By the way, this is my first Fanfic
Prologue
Many years ago, The Sage of The Six Paths (whose real name was Rai-nobu, which meant lightning faith) had a twin Brother named Rikutatsu. Rikutatsu travelled along with the Sage of The Six Paths on their journeys to spread their ideas and religion, along with Rainobu, Rikutatsu was the first to completely understand chakra, they both also were the first to find out the secrets of nature energy (senjutsu chakra) and fully mastered the Eight Gates and Sage Mode state, allowing them to enter Sage Mode with extreme ease and keep in the state for extremely long amounts of time.
They used Senjutsu chakra along with their usual chakra to empower both their Rinnegan's techniques. They both believed that love was the key to peace.
Along their travels, they came across two blades (which were two of the total ten swords that would later be known as "Chakra Avatar Blades" (similiar to the zankaputo of Bleach), these would later be wielded by many powerful ninja after them. These were Madara Uchiha, the Uchiha clan ancestor, the Senju clan ancestor, Hashirama Senju, Rainobu (The Sage of The Six Paths), Rikutatsu, Itachi Uchiha and Shinsuke Satoru and a few more ninja descended from the twins), their power was derived from the sword's chakra (which would be combined with the user's) and the power of the user's chakras and could allow the user to enter an empowered mode named "Kenjin Mode" (this invoked a moderate amount of nature energy around you, the sword's unique chakra and your chakras (your regular chakra, any Juubi chakra you possessed etc.)), it used the different chakras to drastically improve your physical capabilities, this surpassed even Sage Mode.
The appearance of this mode was very close to that of Naruto's controlled Nine-Tails chakra mode and Sage Mode combined, with the user having the magatama like symbols below the neck like Rainobu and Naruto (in his controlled Kyuubi mode), a chakra shroud (looking a little like Susanoo and Naruto's controlled chakra mode) that burned similiar to that of a fire and an orange colour around the eyes like in Sage Mode, it also would have three tomoe (similiar to the Cursed Seal of Heaven) on one cheek. It could also appear as a slight chakra shroud and the magatama symbols below the neck, along with the Three-Tomoe mark on one of the cheeks, if activated without knowing it in a stressful situation, if you possess the sword from birth.
The Chakra Avatar Blade would be obtained via a unique summoning when in a stressful situation (which could be activated by accident, which was the case with Rainobu and Rikutatsu), it would then join with your chakra, enabling you to enter Kenjin Mode.
In their battle against the Ten-Tails (the Juubi) to save the world from it, they both found out to propperly contain it they had to seal it within two people, both getting half of it's chakra sealed within them. They then used a very powerful sealing technique to seal each half of the Ten-Tails inside them, allowing them to fully control its terrifying chakra and powers, making them the first Jinchuriki. After the dividing of the Tailed Beasts and the imprisoning of the Ten-Tails within the combined chakra Chibaku Tensei and the twin brothers' deaths. Their sons founded the Uchiha clan (older brother of Rainobu), the Senju clan (the younger brother)and the Satoru clan (the son of Rainobu). The older son of Rainobu, gained Rainobu's eyes and an amount of the Ten-Tails' massive chakra mixed with his(an amount similiar to the amount of chakra the Six-Tails has, which had been given to him at birth from his father), the younger son of Rainobu gained Rainobu's "body" and a amount of the Ten-Tails' chakra mixed with his (the same amount as the older son, which had been given to him at birth from his father) and the son of Rikutatsu gained Rikutatsu's eye powers (very similiar to the older son of Rainobu's eyes) and chakra powers, along with a small amount of the Ten-Tails' chakra mixed with his (slightly larger than the sons of Rainobu's Ten-Tails chakra, which had been given to them all at birth from their fathers). The amount of chakra mixed in with theirs, gave their descendants a powerful and naturally huge amount of chakra compared to others (this also applied to the Uzumaki clan as they are distant relatives of the Senju, the reason behind their large chakras and longevity). A tiny amount of the Ten-Tails' chakra would be passed down from descendant to descendant of the Twin's sons, some descendants getting bigger amounts of chakra than others and some getting very tiny amounts.
