The NarutoBase Magazine

[Excālibur1]

Nice to see my name down there.lol It was good feeling nonetheless.
And keep them suggestions coming guys, will try to make it even better next time.^^

Same to see my name down there too xD

*takes all credit*

Thanks everyone. And if there was anything that you didn't like in it, it was Adachi's fault. He did all the work.

Die >_>

 

[Lili-Chwan]

Love the cover. Really! The interviews are cool but indeed there is a part I think would be cool for the magazine. A sort of story of the RP and what happened but described and written as a FF and not a technical summary. I think it would be a cool addition.

Yeah! The old ones had it, I don't know why they'd get rid of it It was my favorite section

Too formal.


Suggestions:

Put some humor. Cartoons staff doodle.etch

I think this here is what I missed in the magazine! It was too formal, it's like I was reading an announcement. It lacked humorous writting and a bit of an edge. I did offer to write for you, but you guys hated me so much you ignored me :'(

As for her other suggestion... nah, this is a RP thing, I like that it is a RP thing... if anythign it should have more Rp stuff in it. Actual roleplay, not just asking members about trivial stuff in a very formal manner

 

[Lord of Kaos]

Yeah! The old ones had it, I don't know why they'd get rid of it It was my favorite section



I think this here is what I missed in the magazine! It was too formal, it's like I was reading an announcement. It lacked humorous writting and a bit of an edge. I did offer to write for you, but you guys hated me so much you ignored me :'(

As for her other suggestion... nah, this is a RP thing, I like that it is a RP thing... if anythign it should have more Rp stuff in it. Actual roleplay, not just asking members about trivial stuff in a very formal manner

Well, the NW sections are missing largely, my own fault on this. Being busy both sitewise and RL wise prevented me from turning in my parts before it was compiled and made. I think that was the part you mention, the lack of roleplay and humor like last time. I'll make it for it next time with more content, maybe a double section for the NW to make up for it. I also need someone to interview as well, in RP fashion for the NW section.....I'll find someone lol

Also, you can send in that Jutsu analysis whenever you feel like it Lili. Whatever jutsu you think needs detailing or overviewing can be chosen, as long as it's not too lengthy lol. Something commonly misused could also work.

 

[Luther]

Nice Magazine. Kudos to all who worked hard on this.

 

[Penguin]

The parts I didn't like.

1) Some grammatical errors. No biggie at all, just not a lot of things wrong with the magazine so I need to nitpick
2) I think I saw nothing on the Nekura clan. You should have added something about them, their leader, insight and abilities of the clan, etc.
3) It seems a tad formal. I think one of the funnier parts was at the beginning where someone was talking about trial sensei, and then in () you said "why weren't we picked >->". That part made me chuckle. I would have also interviewed more trial sensei and asked them how they were getting accustomed to senseiness or something like that.

Positives

1) It was very clean. Beautiful gfxing and lovely design. Props to you guys.
2) It was a great length. Not too long, but long enough for it to actually be readable without wanting to kill yourself.
3) You guys interviewed a bunch of people about plenty of different topics. Personally, I would have interviewed some people who passed BT's in the BT section and asked them some tricks and tips on how to pass, but other than that lovely interviews.

I really do hope to see more guys.

 

[RuckenTM]

Graphics were amazing and I enjoyed the Bio staff, that pertained to creating your own bio.

 

[Versuvio]

This is amazing, great job! And I also want to be interviewed

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Reborn is cool

 

[Naruto.]

This is amazing, great job! And I also want to be interviewed

The big boss himself!
B-B-B-But you never reply to anything. :T_T:
Except some of us. :skorm:

 

[Detective L]

The parts I didn't like.

1) Some grammatical errors. No biggie at all, just not a lot of things wrong with the magazine so I need to nitpick
2) I think I saw nothing on the Nekura clan. You should have added something about them, their leader, insight and abilities of the clan, etc.
3) It seems a tad formal. I think one of the funnier parts was at the beginning where someone was talking about trial sensei, and then in () you said "why weren't we picked >->". That part made me chuckle. I would have also interviewed more trial sensei and asked them how they were getting accustomed to senseiness or something like that.

Positives

1) It was very clean. Beautiful gfxing and lovely design. Props to you guys.
2) It was a great length. Not too long, but long enough for it to actually be readable without wanting to kill yourself.
3) You guys interviewed a bunch of people about plenty of different topics. Personally, I would have interviewed some people who passed BT's in the BT section and asked them some tricks and tips on how to pass, but other than that lovely interviews.

I really do hope to see more guys.

That was me U_U I know I am funny.

This is amazing, great job! And I also want to be interviewed

*Puts you on the list of people to interview*

I call dibs on interviewing V u-u.

 

[Naruto.]

*Puts you on the list of people to interview*

I call dibs on interviewing V u-u.

Yea, V should teach us his RP skills. U_U
*digs up an old thread,

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[Jin]

This is amazing, great job! And I also want to be interviewed

Who will have the honor to interview you :T_T: ?

 

[Lord of Kaos]

This is amazing, great job! And I also want to be interviewed

Oh this will be fun. :skorm:

 

[Deviation]

Yeah! The old ones had it, I don't know why they'd get rid of it It was my favorite section



I think this here is what I missed in the magazine! It was too formal, it's like I was reading an announcement. It lacked humorous writting and a bit of an edge. I did offer to write for you, but you guys hated me so much you ignored me :'(

As for her other suggestion... nah, this is a RP thing, I like that it is a RP thing... if anythign it should have more Rp stuff in it. Actual roleplay, not just asking members about trivial stuff in a very formal manner

Who will have the honor to interview you :T_T: ?

Is it too late to join the newspaper? I'd like to help out with writing.

 

[Yuse]

1 Word Amazing U_U I you ever need any help with writing I would be happy to help