The Lightning Phoenix: Another Try :p

[Nikkou Arashi]

Okay, its not that I drew one yesterday and did another today. most of these drawing went like a week or 2 after I did the first. So this one is a replica of a phoenix I saw online. Then, I did a little revision with the tail. Problem is, it does not seem to look as nice as it is in the original than when scanned. *sigh*
Not that I'm saying that I did a nice job, its that it kinda appeared differently.xd

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[Nikkou Arashi]

Oh, I forgot - its supposed to be a lightning phoenix with 9 tails xd

 

[Mist]

Oh, I forgot - its supposed to be a lightning phoenix with 9 tails xd

I think you missed a few tails

generally looks good although there is a few things I think could look a little better.

I really like the head, main body and most of the wings.

not that I could make a better one myself but I would like to give some constructive criticism

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it seems like the phoenix's left wing is a bit to wide near its base. Could just be the bend of the wing. And tail probably needs a little change. The start of the tail is really nice but the ending seems almost to bushy

 

[Mei Waxton]

Its nice but the tail is way too big. But still its good and I like its head.Way to go Nikkou

 

[Shayan]

hmm pretty nice

 

[Nikkou Arashi]

Thanks guys...the tail indeed is not angled properly - I just can't draw the exact perspective of where it should be angled on...took me like 10 papers to establish it and then, I just gave up xd

 

[Xentinel]

Everything is perfect. Nothing went wrong. I love the shading too, but I can't see the lightning But still, it's awesome

Reps

 

[KanaHoiiru]

Snazzy stuff, I really like the arch of the wings and the detail on the plumage.

 

[Mist]

Thanks guys...the tail indeed is not angled properly - I just can't draw the exact perspective of where it should be angled on...took me like 10 papers to establish it and then, I just gave up xd

well atleast you gave it a very good try

 

[Wezzo984]

Okay, its not that I drew one yesterday and did another today. most of these drawing went like a week or 2 after I did the first. So this one is a replica of a phoenix I saw online. Then, I did a little revision with the tail. Problem is, it does not seem to look as nice as it is in the original than when scanned. *sigh*
Not that I'm saying that I did a nice job, its that it kinda appeared differently.xd

I think you did quite well, not what you originally wanted or expected, but none the less great work xd

 

[Ushiro]

Nice work! Though it lacks the lightning and i think the wing on the left is a little longer than it should be. For some reason it reminds me of a rooster. xd

 

[Uchiha Riyo]

like it

 

[-Mugen-]

Awesome job.However the tail looks a bit broken towards the right lol But overall its very good

 

[Nikkou Arashi]

Awesome job.However the tail looks a bit broken towards the right lol But overall its very good

Thanks. I really had a hard time with the tail, actually. I could not draw it in the angle that I want it to appear. xd

 

[-Tauburn-]

it looks great but still missing tails xd

 

[Nikkou Arashi]

I think you did quite well, not what you originally wanted or expected, but none the less great work xd

Thank you.

Nice work! Though it lacks the lightning and i think the wing on the left is a little longer than it should be. For some reason it reminds me of a rooster. xd

Well, a phoenix is actually a mythical creature patterned to a rooster xd Though, it should have a more grand appearance than an ordinary rooster.

like it

Thank you.

it looks great but still missing tails xd

Yeah, right. xd

 

[-The Agent-]

Wow that looks really nice!

 

[-Vio-]

yay, i can write, yes, but drawing......not that great.... you did an excellent job.

 

[SHARINGAN_USER UCHIHA_ITACHI]

cOOl...!! xd

 

[Nikkou Arashi]

Wow that looks really nice!

Thanks

yay, i can write, yes, but drawing......not that great.... you did an excellent job.

LOL! just trying out to draw xd

cOOl...!! xd

Thanks, too