the new leaf 11

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chapter 2 the real challenge begins: ( this is a continued version of the 5th great ninja war 12 years later) last time the graduation exam began
sasuke uzumaki and his team beat one team withen the first two hours of the test they still need one and three ninja wacth from a far ready to combat them.
( the beging will be info on sasuke sora aki and another team but the fight will be after the talking)

student: we were lucky to escape alive.

student #2: whats so great about the oni clan?

student: what you don't know about them.

student# 3: nither have i what is so great about them?

student: ok i'll start from the begining,
they came to this village not to long ago 12 years ago to be right,
but they were so strong that they gained fame faster then the uchiha clan.

student #2: what!

student: in fact some say they're stronger then the uchiha clan, they have the kekki genkai to sense the enemys next attack before the enemy even knows what he'll do next,
they are untoughable in battle and they have unlimted chakra,
so not only can they dodge all attacks they can keep hitting you with jutsu.

student#3: so.

student: and they can copy any jutsu just by getting hit by the jutsu
some even get hit with the jutsu just so they can learn it all it takes is the feel of the chakra and they can copy it no matter what jutsu it is,
its said sora has learned at least one jutsu of every elemental jutsu.

student number 3: well what about the other two squad mates.

student: sasuke is the 6th hokages youngest son he has already learned the
rasengan, shadow clone and the summing jutsu, aki is from the cursed ice element yuki clan of the hidden mist from her mothers side, her gran father left the mist village because the mist killed all blood line limit users he came to the leaf and well the rest you know.

student: the only other team we should stay away from is kenzos team
on that team is kakashi jr akira nara( shikamarus son)
kenzo has a jutsu that should only be known by a blood line limt clan, the anbu black ops tried to re make this kekki genkai becuase it was the most powerful one the village had known but was gone the whole clan was murdered by one of there own.

student number 2: i heard that much they chose a baby the child of an anbu he gave them permission it was a succsus he could turn on and off the jutsu unlike kakashi hatake he couldnt turn it off and it watsed a lot of chakra to use it.

the next day...

sora: ok we should get moving we only have 1 day left.

meanwhile...

iruka; so i send them off into the forest of death.

naruto: dont you think the exam was a little hard this year.

iruka: dont worry i know they can do it they are hard workers unlike some one i know.

naruto: what was that have you forgotten im the hokage.

iruka: sorry sometimes i forget.
back to sora...

sora: you huh.

sasuke: kenzo.

kenzo: we need your head band to pass fork it over.

sora : if you want it fight us for it.

kenzo; fine, sharingan.

sora: what!

aki: that should only be a jutsu used by the uchiha clan.

sora: wind style: wind blade.

sora comes down and trys to slash kenzo he dodges it and kakashi jr takes out his blade and it clashs with soras.

sora: wind style: typhoon.

a large gust of air comes from sora mouth and blows kakashi jr away and breaks his left arm threw a seris of fast spins he then tries to stab kakashi jr in the chest.

akira: shadow possesion jutsu.

sora; what i cant move.

kakashi jr: lightning blade.

sora: darn it. ( and he made the hand sighns with one arm how)

aki: no! aki yelled crying.

a crystal ice mirror appears in front of sora and aki comes out of ready to block the attack.

aki: what how did i ?

then sasuke gets in front of aki to block the attack.

the attack hits sasuke but he manges to to get a rasengan of him kakashi jr goes spinning back and hits a wall sasuke hits the ice mirror ( he got hit by the lightning blade in the shoulder.)

aki: why did you do that.

sasuke: ( because i love you i wish i could say that but i'll say) because your my team mate and i wont let my comrades die.

sora: yes the jutsu wore off theres a time limit on how long he can hold the jutsu.

sora: fire style: grand fire ball, wind style wind ball( wind jutsus make fire jutsu stronger.

a huge fire ball so big that it was bigger then the nine tails hits akira and kenzo saves him but he's badly injured.

kenzo: fire style fire blade.

he makes a blade made of fire sora hits his blade with with kenzos the fire blade is no macth and soras blade gets stronger and kenzo goes flying back.

kenzo: you're better then i thought here take it.

kenzo thorws the head band sora garbs it.

kenzo: will we pay you guys back and we will pass this test.

the next day...

iruka: good job to those of you that passed.

kenzos team your sensei will be neji.

soras team your sensei will be naruto jr.

sasuke: my bother yes.

iruka: and neji jrs team your sensei will be kiba.

kiba jr: my dad awsome.

next time: the bell test

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A bit overpowered to have unlimited chakra isn't it... Names were also a bit unoriginal.
Other than that pretty good.
well i looked up japense names and i got mostly crap so i toke the names that were good and used them ( aki sora kenzo shikamarus son and yeah but they are stronger then the uchiha they need something like unlimted chakra
 
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