[Other] The Night

[Ryu Kishi]

The night has come before
My eyes, the dreams it
Brings denies my mind.

Asleep, awake i do not
Know. For what i see, is a
Dream to me.

A distant shadow
A frightening fiend.

It is what i see; but it is
Not real.

I'm lost in its cluches,
I'm Caught in its lust.

The night has come, before
My eyes.

 

[Tenshi Hikari]

Is this dedicated to me? Thank you. Lol

I guess not, i think its for fiend. Lol

 

[Ryu Kishi]

Is this dedicated to me? Thank you. Lol

I guess not, i think its for fiend. Lol

Well fiend could claim it, his name is in the poem. Maybe i will right a nice one for you

 

[fiend]

Absolutely awesome dude , better than your last one. Love the second stanza

BTW who's the frightening fiend, in whose lust the poet is caught XD.

Jokes aside ending was superb and I love the part in your poems in which even after realising the poet is caught in his circumstances he can't break out similar to your "Love and Hate" in which even after realising he gives his heart, similarly he doesn't want to wake up here.

Excellent sir.

 

[Tenshi Hikari]

Absolutely awesome dude , better than your last one. Love the second stanza

BTW who's the frightening fiend, in whose lust the poet is caught XD.

Jokes aside ending was superb and I love the part in your poems in which even after realising the poet is caught in his circumstances he can't break out similar to your "Love and Hate" in which even after realising he gives his heart, similarly he doesn't want to wake up here.

Excellent sir.

Thanks for explaining the meaning Doc. Lol

 

[Tenshi Hikari]

Well fiend could claim it, his name is in the poem. Maybe i will right a nice one for you

Okay, I will wait. XD

 

[fiend]

Thanks for explaining the meaning Doc. Lol

Thank you kind Madam. =D

 

[Tenshi Hikari]

Thank you kind Madam. =D

Dont call me madam, its for the old. Lol

 

[fiend]

Dont call me madam, its for the old. Lol

No, no I wasn't addressing the age but just adding a polite noun.
My mistake, I apologize. U_U

 

[Tenshi Hikari]

No, no I wasn't addressing the age but just adding a polite noun.
My mistake, I apologize. U_U

Its fine fiend, no worries. I understand. Gomen also.

 

[Luciform]

lmao, senpi's love for fiend is real

kidding. nice poems leader <3

 

[Ryu Kishi]

thanks guys,

 

[the Psycho]

that lust for fiend....gay beans..Lol
it was awesome....Lol

 

[Kazehime Seirin]

nice job

 

[Ryu Kishi]

that lust for fiend....gay beans..Lol
it was awesome....L

thanks

nice job

thank you

 

[the Psycho]

thanks


thank you

welcome beans..Lol