The Midnight Play: Chapter III

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Alea iacta est
( The die has been cast )​


Fear and curiosity could be found in the eyes of a little group of teens. Bella collapsed in agony babbling about the end of her social life. " Sober up, we neet to catch thet person! Let's go! " said Tatsuo with a flame.

" Hell yeah! Come on! " Chibitsuna shouted frantically and pulled petrified Koi by the hand.

When they ran outside the only thing their eyes could see was dark.

" So it was a false alam? Oh, thank God! " said Koi with a relief.

" Seems so. " confirmed Bella


Then a strangely cold wind started blowing.
" Brrrr, I think we should go in the house now. " Tatsuo said hugging Bella arownd her waist. As the group headed back a tall woman with long black hair crossed their way.

" Can I help you? " Tatsuo asked.

" Yes, you can. " calmly she replayed.

"Well wh-" he couldn't finnish the sentence. His blood turned ice cold when he saw the unknown woman turning her cigarette into a spear.


The teens immediately ran to the other side, but their way was blocked by huge thorns rapidly riseing from the earth.

The woman smiled. " Ah, the expressions your faces are enchanting. As if you're not aware of youreselfs. "

True, everyone was confused and had no idea about what she was talking, but the main thing that was going trough their heads is wth is she attacking them and how are they going to stop her.

" Who the hell are you and what do you want from us? " yelled Chibitsuna.

" You expect me to belive you don't know? " she answered sarcastically.
With a flame in her eyes she immediately started speaking in an unknown language. " Taurina neuma tessa dhaeraowa "

Suddenly everyone felt a huge pressure all over their bodies. Some sort of a plant was wraping around them making it impossible to get away from her. Than, Bella remembered something:

*Flashback:

"...so go and tidy up your room or there will be no TV for a month!!!1!1 " crossly said a tall dark haired woman.

" ok..." said little Bella crying

Then the girl entered the room and she started making her bed, collecting dirty clothes, sweeping the dust...etc.
When she was finnished, she angrily went to the balcony and sat next to a beautifoul flower her mother was keeping. Bella accidentally touched it and on her surprise it withered immediately.

(This was one of the first times Bella used her power)

*End of flashback


Now the only thing she needed to do is to get angry, which she already was, and direct her rage to the plant. She concentrated really hard and in the next moment the whole thing withered allowing everyone ste themselfs free. But, there was a problem; it seemed that Bella wasn't able to controle her power as much as she thought so she 'sucked' power out of others as well, luckily not too much.

" So you are Ndenginas? You disgust me the most. " said the mysterious woman.

"Rosa en'ehtaa" she shouted again throwing her spear into the air.

Just when it seemed that nothing's going to happen the spear multiplyed itself and a flock of flying speares rushed towards the little group.
Total panic ruled in their minds, they were running like 'headless chikens'. Then the speares hit the grownd.

" Geez, if I survived this, I'll definitely survive math test on monday! " Koi thought.
Screames trigered her.
One was Chibitsuna's; her entire hand was covered in blood; and the second one was Bella's.

" No, dont do it! " she yelled in agony

" Yell as much as you want Ndenginas. I wont change my mind. All evil should be destroyed. " said their attacker while holding Tatsuos unconscious body in one, and a gold and silver knife in the other hand.

" But, he never hurt anyone! " Bella yelled even louder.

" Yet! " she said sharply.

" Help! Help us! " Koi started yelling

"Haha, how dumb are you girl? Don't you think someone would've came already if they were able to hear you? " the woman laughed

Meanwhile, Tastuo woke up, but he couldn't move because the pain in his leg was unberable. He was petrified.

(chapter will be continued...)





People, please tell me your opinions no matter if they're good or bad. I'm really interested because this is the first "fight" chapter I ever wrote. :D
 

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the chapter was quite well written and seems you have really worked hard this times on spellings as well....

It was a good fight scene since you are doing it for the first time and hope it will become better and better in upcoming chapters
 

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I don't read fanfics but i read it :) .


It was good I don't know about fanfics but i really liked it *_* i guess there is another chapters too.
but the karin avatar distracted me me a bit ( i don't like her no offence )
 

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Don't worry fights are good....It will come normally. Write what thought came in to your mind.
 
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nice work man.... I never expected something like this from you
 

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the chapter was quite well written and seems you have really worked hard this times on spellings as well....

It was a good fight scene since you are doing it for the first time and hope it will become better and better in upcoming chapters
I'm glad you liked it :)
:yayy: I'll do my best!
I don't read fanfics but i read it :) .


It was good I don't know about fanfics but i really liked it *_* i guess there is another chapters too.
but the karin avatar distracted me me a bit ( i don't like her no offence )
Wow, I'm glad you liked it so much! :yayy:
It's ok :) Everyone has a right to have his own openion :D
UchihaMadara01 <- Mind blown.
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Don't worry fights are good....It will come normally. Write what thought came in to your mind.
Glad you liked it ^_^
nice work man.... I never expected something like this from you
:hooray: Glad you liked it!
 

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I can tell your read and or watch a lot of manga and anime. From the beginning of this chapter, it kinda gave me the feeling of one. This is actually better that what I thought it'd be, totally took me by surprise. Nice job!


I'll pm you some corrections you can make. :D
 

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awesome!! :D really well written there! keep em comming <3
 

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I can tell your read and or watch a lot of manga and anime. From the beginning of this chapter, it kinda gave me the feeling of one. This is actually better that what I thought it'd be, totally took me by surprise. Nice job!


I'll pm you some corrections you can make. :D
I'm glad you got that impression because I don't XD
Yayyyy, I'm so happy that you liked it :yayy:
sure, send them, I'm always open for advices :)
awesome!! :D really well written there! keep em comming <3
:blush: Thanks <3
Of course :D
 

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That's some nice fight scene, you sure deserved your rep :scorps:
 
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