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Not after only 2 chapters you don't XD But it's all progression I suppose, haha
That is exactly why you should read the ones before chapter 6 while waiting for the 9th one (I'm serious, and I'm kind of surprised you haven't already) xD I mean, chapter 6 was the climax of a build-up that basically shook the "Samurai World" to its core from the past chapters. The tone in the two first chapters are pretty unique compared to the rest. The 1st chapter doesn't even have a single dialogue in it except for the 3rd person narrative introduction (which is actually how the story will end, or at least Hagoromo's perspective, so to avoid being confused at chapter 14 (I think), I suggest you at least read the introduction), how about that? xP
And yeah, but given the "time-frame" of the situation, Hagoromo wasn't given much time to think about the fact. But by real world standards, I suppose you would have thought something weird as heck was up if someone's eyes were like that, haha. Then again, Hagoromo has seen a lot of "****ed up" shit by now in his life, so nothing surprises him anymore I guess xd
I like the way you think xP The thing is that like I mentioned somewhere (I always mention stuff "somewhere" don't I? xd), there's going to be a sort of a "first-ever" Otsutsuki clan meeting to decide what to do after the Jubi has been dealt with. Bruce will obviously have a role there, but for the actual Jubi fight, the focus is centered more around Hagoromo and Hamura, as well as the Samurai clans and their leaders that were introduced in the 7th chapter. You may ask why he's not making an appearance there, but the thing is that there's some stuff that happens during this on-going arc which makes it all understandable, especially considering that the Jubi emerges almost right after the Tower of Death has been cleared. Giving you more info than that ruins the fun xD
Also, for the question you asked, I actually said on the 7th chapter I think in one of my comments, that I have made Bruce the founder of the 8th Gates Technique =p In case you missed that one. Nevertheless, your "hunch" is right on track. Like I mentioned in my last reply to your review, it's Bruce's "time to shine" on the 4th Floor, which begs the question of exactly what he'll do with this information in mind. I've already started writing the fight on the 5th Floor, so it feels like talking about the past when talking about the floors before that xD As for back-story on Bruce, I've written the next chapter to empties on the "relation" between Bruce and Hamura and their "position" in the clan. Should give you some intel on how his character eventually came to be. As for him starting to become your favourite character, I'm a bit surprised xD If not for this arc, I wouldn't have invented him at all. Not sure how I'll be able to make him stay that way with what I said above, haha.
As for more introduction to Game of Death, I'm writing this story as if the concept is a "new" idea to the readers, meaning that a cloud of mystery will be present towards the end and the 7th Floor. It's more like a "bonus" having seen the movie Game of Death, and read about what it was originally supposed to be. Heck, even watching the original footage that was filmed as shown in the youtube video gives the reader an understanding above and beyond what the story gives out. That's all there is to it for now, but I am sure you will end up enjoying the next chapter as much as I. Basically, I wrote it in one sitting (!), and I can't remember the last time I wrote 90 per cent of a chapter in one sitting. Must be years. Length wise, it's not that bad which is a surprise considering I only used about 3-4 hours finishing it...
Interesting thoughts and justifiably so. The reason why I said there could be a bit of Sasuke in there is because as strategically and wise as Shikamaru is, and as calm and collected as Neji is, there's no way Hamura would do the things he sometimes quite "recklessly" does, although the "shock-factor" of a drastic change of events could do something with the mind of the brightest. Also, the Otsutsuki clan meeting I mentioned would happen earlier, will be happening not only because I need to establish the whole "Moon/Earth" deal, but there's also going to be some "conflict/disagreement" between Hagoromo and Hamura at first. I got that idea after finally being able to sit down and watch The Last Naruto the Movie not long ago. The fact that Hamura, in the same regard as Hagoromo, hasn't really been explored much, that gives me room to sort of create "original" characters despite them being pre-established in canon material of another show.
