Author's Note: This is the third chapter of my first fanfic. It was delayed since some technical problems with my computer but it’s finally done! This chapter is divided into two parts. Your feedbacks and reviews will help me improve on the next chapter. Happy reading.
Re-cap: Mizuki and Zoro are about to have a showdown with the two commanders of the Axe-Hand Pirates while Luffy is running off in the direction of the Axe-Hand Pirates’ base to free Nami.
Character Introductions::
[Edited Picture of Lucy]
Name: Mizuki
Age: 17
Affiliation: Strawhat Pirates
Love Interest: Luffy
Abilities/Strength: Water-Water Devil Fruit.
Previous Chapters
Narrator: Zoro and Mizuki stood next to each other staring at their opponents as they get ready to fight.
Chita: Let’s finish the quickly and follow the order given to us by Captain or who knows what he’ll do to us.
Tate: You took the words right out of my mouth. *looks at Mizuki* I’ll tear you apart little girl if you don’t move out of my way!
Mizuki: Don’t worry! I’ll get rid of you quickly and catch up to Luffy! *thinking* I haven’t used the devil fruit in actual combat yet, but looks like I’ll have to deal with it.
Chita: *Looks at Zoro* This guy reminds me of someone…
Zoro: The name’s Zoro! Let’s see which one of us is the stronger with the sword.
Chita: hoho…You’re the infamous Pirate Hunter Zoro? What is a bounty hunter doing with pirates?
Zoro: I am now a pirate and I will do everything possible in order to become the strongest in the world!
Chita: All swordsmen say that but eventually face reality and hide themselves in a corner!
Zoro: I am not one of them! *looks at Mizuki* Good Luck!
Narrator: Zoro takes out his three swords and prepares to attack.
Tate: Take care of him Chita and I’ll get rid of this girl. *looks around* H-huh? W-where did she go??
Narrator: While Zoro and Chita were introducing themselves, Mizuki had started to run in a different direction.
Tate: You aren’t going to run away missy! I’ll find you and slaughter you with the rest of your friends!
Mizuki: *pant* I’ll have to run away for now…*pant*
Zoro: Well then, Shall we get started?
Narrator: Zoro placed one of his three swords in his mouth.
Chita: A three-sword style user against a one-sword style user. I wonder which is stronger…
Narrator: Chita moved his back leg back and stretched forward as in a running stance with his sword pointing towards Zoro ready to strike.
Zoro: A fencing style?
Chita: No. I developed this style myself and I call it Cheetah style and it’s the swordsmen style that fits me the most.
Zoro: Heh..this will be interesting…
Narrator: Zoro ran towards Chita.
Chita: Head on attack right away? Hmmm….
Narrator: Chita stood still as Zoro took his first swing…and Chita had blocked it with ease. Zoro turned his body to the right and swung his other sword against Chita’s sword but with much more power. Chita blocked the attack but was pushed back.
Chita: You’re physical strength is much more than I ever imagined!
Zoro: There’s more where that came from! *thinking* I can’t believe it! He blocked both my swings with one arm!
Chita: It’ll be my turn now Zoro and you better be ready!
Zoro: What are you saying? I’m always rea……!!
Narrator: Zoro was struck in the stomach by Chita.
Chita: I told you to be ready, didn’t I? I struck you with the hilt so I’ll be able to watch you suffer more….HAHAHAHA!! Now…get up and let me here your pain!!
Zoro: *urgh* W-what was that?!? WHAT DID YOU DO YOU BASTARD?!?
Chita: hahaha…no one reveals their secret to their enemies but I suppose I’ll tell you since you’re going to die here anyway…I told you that my style was called the Cheetah didn’t I? Cheetah is a style I created to fit my fighting style which is speed. That’s all I’ll be telling you now…hahahaha!
Zoro: *coughs blood* Speed? I underestimated you, but don’t think speed will let you win against me! *thinking* I’ll have to stay focused!
