the new leaf 11

[-Haku Yuki-]

i cant think of a new chapter if you read the other two chapters and have an ideas help me

 

[-Haku Yuki-]

tell me what you thought

 

[-Haku Yuki-]

how was it bad what the f serously theres was plenty of fighting that was at least ok i wasnt going to put an all out battle againt a sensei that has the same jutsu ftg as the 4th hokage that would be impossiable

 

[-Haku Yuki-]

how is it bad its like the bell test naruto went threw i mean come on tell me whats so bad about it

 

[-Haku Yuki-]

plus chapter 2 was awsome most ppl said that i cant have one filler chapter

 

[-Haku Yuki-]

dont just leave leave a comeant suggestions things like that to imporve the next chapter please tell me what you thought and dont just leave and say it was awful its not supposed to be an all out battle like last chapter.

 

[-Haku Yuki-]

is there any one who liked it at all what is so bad about it

 

[-Haku Yuki-]

the other chapters every one loved this was a filler with only little fighting it wasnt meant to be an awsome fight its worthy of an its ok not bad

 

[-Haku Yuki-]

i am delteing this chapter and am going to try again once more i ask any suggesions