Prologue part 2: Enter Shinsuke Satoru
(Five years before the Nine-Tails attack on Konoha)
Two jonin shinobi from the Leaf village were around the outskirts of Konoha on their guarding shift, when they caught a glimpse of a baby wrapped up, with a note on it saying that the baby's name was Shinsuke. The two quickly got the baby and carried it to the Konoha hospital, after it was checked up and found to be at full health, it was given a house to live in, where a few female Jonin shinobi took turns caring for him until he was old enough to care for himself.
He, from birth, had an amount of Juubi (Ten-Tails) chakra, that was large even compared to other Satoru, mixed with his own (an amount of Ten-Tails chakra slightly more than the amount the Two-Tails had), resulting with him having an extremely large amount of chakra (similiar to how Naruto had Nine-Tails chakra mixed with his own, with Shinsuke having a slightly larger amount of regular chakra than Naruto), his chakra was blue in colour, with a slight orange glow (due to the Juubi chakra, which he had under his control).
He joined the Shinobi Academy at the same age and time as Itachi Uchiha. He quickly made friends and one of his best friend's was Itachi Uchiha, who was Shinsuke's rival. He was considered quite handsome by nearly all of the girls near his age. He was praised by all as one of the best of his generation. Shinsuke's prowess outshone most other shinobi in his Academy class.
Despite all of his friends, he felt slightly lonely due to the lack of any parents.
In the academy, his team consisted of him, a male member of the Hyuga named Takao Hyuga and a Kunoichi from the Hyuuga named Kiharu Hyuga.
At the age of 7, he graduated along with the rest of his team. At the age of 10 his team sensei signed them up for the Chuunin exams.
This year, there were more than 150 ninja from all five great villages and other villages altogether entering.
Most finished the first parts of the Chuunin exams with ease.
Shinsuke's team complete the Forest of Death task the fastest of everyone, Itachi's team coming in a close second.
They were now onto the preliminaries due to the unusually high number of teams who passed (four teams), they were now at the battle arena (which, in the Naruto Anime, was where Sasuke had his curse mark sealed by Kakashi).
Chapter 1: The second phase of the Chuunin exams.
*Setting- The Battle Arena of the Chuunin Exams*
Proctor: The first battle is: Shinsuke VS Osumitu
*Shinsuke and Osumitu go and stand in the middle of the ring, facing each other*
Proctor: Fight!
*They both jump back and throw kunai at each other*
Shinsuke *performs handsign*: Shadow Clone Jutsu!
*It forms five clones*
Shinsuke *performs five handsigns*: Wind Release: Wind Cutter!
*It hits Osumitu but Osumitu uses the Substitution Jutsu to switch places with a log*
*Osumitu vanishes and reappears behind one of his clones*
Osumitu *infuses chakra with his hand and punches one of his clones*: Is that all you've got?
Osumitu: Lightning Release: Multi Bolt.
*The clones disappear and Shinsuke is left damaged*
Osumitu *throws a smoke bomb that lasts for a few seconds, in which he uses the shadow clone jutsu, and attempts to use the jutsu again with the clone*: Lightning Release: Multibolt.
Shinsuke *disappears and reappears behind Osumitu's clone and just before he punches it, Osumitu appears behind him and punches him with chakra-enhanced strength*
Shinsuke: Aaaaaaarrrrrghh
*Shinsuke bangs the wall and is knocked on to the floor, with blood all over him*
*Shinsuke tries to get up, but can't*
Osumitu: Ha! Is that all you can manage?!
*Shinsuke starts to get very angry and musters the strength to get up but falls down again, he then manages to get up again*
Shinsuke: Give up, on me giving up!