Chita: defeat? Hahahaha! You’re already defeated if you think that’s all I’ve got!!
Zoro: Enough talking! Let’s get this over with!!
Chita: Don’t you worry! You’ll be dead before you know it!! hahahaha
Narrator: Chita got to his stance once again, with his sword pointing towards Zoro and his back leg stretched back.
Chita: Lightning Slash!
Narrator: Chita brought his sword all the way around to his back foot and then quickly swung his sword bringing his sword back near his right foot and causing the air around him to move towards Zoro.
Zoro: *thinking* What is he doin…..?!!!
Narrator: The air projectile that was sent by Chita’s swing hit Zoro around the shoulders.
Zoro: *urg* Didn’t see that coming…*thining* I can’t read what he’s doing at all! I have to clear my mind and think of nothing!
Chita: hahaha! This is way too easy! I thought that you’d be able to put up a better fight!
Narrator: Zoro closed his eyes…
Chita: Giving up already?!? I thought you were a true swordsmen!
Zoro: *thinking* Clear your mind…think of nothing and hear what’s around you…
Chita: …
Narrator: Zoro got into his fighting stance once more but his eyes remained closed.
Zoro: *thinking* Clear your mind…think of nothing and hear what’s around you…
Chita: I hate cowards more than anything…! I’ll have you dead now!!
Narrator: Chita rushes towards Zoro whose eyes are still closed.
Chita: Mirage Strike!
Narrator: Chita starts thrusting his sword forward multiple times as he runs towards Zoro which created a mirage of strikes which would make his opponent unclear of making correct choices.
Zoro: …
Narrator: Zoro suddenly opened his eyes.
Zoro: Toro Nagashi!
Narrator: Zoro leans towards Chita and blocks his sword using two of his own while twisting his body around as he continues to dodge the other strikes created by his sword style and slashing Chita with his third sword.
Chita: *urgh!!!*
Narrator: Chita was sent flying back after the powerful slash by Zoro.
Zoro: *grins* You shouldn’t underestimate your opponents!
Chita: *grits his teeth* Shut up!! I’M GONNA TEAR YOU LIMB FROM LIMB FOR SPLATERING BLOOD OVER ME!!
Narrator: A Blue Cloak suddenly appeared over Chita’s body and is now covering Chita with it.
Zoro: W-What the hell is that?!? Is that also a power of a devil fruit??
Chita: *grins* I don’t need devil fruit powers! I am a swordsman and I am a level 8 chakra master!!
Zoro: Chakra? What the hell is that?!?
Chita: You don’t even know what this is?!? Hahahaha! You call yourself a pirate and you don’t even know what this is? No matter, I’m going to kill you today!!
Zoro: *thinking* Whatever it is, I better be careful…
Chita: 360 Typhoon!
Narrator: Chita disappeared and suddenly Zoro found himself inside a typhoon of sort and swords started to appear from every direction.
Zoro: W-What the?!?
Chita: THIS’LL BE YOUR DEATH BED RORONOA ZORO!!!
Narrator: Zoro tried to block each attack but the speed at which Chita was thrusting his sword was incredible.
Zoro: *urg!!* *thinking* How did his speed and power increase this much?!? I should’ve dealt him much more damage that this!!
Narrator: The number of swords began to decrease and Chita was visible again but he was right next to Zoro with his sword pulled back like he was about to hit a ball that was thrown at him.
Chita: THIS IS THE LAST STRIKE ZORO!!
Zoro: !!
Narrator: Chita had swung his sword as hard as he could and smashed it right in the middle of his abdomen which would kill anybody in the spot. Zoro was sent flying backwards and smashed into a tree which stood there.
Chita: *puts his sword back into the back of his shirt* Now..to get back to the mission Captain ordered…
Zoro: *pant* *pant* W-where d-do yo-you th-think you’re going?!? *pant*
Chita: …!!
Narrator: Chita turned around to find Zoro who was covered in blood standing there back on his feet and continue to fight once more.
