The Little Ninja that could

[Swizzik]

One day there was a ninja who was practicing his ninja arts in the woods with his fellow ninja.
It started raining then they all decided to go inside except for the hardworking ninja.
The ninja kept on practicing through the rain and became sick eventually.
Turns out he he had caught Pneumonia and died a couple weeks later.

The moral of the story is don't try harder than anyone else.

 

[Germanicus]

Wow...that's one helluva downer.

 

[TheRealAkatsukiLeader]

Quite a short story.

 

[Young Thug]

1/10. You're not explaining the underlined theme very well. Plus, does this ninja have a name?

 

[Uchiha Legacy]

No one likes a "tryhard" anyway.

 

[Germanicus]

People traditionally like defeatists less.

 

[Uchiha Legacy]

People traditionally like defeatists less.

No need to make french jokes...

 

[Hail Mary]

Im not sure at what your getting at. So if someone tries 15-100 of there percent in school you would want your son to do the same because if you try harder than others he'll die?

 

[Ldude]

The best story I've ever read.. 10/10 xd

 

[Germanicus]

No need to make french jokes...

If I was making a french joke, I would say y'all were running from something. Defeatism is a universal evil.

 

[HiddenWarrior]

RIP Rock Lee Jr

 

[3MESSIAH]

NOT!!! just take senju DNA and connect yourself with the gedo mazou and everything is gonna be all right!

 

[neilson]

i love this story, it seemed realistic in a way and the nameless character just makes it very obvious that the story is fictional but the point in the story was wll made...good story dude