The Makura Clan - Searching for FF writers

[Lili-Chwan]

I've and idea for a clan, but I'd like to have some help on the text part. I want the history of the clan to be epic. For that, I need your help.
I have a draft made, but it's rubish xd

 

[Daemon]

Hit me with it..send it to me and i'll see what i can do

 

[RoseLilly]

I would like to help, I haven't been here long tho and I have seen the ff here and there very different to the way I write. I could take a look at your draft, and see what I make of it. If you would like.

I have written a lot of stories and things that are on novel web sites.... If you want to take a look at some of them I can give u a link.

 

[Lili-Chwan]

I would like to help, I haven't been here long tho and I have seen the ff here and there very different to the way I write. I could take a look at your draft, and see what I make of it. If you would like.

I have written a lot of stories and things that are on novel web sites.... If you want to take a look at some of them I can give u a link.

Basically it's about the begining of clan. The story about an orphan born in Kirigakure, in the time of the Bloody Mist (I'm not sure if you're familiared with the Bloody Mist). She is outcasted from her comunity because of her devilish chakra. It's like a demon outcasted by demons. It's a black chakra very harfull and negative, even to herself. She is very weak physically.

Her dream is to study Medicine and Psychology, and discover the secrets of our Mind. She is extremely inteligent, but because of her chakra, she can't heal others, only harm them.

 

[Lili-Chwan]

Hit me with it..send it to me and i'll see what i can do

Sorry D, I'll work with Rose for now.

 

[Daemon]

-__- I posted first....=/

 

[RoseLilly]

Okay so you want a clan history, but really you want this girls history.

 

[Lili-Chwan]

I've to go now. We'll talk later

 

[-Tauburn-]

dont be a child daemon

 

[Lili-Chwan]

Okay so you want a clan history, but really you want this girls history.

She is the founder of the clan. somewhere along the way, she will inspire groups of amazing Med students and other inteligent minds and found the Makura clan.

 

[RoseLilly]

Okay Liliana, i'll see what I can come up with.... With what I got so far. Untill u get back.

 

[Lili-Chwan]

I'll pm you my draft

 

[Felixman]

a village of medical nin huh? so the red cross of the naruto world huh? :X

 

[RoseLilly]

That would be helpfull thank you.

 

[Lili-Chwan]

sent

 

[~Naruto&Itachi~]

i am in

 

[Lili-Chwan]

Thank you, but the story is done. Great thanks for Rose