The Legendary Sage of Konoha: Sasuke Chronicles 2

[Michael92]

awesome man fantastic work xd

Thanks man

 

[~Racher~]

Cool work..though i read a bit before but still was a surprise xd..awesome as always michael

 

[Michael92]

Cool work..though i read a bit before but still was a surprise xd..awesome as always michael

Thanks mate Did you notice any difference on the preview and the final product?

 

[~Racher~]

the baby part >.< between kirabi and naruto was not there in the preview and also the that gaara is the youngest hokage was also not therexd

 

[Michael92]

the baby part >.< between kirabi and naruto was not there in the preview and also the that gaara is the youngest hokage was also not therexd

Hehe, but you mean Kage right
Yeah i though I would add something too it

 

[Kaziname]

Awesome man. I suggest that you don't release any chapters with madara showing his powers (I mean with rinnegan) as they are soon going to be shown in manga for real.

 

[Nikkou Arashi]

Well I thought I had to try to make him say some, but they were lame if you ask mexd

You don't have to over-express yourself you know, I'm not that goodxd

Regarding Madara I have some big plans as the latest chapter in the manga gave me a lot of ideas
So I will work on it in one of the upcoming chapters

I can reveal that I'm planing something very, very big at the end of my FF, but I can't reveal more than that... Not even to you

So did you notice any difference from the preview?

And also what did you think about what happened when Naruto, Kakashi and Sakura visited Sasuke in the jail?
I found that bit as hard as writing Itachi's apperance

But I must admit that I didn't really like the rest of the chapter from when Sasuke was called in. That was a bit fail from me I thinkxd

Yeah I thought I would have to include as many as possible from the Naruto universe
Who knows

Yeah, they were kinda lame - same as that to the manga, though.

I'm not over-expressing, just telling the truth.

So, I'm not exempted now?

I did notice that there was a difference but, I didn't mind. Previews are somewhat cuts to the full version so, I understand. Though, it made me think who that girl with Killerbee is going to be. Gosh! killerbee's rhymes are just sooo annoying...xd

About the visit - uhmm - I did sense a little difficulty on your part in portraying that . Maybe because you're the brainy-type of person rather than the heart-type. On another note, you did well with the Itachi-appearance. The team's vist was not as sentimental as that with Itachi's meeting, but the whole point of the meeting is a success. That is, you were still able to convey/picture out how it should go: The meeting of the Original Team 7, huhuhuhu -- what a reunion

That scene when Sasuke was called in still served its purpose. The whole idea is intact and Sasuke did sound convincing. It was kinda short though, but I don't see any point of prolonging it either.

I'm sure you can do a better sasuke-naruto team up!

 

[Felixman]

nice chapter...have fun in paris

 

[Michael92]

Awesome man. I suggest that you don't release any chapters with madara showing his powers (I mean with rinnegan) as they are soon going to be shown in manga for real.

Yeah I was thinking about that when i got a perfect idea for it But that's not untill later chapters

Yeah, they were kinda lame - same as that to the manga, though.

I'm not over-expressing, just telling the truth.

So, I'm not exempted now?

I did notice that there was a difference but, I didn't mind. Previews are somewhat cuts to the full version so, I understand. Though, it made me think who that girl with Killerbee is going to be. Gosh! killerbee's rhymes are just sooo annoying...xd

About the visit - uhmm - I did sense a little difficulty on your part in portraying that . Maybe because you're the brainy-type of person rather than the heart-type. On another note, you did well with the Itachi-appearance. The team's vist was not as sentimental as that with Itachi's meeting, but the whole point of the meeting is a success. That is, you were still able to convey/picture out how it should go: The meeting of the Original Team 7, huhuhuhu -- what a reunion

That scene when Sasuke was called in still served its purpose. The whole idea is intact and Sasuke did sound convincing. It was kinda short though, but I don't see any point of prolonging it either.

I'm sure you can do a better sasuke-naruto team up!

Haha, yeah maybexd

You always do I guess

If I didn't, I would spoil youxd

Yeah your right about that as I didn't change that part too much i guess...

Well yeah maybe, but i still felt like it was an hard situation to describe without making it cheesey or wirdxd
But maybe the Itachi part was better afterall

Yeah I thought so as well as the chapter was already too bigxd

nice chapter...have fun in paris

Oh thanks I guess

 

[Keese777]

beast mode... i love it and it feels so real.