Chita: T-That’s impossible!! HOW DID YOU SURVIVE THAT?!? YOU SHOULD BE DEAD BY NOW!!
Zoro: *pant* As you can see, I’m well and still living!
Chita: I don’t know what you did but you’re just pissing me off more!
Narrator: Chita took out his sword which he had stored in his back and was ready to kill…
Zoro: *thinking* What a killing aura! Looks like he is really serious now so I better get serious as well! I’ll finish this with one move!
Narrator: The two swordsmen stood facing each other ready to finish what they had started.
Chita: Cheetah’s Wrath!
Zoro: Three-Sword Style Secret Technique: Three Thousand Worlds!!
Narrator: Chita starts running towards Zoro at an incredible pace and does three slashes in a split second with each slash being incredibly powerful and Zoro runs forward as well with two of his swords held at an angle against each other spinning them to create momentum and then attacks Chita with force and power. The two swordsmen now stood at each other’s end with their finishing stance.
Chita: What an incredible man you are…
Zoro: …
Narrator: Chita had fallen to the ground in defeat and Zoro stood there covered in blood while storing his swords back.
Zoro: I think I’ll wait for them her…
Narrator: Zoro fell to the ground as well after the intense battle.
Zoro: Zzzz…I want some sake….
Meanwhile…
Mizuki: *thinking* this is a good place…
Tate: Stop running you little brat!! I don’t have time to play around!!
Mizuki: I wasn’t running away!! I was coming up with a strategy!!
Tate: Nothing you do will change the fact that you’ll die here!! Wawawawawa!!
Mizuki: Shut up!! That laugh of yours pisses me off the most!!
Tate: *twitch* What did you say you little brat?!?
Mizuki: I said your laugh pisses me off the most!!
Tate: You know what?!? You’re freaking blue hair pisses me off!!
Mizuki: *twitch* Take that back you over grown furball!!
Tate: F-Furball?!? That’s it!! I’m gonna smash you down here!!
Mizuki: *grins* Try it!
Re-cap: Mizuki and Zoro are about to have a showdown with the two commanders of the Axe-Hand Pirates while Luffy is running off in the direction of the Axe-Hand Pirates’ base to free Nami.
Character Introductions::
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[Edited Picture of Lucy]
Name: Mizuki
Age: 17
Affiliation: Strawhat Pirates
Love Interest: Luffy
Abilities/Strength: Water-Water Devil Fruit.
Previous Chapters
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Chapter 3: Mizuki and Zoro’s Determination – Pr. 1 “The Blue Cloak”.
Narrator: Zoro and Mizuki stood next to each other staring at their opponents as they get ready to fight.
Chita: Let’s finish the quickly and follow the order given to us by Captain or who knows what he’ll do to us.
Tate: You took the words right out of my mouth. *looks at Mizuki* I’ll tear you apart little girl if you don’t move out of my way!
Mizuki: Don’t worry! I’ll get rid of you quickly and catch up to Luffy! *thinking* I haven’t used the devil fruit in actual combat yet, but looks like I’ll have to deal with it.
Chita: *Looks at Zoro* This guy reminds me of someone…
Zoro: The name’s Zoro! Let’s see which one of us is the stronger with the sword.
Chita: hoho…You’re the infamous Pirate Hunter Zoro? What is a bounty hunter doing with pirates?
Zoro: I am now a pirate and I will do everything possible in order to become the strongest in the world!
Chita: All swordsmen say that but eventually face reality and hide themselves in a corner!
Zoro: I am not one of them! *looks at Mizuki* Good Luck!
Narrator: Zoro takes out his three swords and prepares to attack.
Tate: Take care of him Chita and I’ll get rid of this girl. *looks around* H-huh? W-where did she go??
Narrator: While Zoro and Chita were introducing themselves, Mizuki had started to run in a different direction.
Tate: You aren’t going to run away missy! I’ll find you and slaughter you with the rest of your friends!
