The poem that was never titled

[King Cobra]

Hey guys here is a poem I wrote last year for a girl Unfortunatly it never got to her nor I never titled this. To both things I don't know it just didn't feel right to give it to her and the title well I just didn't know what to title it lol. Around this time i was going threw alot and well i had a good friend there for me a friend I eventually gained fellings for. I found it while cleaning up so here it is guys just thought I'll share it.

The violet in your eyes is enough for any guy to look twice. If I ever had to choose I would want them to be one of the last things I see before I die... When I close my eyes I see the beauty of your eyes staring back at me in the darkness.

Your smile, just thinking about it makes me smile. You have the most beautiful smile I've ever seen, like I said just thinking about it makes me smile. I love it when your smiling it brings me the most amount of joy I've had in a long time. I wish I can look at it forever I wish I can have it forever.

Imma be honest with you right now when I'm with you I'm the happiest guy on Earth. When I'm away from you I'm either sad or thinking about you.... Actually all I do is think about you, your eyes, your smile, your face, your everything. I just can't stop your like an angel God sent down from the heavens so I can be happy. I want you here with me. I want you to be my forever. I want you in my life.

 

[Kira Mizuki]

Let me tell you something, honestly I like the idea of a guy writing a poem for a girl. It's sweet and reveals your love for the girl that you like. I think you're one of a kind guy that cares about the person that he loves and not some heartless jerk that only takes pleasure from girls. Also, you're not embarrassed to do something so corny just to express how much you love the girl. I'm sorry that your wonderful poem never got to the designated person and I hope she has the chance to read this. But, you know, if someone wrote something like this to me, I would throw it away and don't believe every piece of it. I'm not saying that the girl would do something like that, its just that I don't believe in something like this. I don't even believe in love. I've never been in a relationship because no one courted me or something, its because I turned them down and explain i don't want a relationship. I may sounded cold and b_tchy, but for me that's reality.

Anyway, nice job for creating this magnificent poem. I've been into literature and poetry all my life. Don't take this as a hate post or something. If you have any complains, message me or something and I'll explain everything to you. Although, there's nothing really to explain.

Hey guys here is a poem I wrote last year for a girl Unfortunatly it never got to her nor I never titled this. To both things I don't know it just didn't feel right to give it to her and the title well I just didn't know what to title it lol. Around this time i was going threw alot and well i had a good friend there for me a friend I eventually gained fellings for. I found it while cleaning up so here it is guys just thought I'll share it.

The violet in your eyes is enough for any guy to look twice. If I ever had to choose I would want them to be one of the last things I see before I die... When I close my eyes I see the beauty of your eyes staring back at me in the darkness.

Your smile, just thinking about it makes me smile. You have the most beautiful smile I've ever seen, like I said just thinking about it makes me smile. I love it when your smiling it brings me the most amount of joy I've had in a long time. I wish I can look at it forever I wish I can have it forever.

Imma be honest with you right now when I'm with you I'm the happiest guy on Earth. When I'm away from you I'm either sad or thinking about you.... Actually all I do is think about you, your eyes, your smile, your face, your everything. I just can't stop your like an angel God sent down from the heavens so I can be happy. I want you here with me. I want you to be my forever. I want you in my life.

 

[King Cobra]

It's all good I understand what your saying I don't think your hating at all it's just your opinion on how you do things and that's fine.

 

[Kira Mizuki]

Nice to hear.

It's all good I understand what your saying I don't think your hating at all it's just your opinion on how you do things and that's fine.

 

[hans roildy]

Not bad. Mayb if she had seen this poem,she would've fall for you.

 

[BlackMomba]

Wow dude that's deep
I can't believe we actually but this on here that took balls it
Just give it to her who knows you guys just might get together
Damn I know I'm sayin a lot but really I'm just touched I really don't kno what to say

 

[Ldude]

This was a nice poem, and it's even sweeter that you stopped and took time to write something like this. I wish you happiness.

 

[0neCrazyAngel]

i think its really sweet that u took the time to write something for her. its just sad that she didnt get to read it. but u said there is already someone else right? that u fell for a friend? well, i hope u write things like this to her as well. im sure she would love that! take care and thanks for sharing

 

[AmaniPaz]

It isn't embarrassing man. It's pretty dope, nothing homo about it