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chapter 7 prelims begin: last time sora finally wakes up but is still badly injuried still can he win his fight against kakashijr.

sasuke: sora before you start i think you should quit.

sora: what i cant quit now i dont care how hurt i am.

sasuke: fine but youre gonna get your self killed.

jonin: ok sora oni vs kakashi jr hatake ready begin.

kakashijr tries to punch sora he moves his head to the side the punch misses
sora then tries to knee kakashijr in the gut he stops it with his hand.

kakashijr: ( this is to easy)

kakashijr pushs sora he hits a wall.

kakashijr: chidori.

sora jumps and kakashijrs hand is stuck in the wall.

sora land behind him.

sora: windstyle great wind slash.

blades of wind go quickly threw the air kakashi jr gets his hand out of the wall and dodges itthe entire is cut up.

sora: that cost me most of whats left of my chakra.

kakashijr takes out a sword ( a real one) and tries to cut sora sora bends back and it misses sora does a back flip and lands on his feet but he falls down.

sora: cough cough cough.( darn it).

kakashijr makes a chidori it his sora right in the shoulder.

sora kicks kakashijr in the gut and he goes flying into the wall behind him.

sora: ( this feeling huh...)

sora makes two wind blades.

kakashijr: hidden leaf tech full moon dance.

( i stole this from the guy that coughed a lot the guy that got killed by baki sorry.)

sora gets a sword going right threw his chest missing his heart by several inchs.

sora: hm...

kakashijr; wh...

soras wind blade goes right threw kakashijrs kidney and the other threw his
gut the wind blade explodes and he goes flying into a wall.

jonin: the winner sora oni.

sora: yes.

sora falls down knocked out cold again.

the medical team arrives and takes both kakashijr and sora.

jonin: next fight kenzo vs kiba jr.

they comes down to the floor.

jonin: ready begin.

they stand stilll for moments on end after 10 minutes kiba jr falls down out cold.

kenzo: weakling

jonin: i see genjutsu and he is that anbus son no wonder he's so good at genjutsu.

jonin: next fight sasuke uzumaki vs akira nara.

they come down to the floor.

akira trys to connect his shadow.

sasuke: same trick doesnt work twice.

sasuke moves the shadow misses.

sasuke: is that all.

then sasuke trys to move but hes traped the shadow was connected.

sasuke: i see he kept me distacted on the first shadow so i wount notice the second one wich he chased me towards.

but it turns out to be a shadow clone it disappears sasuke appears behind akira and uses rasengan he goes flying and hits the wall hard.

sasuke: tricked you i knew that you cant hit me with that jutsu so i put a shadow clone in my place to distact you while i got you from behind.

jonin: winner sasuke uzumaki.

next time the prelims end.

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wow cool i like how you added in your own characters.
ill be sure to keep a look out for the next chapter



btw would you mind telling me what you think of my ff?
its short so it shouldnt take but a few minutes
 
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