Mizuki: *pant* I’ll have to run away for now…*pant*
Zoro: Well then, Shall we get started?
Narrator: Zoro placed one of his three swords in his mouth.
Chita: A three-sword style user against a one-sword style user. I wonder which is stronger…
Narrator: Chita moved his back leg back and stretched forward as in a running stance with his sword pointing towards Zoro ready to strike.
Zoro: A fencing style?
Chita: No. I developed this style myself and I call it Cheetah style and it’s the swordsmen style that fits me the most.
Zoro: Heh..this will be interesting…
Narrator: Zoro ran towards Chita.
Chita: Head on attack right away? Hmmm….
Narrator: Chita stood still as Zoro took his first swing…and Chita had blocked it with ease. Zoro turned his body to the right and swung his other sword against Chita’s sword but with much more power. Chita blocked the attack but was pushed back.
Chita: You’re physical strength is much more than I ever imagined!
Zoro: There’s more where that came from! *thinking* I can’t believe it! He blocked both my swings with one arm!
Chita: It’ll be my turn now Zoro and you better be ready!
Zoro: What are you saying? I’m always rea……!!
Narrator: Zoro was struck in the stomach by Chita.
Chita: I told you to be ready, didn’t I? I struck you with the hilt so I’ll be able to watch you suffer more….HAHAHAHA!! Now…get up and let me here your pain!!
Zoro: *urgh* W-what was that?!? WHAT DID YOU DO YOU BASTARD?!?
Chita: hahaha…no one reveals their secret to their enemies but I suppose I’ll tell you since you’re going to die here anyway…I told you that my style was called the Cheetah didn’t I? Cheetah is a style I created to fit my fighting style which is speed. That’s all I’ll be telling you now…hahahaha!
Zoro: *coughs blood* Speed? I underestimated you, but don’t think speed will let you win against me! *thinking* I’ll have to stay focused!
Chita: defeat? Hahahaha! You’re already defeated if you think that’s all I’ve got!!
Zoro: Enough talking! Let’s get this over with!!
Chita: Don’t you worry! You’ll be dead before you know it!! hahahaha
Narrator: Chita got to his stance once again, with his sword pointing towards Zoro and his back leg stretched back.
Chita: Lightning Slash!
Narrator: Chita brought his sword all the way around to his back foot and then quickly swung his sword bringing his sword back near his right foot and causing the air around him to move towards Zoro.
Zoro: *thinking* What is he doin…..?!!!
Narrator: The air projectile that was sent by Chita’s swing hit Zoro around the shoulders.
Zoro: *urg* Didn’t see that coming…*thining* I can’t read what he’s doing at all! I have to clear my mind and think of nothing!
Chita: hahaha! This is way too easy! I thought that you’d be able to put up a better fight!
Narrator: Zoro closed his eyes…
Chita: Giving up already?!? I thought you were a true swordsmen!
Zoro: *thinking* Clear your mind…think of nothing and hear what’s around you…
Chita: …
Narrator: Zoro got into his fighting stance once more but his eyes remained closed.
Zoro: *thinking* Clear your mind…think of nothing and hear what’s around you…
Chita: I hate cowards more than anything…! I’ll have you dead now!!
Narrator: Chita rushes towards Zoro whose eyes are still closed.
Chita: Mirage Strike!
Narrator: Chita starts thrusting his sword forward multiple times as he runs towards Zoro which created a mirage of strikes which would make his opponent unclear of making correct choices.
Zoro: …
Narrator: Zoro suddenly opened his eyes.
Zoro: Toro Nagashi!
Narrator: Zoro leans towards Chita and blocks his sword using two of his own while twisting his body around as he continues to dodge the other strikes created by his sword style and slashing Chita with his third sword.
Chita: *urgh!!!*
Narrator: Chita was sent flying back after the powerful slash by Zoro.
Zoro: *grins* You shouldn’t underestimate your opponents!