*A summoning seal appears on his hand and his Chakra Avatar Blade is summoned, it then merges it's chakra with him. A slight blue, purple, green and orange chakra shroud begins to appear around Shinsuke and magatama-like symbols appear above his chest. The Kenjin state heals him enough for him to continue the battle. His blade appears in his hand*
Osumitu: What's this!
Shinsuke: You're going down!
*Shinsuke, using his increased physical power, goes to Osumitu and puches him onto the floor with amazing strength, before Osumitu can react*
Proctor: Match over! Shinsuke wins!
*Medical Ninja appear and take Osumitu into the healing room*
*Shinsuke goes back to his team and his friends*
Takao and Kiharu: That was amazing! We thought you were defeated!
Itachi: That was amazing, Shinsuke!
Senior Ninja (Jonin and Chunin): I sure think that kid will get a promotion!
Proctor: Next Match! Takao VS Harashi
*Takao and Harashi stand in the arena*
Proctor: Go!
Harashi *performs handsigns and activates*: Lightning Release: Thunder Stream!
Takao *performs handsigns*: Lightning Release: Thunder Stream Blast!
*Takao's Lightning Stream is slightly stronger than Harashi's and is sent back along and knocks out Harashi with both their lightning attack's powers.*
Proctor: Winner: Takao!
*Takao goes back up*
Shinsuke and Kiharu: Wow!
Proctor: Next Match: Kohoyu vs Kiharu
*The two kunoichi face each other in the arena*
Proctor: Go!!!
*Kiharu activates her Byakugan and starts using the gentle fist style of Taijutsu*
Kiharu (using jutsu): Eight Trigrams: 8 Palms!, 16 Palms!, 32 Palms!, 64 Palms, 128 Palms!
*Kohoyu is easily defeated*
Proctor: Right! We have narrowed down the amount of ninja competing enough! The Final Round will be held in three weeks time! Itachi Uchiha and his team, Shinsuke Satoru and his team and Kanzaku and his team fighting against each other in team combat. Whoever proves themselves to have the qualities needed for becoming a Chuunin, will be promoted!
*The teams go off to train for a few days and rest up for the final exam*
End of Chapter 1
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Prologue
Many years ago, The Sage of The Six Paths (whose real name was Rai-nobu, which meant lightning faith) had a twin Brother named Rikutatsu. Rikutatsu travelled along with the Sage of The Six Paths on their journeys to spread their ideas and religion, along with Rainobu, Rikutatsu was the first to completely understand chakra, they both also were the first to find out the secrets of nature energy (senjutsu chakra) and fully mastered the Eight Gates and Sage Mode state, allowing them to enter Sage Mode with extreme ease and keep in the state for extremely long amounts of time.
They used Senjutsu chakra along with their usual chakra to empower both their Rinnegan's techniques. They both believed that love was the key to peace.
Along their travels, they came across two blades (which were two of the total ten swords that would later be known as "Chakra Avatar Blades" (similiar to the zankaputo of Bleach), these would later be wielded by many powerful ninja after them. These were Madara Uchiha, the Uchiha clan ancestor, the Senju clan ancestor, Hashirama Senju, Rainobu (The Sage of The Six Paths), Rikutatsu, Itachi Uchiha and Shinsuke Satoru and a few more ninja descended from the twins), their power was derived from the sword's chakra (which would be combined with the user's) and the power of the user's chakras and could allow the user to enter an empowered mode named "Kenjin Mode" (this invoked a moderate amount of nature energy around you, the sword's unique chakra and your chakras (your regular chakra, any Juubi chakra you possessed etc.)), it used the different chakras to drastically improve your physical capabilities, this surpassed even Sage Mode.
The appearance of this mode was very close to that of Naruto's controlled Nine-Tails chakra mode and Sage Mode combined, with the user having the magatama like symbols below the neck like Rainobu and Naruto (in his controlled Kyuubi mode), a chakra shroud (looking a little like Susanoo and Naruto's controlled chakra mode) that burned similiar to that of a fire and an orange colour around the eyes like in Sage Mode, it also would have three tomoe (similiar to the Cursed Seal of Heaven) on one cheek. It could also appear as a slight chakra shroud and the magatama symbols below the neck, along with the Three-Tomoe mark on one of the cheeks, if activated without knowing it in a stressful situation, if you possess the sword from birth.