Well the final bits of this work have both its unique ways but also as part of a bigger frame so to speak. That's the benefit and the downside of having a huge Timeline to deal with. Somehow, you have to connect the dots, but at the same time, you have to write each story as if they were standalones to avoid getting new readers confused. I've briefly mentioned it before, but the "villain" on the 7th Floor is actually going to be someone some/most of my readers will recognize. I don't think I would have been able to pull off a real reasonable ending to this Game of Death if I somehow hadn't found a way for this "villain" to return.
I did post the names of the remaining chapters on the 6th chapter I think, but a refresher might not be a bad idea at this point;
Chapter 9 - Fist of Legend
Chapter 10 - The Point of No Return
Chapter 11 - An Old Nemesis Returns
Chapter 12 - The Jubi Emerges
Chapter 13 - The Rise of the Titans
Chapter 14 - Legacy
Chapter 15 - Unfulfilled Destiny
Chapter 16 - The Curse Evolves
Oh, and Kaguya's case is going to be interesting indeed. There's even clues to her resolve in this chapter as said by Hamura, which won't be revealed before Hagoromo meets up with her at a very "bad" timing so to speak.
As for spoilers, I might preview the last part of the 3rd Floor, which is quite small compared to the rest of the chapter, if this discussion keeps up, haha.
And hopefully, I can see my plan of finishing this story before November strikes through. At the very least, it is done before December for sure.
You already did that before, remember? You should remember my answer back then xD Somehow however, I never viewed the actually battling to be my strong points, that is why I always wanted to write a story at some point that wasn't centered around action, lmao. Long post is long, fade to black...
So does that means if I continue making a review I would get an award from Zise probably?
The only reason I haven't read the other chapters is simply because I tend to procrastinate often. Although I could say am not unhinged even after reading the past two chapters taking into account they are easy to comprehend. Anyway rest assured, I'll read the introduction mainly to understand the next chapters better.
I fully understand were you are coming from. I still feel Hagoromo should at least ask about those eyes out of curiosity.
"First ever Otsutsuki meeting" For some reason, this sounds like the "breaking point" for this story. I may be wrong, Regardless does this mean the Juubi won't be sealed inside Hagoromo like the Manga depicted? Hamura and Hagoromo being the main focus during the Juubi fight is also completely understandable considering the fact they are the main protagonists afterall. However I think am still being left in the dark about the Samurai clans and their leaders addition during the juubi fight. My only guess is they would serve as an aid support similar to that of the Kages and shinobi alliances against Madara/the Juubi during the 4th great Ninja world-war. If am right on this, then it will be the perfect way of giving the Samurai clans and their leaders screen time.
Yes I did miss that part concerning Bruce been the founder of Eight gates. Still I think you assuring me yourself, voids that inner uncertainty about Bruce not having Eight gates. That also begs the question if he would ever open the last gate. As for my initial question on Bruce's backstory, wouldn't it be nice if him and Hamura were rivals? Also as for your answer, that would be great thing emphasizing on their relations and respective positions on the clan. Finally though, I think I'm beginning to understand where you are coming from after seeing that video. I guessing this means I'll be looking forward to the 7th floor, for that "shrouded mystery." By the way Have you completed the next chapter prior to this?
So in essense, Hamura is that type of character that doesn't "act first before he thinks," but "thinks first before he acts" which is completely justifiable for someone like him. Also knowing you, I can help but think the Otsutsuki clan meeting would be epic. Again, all this means I'll be definitely looking forward to your next chapters. You've said so many things, putting me into state were I have no choice but to see your next chapters so as my questions will be answered. I wouldn't say am confuse, but am certainly curious at this point. Anyway, thanks for posting the names of the remaining chapters. So basically you're half way through this story. And since you mentioned you plan on finishing this story before December, Doesn't that mean you'll be releasing two chapters each month?
Now to your answer, You are the stubborn type aren't you :lol Unfortunately for you, there's a saying that states "Don't give up." If you know what I mean :lol
