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chapter 12 akatsuki attacks.

we open to the leaf village under a strong lighting strom and two dark shadows draw closer to the hidden leaf.

???; dont underestimate him sato.

sato: no need to worry this will be done in five seconds flat.

naruto is standing on top of the hokages mansion roof top.

naruto: ... i know your there show your self.

sato jumps out from a tree.

sato: you notited me good but this well be fast.

that naruto turns out to be a shadow clone the real naruto comes from behind and tries to hit sato with the rasengan he dodges it grabs narutos arm and thorws him naruto uses a shadow clone to cusion the fall.

naruto: sage mode.

sato: lighting style lighting fist.

sato dashs at a fast rate and punchs naruto in the gut and shocks him its turns out to be a shadow clone again and disappears.

naruto: wind style rasen shuriken.

he thorws it at sato the jutsu explodes but a sheild made of lighting is protecting him but it breaks from the rasen shuriken but it stops any damage from comeing to sato.

naruto: sage art sage rasen shuriken.

( its yellow and much bigger.)

sato: what is that.

naruto thows it.

sato: crap.

sato takes out a bag and takes out a small orb and starts mixing his chakra into it the jutsu hits and explodes the jutsu has done nothing to him.

naruto: what.

sato: that is my jutsu the chakra bomb its made of small orbs and when you mix your chakra into it it becomes the ulitmate weapon.

naruto : but that chakra going around him its almost like the tailed beast chakra cloak but with out the tail.

sato: but it wates a lot of my chakra it could kill me if i use it for to long while i use it my speed and power is much stronger and i can fire it out just like a tauiled beast bomb you could call it a jutsu that lets you borrow the power of a jinchuriki.

sato takes out a sword and at an invisable rate and slashs him alot he then punchs naruto in the gut and pushs foward naruto crashs into one of the pillers on the hokage roof top and crashs right threw it the forg uses its tongoue and grabs a rail and brings naruto back on to the roof top naruto flys foward and hits him with the rasengan he takes no damage. sato then release a beam simalar to the tailed beast bomb at naruto naruto goes into controled jinchuriki form and fire one back at him the jutsus are equal and they both go flying backward sato picks up the orb but its size decreases.
naruto runs into the forest sato follows him goes full tentails.

sato: so thats the ten tailed beast.

naruto: ( he's strong he can do all of that and he can still fight if i lose i might have bo chioce but to)

naruto as the tentails releases the biggest tailed beast bomb ever sato dodges it.


sato: chakra bomb.

sato thorws a much bigger chakra bomb into the mouth of the tentails

suddenly a huge explosion then it inplodes. naruto now back to normal falls on the ground out cold.


sato: my chakra bombs it can be sallowed and used as a shield jutsu or you can thorw it into the mouth of the enemy it will absorb his chakra explode then inplode destroying all your chakra in one blast.

sato picks up naruto and walks off.

???: you moron i told you not to underestimate him he went tentails the whole village knows now we have to go.

sato: clam down would ya i got him and he's the hokage they'd notice he's gone any way with or with out seeing the fight it was my plan to begin with make him go tentails then use a chakra bomb to finsh it off so that it will take him out the tentails has a lot of chakra thats why it works better then on a human.

ninja: lord hokage!

kakashi: sent tracking units on the double keep the citazens clam i'll take care off the akatasuki.

narutojr: what happened.

later a medical team comes back with kakashi he has a whole threw his shoulder and threw his stomach.

medical nin: it seems jagged rocks went threw his shoulder and his stomach the other akatsuki must be able to use rocks o his will like kazekage sama can do with sand.

next time save naruto!
 

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pretty good some parts seemed a bit rushed though....
and to help people like him, may i suggest you post links to chapters before on top of the story and links to the chapters after below?
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