the meaning of freedom.... is found :')

izinagi54

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I free my soul, with joy and without the cold.
no demon nor angel may turn it to coal.
to the one that has become the bold.

you fear and let hate take in.
sometimes it is somthin you can't choose, you think yourself a loss.
but sometimes are own bodies must endure the pain and brush it off.

loosing someone close is hard, shards of tears will fall off your eyes.
you body may feel cold as ice, thinking your world has died.
living in the past make the pain last.

someone told me once that pain is weakness leaving the body.
he now lies buried in six feet, i continue to think of myself weak.
but i now know that i am not weak but strong, all the pain is gone.

if i could reach your hands, i would hold them.
only to let you make your own reality, instead of another tragedy.
my white little flowers will continue to bloom, even as i begin die.

the future generations of man, cannot be left to handle what we began.
today is another day, but the second you have is precious.
hold onto to them like you are collecting the souls of time.
make them mine and yours, do not be lured away and astray.

come and stay with me, so we can let loose the dismay.
just let you control your fate, sometimes we must take what we are given.
life is not a game, it is to our shame to call it such.
i will care for each of you very much.

my little white flowers of freedom and pureity.


chris.....

sometimes we must look back, sometime our reaction has a action of its own. do not ever disclose anyone by their own blood or race. we all have the same blood in our vains and share a common fate.

- christopher wheeler

i will always and forever grandpa.
 

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Nice like it I know how it is to lose someone very important.
Not too long ago.....
 

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Freedom is not being bound by anything but the law of nature

But seems you lost someone? My condolence
 

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no the freedom is allowing your soul to be free of pain, my grandfather taught me this few years ago before he died
 

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Izzy-sensei, to be honest with you, this poem was the one I liked most amongst you poems.
I could "put myself" in this poem more easily (if you know what I mean :ghehe:)

Keep it up
 

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youve got a lot of good things to say man. i hope you get to share it with the world one day
 

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:crazy: This is amazing!

First poem i've like on this server. Very goob job, i'm sorry for your loss also
 

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there is one thing i do know.... if you believe in something that is....

That you have only borrowed your own soul for a period of time and at some point you have to give it back...
 

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it was a decent Poem i suppose.
 

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It was a beautifully written poem filled with meaning.
 

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one of your best work chris!!~~ <3 i'm loving your poems. You give me something to write about and something to keep my going. Your poems are like my Monster :p
 

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i like it nice :)
 
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