Chita: *grits his teeth* Shut up!! I’M GONNA TEAR YOU LIMB FROM LIMB FOR SPLATERING BLOOD OVER ME!!
Narrator: A Blue Cloak suddenly appeared over Chita’s body and is now covering Chita with it.
Zoro: W-What the hell is that?!? Is that also a power of a devil fruit??
Chita: *grins* I don’t need devil fruit powers! I am a swordsman and I am a level 8 chakra master!!
Zoro: Chakra? What the hell is that?!?
Chita: You don’t even know what this is?!? Hahahaha! You call yourself a pirate and you don’t even know what this is? No matter, I’m going to kill you today!!
Zoro: *thinking* Whatever it is, I better be careful…
Chita: 360 Typhoon!
Narrator: Chita disappeared and suddenly Zoro found himself inside a typhoon of sort and swords started to appear from every direction.
Zoro: W-What the?!?
Chita: THIS’LL BE YOUR DEATH BED RORONOA ZORO!!!
Narrator: Zoro tried to block each attack but the speed at which Chita was thrusting his sword was incredible.
Zoro: *urg!!* *thinking* How did his speed and power increase this much?!? I should’ve dealt him much more damage that this!!
Narrator: The number of swords began to decrease and Chita was visible again but he was right next to Zoro with his sword pulled back like he was about to hit a ball that was thrown at him.
Chita: THIS IS THE LAST STRIKE ZORO!!
Zoro: !!
Narrator: Chita had swung his sword as hard as he could and smashed it right in the middle of his abdomen which would kill anybody in the spot. Zoro was sent flying backwards and smashed into a tree which stood there.
Chita: *puts his sword back into the back of his shirt* Now..to get back to the mission Captain ordered…
Zoro: *pant* *pant* W-where d-do yo-you th-think you’re going?!? *pant*
Chita: …!!
Narrator: Chita turned around to find Zoro who was covered in blood standing there back on his feet and continue to fight once more.
Chita: T-That’s impossible!! HOW DID YOU SURVIVE THAT?!? YOU SHOULD BE DEAD BY NOW!!
Zoro: *pant* As you can see, I’m well and still living!
Chita: I don’t know what you did but you’re just pissing me off more!
Narrator: Chita took out his sword which he had stored in his back and was ready to kill…
Zoro: *thinking* What a killing aura! Looks like he is really serious now so I better get serious as well! I’ll finish this with one move!
Narrator: The two swordsmen stood facing each other ready to finish what they had started.
Chita: Cheetah’s Wrath!
Zoro: Three-Sword Style Secret Technique: Three Thousand Worlds!!
Narrator: Chita starts running towards Zoro at an incredible pace and does three slashes in a split second with each slash being incredibly powerful and Zoro runs forward as well with two of his swords held at an angle against each other spinning them to create momentum and then attacks Chita with force and power. The two swordsmen now stood at each other’s end with their finishing stance.
Chita: What an incredible man you are…
Zoro: …
Narrator: Chita had fallen to the ground in defeat and Zoro stood there covered in blood while storing his swords back.
Zoro: I think I’ll wait for them her…
Narrator: Zoro fell to the ground as well after the intense battle.
Zoro: Zzzz…I want some sake….
Meanwhile…
Mizuki: *thinking* this is a good place…
Tate: Stop running you little brat!! I don’t have time to play around!!
Mizuki: I wasn’t running away!! I was coming up with a strategy!!
Tate: Nothing you do will change the fact that you’ll die here!! Wawawawawa!!
Mizuki: Shut up!! That laugh of yours pisses me off the most!!
Tate: *twitch* What did you say you little brat?!?
Mizuki: I said your laugh pisses me off the most!!
Tate: You know what?!? You’re freaking blue hair pisses me off!!
Mizuki: *twitch* Take that back you over grown furball!!
Tate: F-Furball?!? That’s it!! I’m gonna smash you down here!!
Mizuki: *grins* Try it!
End of Part 1
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