The Chakra Avatar Blade would be obtained via a unique summoning when in a stressful situation (which could be activated by accident, which was the case with Rainobu and Rikutatsu), it would then join with your chakra, enabling you to enter Kenjin Mode.
In their battle against the Ten-Tails (the Juubi) to save the world from it, they both found out to propperly contain it they had to seal it within two people, both getting half of it's chakra sealed within them. They then used a very powerful sealing technique to seal each half of the Ten-Tails inside them, allowing them to fully control its terrifying chakra and powers, making them the first Jinchuriki. After the dividing of the Tailed Beasts and the imprisoning of the Ten-Tails within the combined chakra Chibaku Tensei and the twin brothers' deaths. Their sons founded the Uchiha clan (older brother of Rainobu), the Senju clan (the younger brother)and the Satoru clan (the son of Rainobu). The older son of Rainobu, gained Rainobu's eyes and an amount of the Ten-Tails' massive chakra mixed with his(an amount similiar to the amount of chakra the Six-Tails has, which had been given to him at birth from his father), the younger son of Rainobu gained Rainobu's "body" and a amount of the Ten-Tails' chakra mixed with his (the same amount as the older son, which had been given to him at birth from his father) and the son of Rikutatsu gained Rikutatsu's eye powers (very similiar to the older son of Rainobu's eyes) and chakra powers, along with a small amount of the Ten-Tails' chakra mixed with his (slightly larger than the sons of Rainobu's Ten-Tails chakra, which had been given to them all at birth from their fathers). The amount of chakra mixed in with theirs, gave their descendants a powerful and naturally huge amount of chakra compared to others (this also applied to the Uzumaki clan as they are distant relatives of the Senju, the reason behind their large chakras and longevity). A tiny amount of the Ten-Tails' chakra would be passed down from descendant to descendant of the Twin's sons, some descendants getting bigger amounts of chakra than others and some getting very tiny amounts.
Prologue part 2: Enter Shinsuke Satoru
(Five years before the Nine-Tails attack on Konoha)
Two jonin shinobi from the Leaf village were around the outskirts of Konoha on their guarding shift, when they caught a glimpse of a baby wrapped up, with a note on it saying that the baby's name was Shinsuke. The two quickly got the baby and carried it to the Konoha hospital, after it was checked up and found to be at full health, it was given a house to live in, where a few female Jonin shinobi took turns caring for him until he was old enough to care for himself.
He, from birth, had an amount of Juubi (Ten-Tails) chakra, that was large even compared to other Satoru, mixed with his own (an amount of Ten-Tails chakra slightly more than the amount the Two-Tails had), resulting with him having an extremely large amount of chakra (similiar to how Naruto had Nine-Tails chakra mixed with his own, with Shinsuke having a slightly larger amount of regular chakra than Naruto), his chakra was blue in colour, with a slight orange glow (due to the Juubi chakra, which he had under his control).
He joined the Shinobi Academy at the same age and time as Itachi Uchiha. He quickly made friends and one of his best friend's was Itachi Uchiha, who was Shinsuke's rival. He was considered quite handsome by nearly all of the girls near his age. He was praised by all as one of the best of his generation. Shinsuke's prowess outshone most other shinobi in his Academy class.
Despite all of his friends, he felt slightly lonely due to the lack of any parents.
In the academy, his team consisted of him, a male member of the Hyuga named Takao Hyuga and a Kunoichi from the Hyuuga named Kiharu Hyuga.
At the age of 7, he graduated along with the rest of his team. At the age of 10 his team sensei signed them up for the Chuunin exams.
This year, there were more than 150 ninja from all five great villages and other villages altogether entering.
Most finished the first parts of the Chuunin exams with ease.
Shinsuke's team complete the Forest of Death task the fastest of everyone, Itachi's team coming in a close second.