 

[Nikkou Arashi]

If I didn't, I would spoil youxd

Well yeah maybe, but i still felt like it was an hard situation to describe without making it cheesey or wirdxd
But maybe the Itachi part was better afterall

Well, I think scenes like that are meant to be cheezy xd

 

[Xentinel]

I must say, This is the best chapter I ever read! Really awesome my friend

I can see that you're improving very well...Compared to your first chapter to this one, I realised the story had already gone very far! From Naruto's Hokage life to Flashback then to Sasuke Chronicles! I actually read this whole chapter...there is no action but still....It's astonished! Suigetsu make an appearance again! Madara is dead, but it appeared as a fake! Nice one Really nice

~Reps~

 

[Hammy120290]

I really like the dialogue and the twists your putting into it man.

Your Itachi crow thing as the "gift" I loved its basically a theory I had that Itachi would stop "Sasukes" powers i.e. the ones Itachi gave him Susanoo etc. But for you to use the crows and taking Sasukes eyes etc...Nice.

The 2nd chapter I really liked the dialogue in this one and Suigestu coming to Sasuke's aid I think most people probably forgot that Juugo and him were left in trouble at the Kage Summit. Really nice work keep it up.

Nothing I didnt really like in these 2 chapters...except maybe the Narrator lines some are uneccesary like "Naruto said angrily" you kinda know someone said something in anger by these > !!!!!!!!!!!!! lol ^^

 

[Waqas Naseem]

good bro...or i should say excellent work

 

[s06p]

nice
on of the best FFs

 

[danivass]

Haha no prob But you know you could just press edit post and then delete it right?

Erm, didn't quite know about that, thanks for the info

Loved them?xd They were lame as h*ll, I hated them to be honestxd But I just had to come up with something crazy i guess

Well, it sounds exactly like something Killerbee would say in the real manga xd

 

[Michael92]

beast mode... i love it and it feels so real.

Thanks friend

Well, I think scenes like that are meant to be cheezy xd

Haha, don't think soxd How are emotionel moments suppose to be cheezy?

I must say, This is the best chapter I ever read! Really awesome my friend

I can see that you're improving very well...Compared to your first chapter to this one, I realised the story had already gone very far! From Naruto's Hokage life to Flashback then to Sasuke Chronicles! I actually read this whole chapter...there is no action but still....It's astonished! Suigetsu make an appearance again! Madara is dead, but it appeared as a fake! Nice one Really nice

~Reps~

Really? Thanks mate appriciate you saying that
Yeah It's not that long ago I read the 2 first chapters, and I must say I don't really find them any good compared to the rest without bragging
Even if the next chapter from this chronicle is the last one, I still got a lot to go

I really like the dialogue and the twists your putting into it man.

Your Itachi crow thing as the "gift" I loved its basically a theory I had that Itachi would stop "Sasukes" powers i.e. the ones Itachi gave him Susanoo etc. But for you to use the crows and taking Sasukes eyes etc...Nice.

The 2nd chapter I really liked the dialogue in this one and Suigestu coming to Sasuke's aid I think most people probably forgot that Juugo and him were left in trouble at the Kage Summit. Really nice work keep it up.

Nothing I didnt really like in these 2 chapters...except maybe the Narrator lines some are uneccesary like "Naruto said angrily" you kinda know someone said something in anger by these > !!!!!!!!!!!!! lol ^^

Thanks for reviewing my chapters mate That way I don't only get the good stuff, but also some criticism so that I may improve to the next one Looks like we got some of the same theories then i guess

Well yeah, but maybe there are some slow ones out there reading it, if you get what I'm sayingxd And also I had to differ the fact that he shouted or said it angrily

good bro...or i should say excellent work

Thanks

nice
on of the best FFs

Thanks, well i'm trying my best as I want each one to be as good as I can make them

Erm, didn't quite know about that, thanks for the info

Well, it sounds exactly like something Killerbee would say in the real manga xd

Sure
Yeah maybe, but not that cheezy i supposexd

 

[Hammy120290]

That way I don't only get the good stuff, but also some criticism so that I may improve to the next one

I say criticism is always better than praise. If your work doesnt get criticized by someone your just getting yer ass kissed lol.

Criticism is the foundation of improvement. I hope to critique a lot lot more of your work ^_^.

Im thinking of starting my own FF actually you can be my critic when I get the basis and storyline etc down. I'll send you the first edition lol.

 

[Michael92]

I say criticism is always better than praise. If your work doesnt get criticized by someone your just getting yer ass kissed lol.

Criticism is the foundation of improvement. I hope to critique a lot lot more of your work ^_^.

Im thinking of starting my own FF actually you can be my critic when I get the basis and storyline etc down. I'll send you the first edition lol.

Hehe, yeah maybe you're right You kinda get the feeling that people only says it's awsome because they don't got much to add, but with criticism you kinda get down to earth

Sure, tell me when you start

 

[Pain..]

Big and epic