The pain of the hero on the verge of darkness...

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“A hero, every hero has his own weaknesses! His doubts, the moment he feels not all of his strength is enough…I now I may be breaking the so called fourth wall by talking to myself like this…it’s a theory of mine, a personal one if you wish. I have saved so many people, I forgot about myself. So when I’m feeling I need salvation, a reason to keep going, I talk to myself…to god, to a reader has if I was writing for someone else to read. By doing this I calm myself, I put away all the darkness I so fight in others. So help me god! I need to find my inner strength.

I have used up all my power, all my will it seems not work. I have fought so much…oh so much…

My nemesis has found a way to stop me. By finding the obscurity within me! Out of all, out of everything! He had to find my biggest weakness fear, doubts, insecurity…my powers , my strength is meaningless…I have lost…I have been pushed of a cliff and I am falling. Falling into my disgrace, my wings cut down!

How come darkness can be covering me so much? I was supposed to be light…I have fought so hard! Yet I still can’t do it? What is the solution? I am physically exhausted…I can’t help myself!
I am sorry! This is the end…everyone sorry!

Funny…My eyes are making me see a tunnel. A tunnel of light…I am falling and I can still see a bit of light… I guess it’s true…at least light is the last thing I will see…thank you! for this little moment of light…for this calming moment…Il Look at it a bit longer…I am smiling at least…oh! God how I feel so calm! Just by looking at light I feel calm. I feel love…oh! How love is so good! so nice!i feel a bed of light coming beneath me. I feel hovering, it’s like I don’t need wings.i felt love, and it’s like I need no wings! I have love and I need no wings! love is giving me hope…hope is giving me power …has long has I have hope, has long has I have love I will have the wings to fly!
Has long has there is light, darkness will not cover me! i will not let it! I will not allow!

Darkness despair is nothing if I still have the hopes final light! I will not lose, I will not bow! i will not fall!”

Authors note:

I now its on the first person, but I like to imagine how do other people think. How does it feel to be in another person’s perspective. Has such I did the thoughts of a hero about to lose hope. he almost giving in to darkness, and how he managed to overcome darkness…and have light again…
 
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