They were now onto the preliminaries due to the unusually high number of teams who passed (four teams), they were now at the battle arena (which, in the Naruto Anime, was where Sasuke had his curse mark sealed by Kakashi).
Chapter 1: The second phase of the Chuunin exams.
*Setting- The Battle Arena of the Chuunin Exams*
Proctor: The first battle is: Shinsuke VS Osumitu
*Shinsuke and Osumitu go and stand in the middle of the ring, facing each other*
Proctor: Fight!
*They both jump back and throw kunai at each other*
Shinsuke *performs handsign*: Shadow Clone Jutsu!
*It forms five clones*
Shinsuke *performs five handsigns*: Wind Release: Wind Cutter!
*It hits Osumitu but Osumitu uses the Substitution Jutsu to switch places with a log*
*Osumitu vanishes and reappears behind one of his clones*
Osumitu *infuses chakra with his hand and punches one of his clones*: Is that all you've got?
Osumitu: Lightning Release: Multi Bolt.
*The clones disappear and Shinsuke is left damaged*
Osumitu *throws a smoke bomb that lasts for a few seconds, in which he uses the shadow clone jutsu, and attempts to use the jutsu again with the clone*: Lightning Release: Multibolt.
Shinsuke *disappears and reappears behind Osumitu's clone and just before he punches it, Osumitu appears behind him and punches him with chakra-enhanced strength*
Shinsuke: Aaaaaaarrrrrghh
*Shinsuke bangs the wall and is knocked on to the floor, with blood all over him*
*Shinsuke tries to get up, but can't*
Osumitu: Ha! Is that all you can manage?!
*Shinsuke starts to get very angry and musters the strength to get up but falls down again, he then manages to get up again*
Shinsuke: Give up, on me giving up!
*A summoning seal appears on his hand and his Chakra Avatar Blade is summoned, it then merges it's chakra with him. A slight blue, purple, green and orange chakra shroud begins to appear around Shinsuke and magatama-like symbols appear above his chest. The Kenjin state heals him enough for him to continue the battle. His blade appears in his hand*
Osumitu: What's this!
Shinsuke: You're going down!
*Shinsuke, using his increased physical power, goes to Osumitu and puches him onto the floor with amazing strength, before Osumitu can react*
Proctor: Match over! Shinsuke wins!
*Medical Ninja appear and take Osumitu into the healing room*
*Shinsuke goes back to his team and his friends*
Takao and Kiharu: That was amazing! We thought you were defeated!
Itachi: That was amazing, Shinsuke!
Senior Ninja (Jonin and Chunin): I sure think that kid will get a promotion!
Proctor: Next Match! Takao VS Harashi
*Takao and Harashi stand in the arena*
Proctor: Go!
Harashi *performs handsigns and activates*: Lightning Release: Thunder Stream!
Takao *performs handsigns*: Lightning Release: Thunder Stream Blast!
*Takao's Lightning Stream is slightly stronger than Harashi's and is sent back along and knocks out Harashi with both their lightning attack's powers.*
Proctor: Winner: Takao!
*Takao goes back up*
Shinsuke and Kiharu: Wow!
Proctor: Next Match: Kohoyu vs Kiharu
*The two kunoichi face each other in the arena*
Proctor: Go!!!
*Kiharu activates her Byakugan and starts using the gentle fist style of Taijutsu*
Kiharu (using jutsu): Eight Trigrams: 8 Palms!, 16 Palms!, 32 Palms!, 64 Palms, 128 Palms!
*Kohoyu is easily defeated*
Proctor: Right! We have narrowed down the amount of ninja competing enough! The Final Round will be held in three weeks time! Itachi Uchiha and his team, Shinsuke Satoru and his team and Kanzaku and his team fighting against each other in team combat. Whoever proves themselves to have the qualities needed for becoming a Chuunin, will be promoted!
*The teams go off to train for a few days and rest up for the final exam*
End of Chapter 1
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