The Man Of Mystery

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This one was inspired by the Phantom of the Opera we had to watch in music class.

Dark and mysterious
He lies
Watching from the background

Her voice reaches towards him
Like God's hand
Pulling him from eternal darkness

He truly is unknown
But his voice reins with her's
The booming notes hold so much power

His masked face
Hiding his identity
Hiding him truly

She ponders about him
Day and night
The Man Of Mystery
Who gave the opera a chilling fright
 

Uxellius

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Wow interesting I must say +rep
 

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Wow, it's awesome and very interesting, unseen :D
 

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it was a sweet poem..
 

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Simple yet depicted beautifully; I for one loved the movie. Fifth stanza was my favorite part; nicely done
 

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I must say its very interesting and good :D
 

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That a very nice poem ^^ tell me anytime you make a new onw! :)
 

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I like both the movie and the poem. Nicely done!

P.S. It used to be my favorite movie when I was younger.
 
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