short time you know?? I cant stay stuck in this town. This town is a small town but no one even knows who we are here, We are all treated like strangers.

Sonya: But does any of that even matter?? Does it bother you that much to kill yourself in a Arena just so people will remember your name??

Okai: Sonya I wanna be somebody!! Even though no one knows us I wanna bring wealth to this town! I dont wanna die with knowing the fact that i havent accomplished my goal of being a fighter.

Sonya: * hug* Then be safe.... and please.... come back soon.

Okai: Sonya are you crying???

Sonya: Me crying?? Okai you know i never cry. Remember, im that girl that you met that had to expression on her face remember.

Okai: Good bye Sonya.

Okai notices that his shouldar was wet from her tears, as he leaves the room.​

Kado: Yoma!!!! Stop Shooting at the chickens!!!! :sy:

Yoma: Reelaax Kado :eek: Im only shooting their feet, and its not like these things arent gonna end up in a bucket anyway.

Okai: Yoma, we need to say good bye to your mom dont we??

Yoma: Yeah we do. :y

Kado: Yoma this time no crying -__-

Yoma: Pshhh!!!! Me?? Cry?? Hah!! i dont cry im a man ive never cried in my life!!

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Yoma: *sob* Good bye mom!!! * sob* * sob* I love you please dont leave this house so i wont ever be able to find you again!!! * sob* :T_T:

Yoma's mom: Awwwh its okay dear, your mother wont ever do that sweetie!!
Now Kado you look after my son, he's a handful and i dont want him getting hurt.

Kado: Yes ma'am i understand.

Yoma's mom: Now you grew up here too for 5 whole years now so you give your mother a hug!

Kado: *sigh* yes ma'm

Yoma's mom: Now Okai you give me a hug too, you were just as much a part of this house too even though you lived at the orphanage. I consider you a son. Now you boys behave yourselves.

Kado: Yes Mom

Okai: Yes Mom

Yoma: baaaaaahhhaaaaaa :T_T: Pweeaaaasseeee mommmyy!!! dont let these bad bad man take me!!!! *sob* * sob*

As Kado & Okai drag Yoma away from his mother, they set off​

Yoma: Phew thought that woman wouldnt ever let me leave, did you see how bad she cried and begged me to stay??? Hah Mom's

Okai: :|

Kado: :|

Yoma: okay so basically our plan is, find an inn, using what gold we have, find an arena, win our fight's, and then travel to another town and do this over again until we become pro's???

Kado: Your correct. But our fights wont be that easy to win Yoma. We need to practice every chance we get to become stronger. Theirs no telling how strong our opponet will be. And the pro's are pro's for a reason. They posses incredible strength and speed.

Yoma: Oh come on Kado, we'll all be fine. Your blade, Okai's spiked fist and my shooting will do wonders in the arena.

Okai: Guys look out!!! :eek:

* A hover passer (a train that hovers above rail tracks) shoots over their heads above the platform theyve been walking on to the next city*

Yoma: GGGHHRR Tell me again why we're not riding that thing Kado??!!!

Kado: Do you have 600 gold each Yoma??

Yoma: Gah transportation is so..... *pulls out gun and shoots*

Okai: These damn things again? You'd think someone would stop letting them escape from their cages.

Kado: Be careful. We have a long way to go and their wont be any doctors that can treat us out here. If they sting us.

Yoma: Hah please, if we get hurt by these things we have no business even being in the pros.
Chapter 1 end
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