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Ohhhh yes yes yes....how could I forget that :sy: lol
I remember now haha...

The jubi here (for me) looks better than the jubi in manga simply cuz of the fact that this one has consciousness n that one doesn't xd
I can see it now as Kabuto acquiring knowledge from SO6P while Naruto gets it from Jubi making it even :p

Well, even if they were in a same team, considering the type of personality that Sasuke is, even if he changes his alliances, its difficult to believe him changing his personality. Well, this is just my opinion so its not that you did something wrong lol.
Ofc, at that situation, sending Sasuke is the obvious choice as it brings back the epicness of the story.;)


Lol so true!! I mean, when your chapter released, it quickly got my attention as that was the future of Naruto that you were showing. I wouldn't have cared if you made Tobi - Obito or Akashi or any other random noob. Reading it back then, literally blew my mind cuz the thing was original and it could be imagined. But for people reading now, they might find it difficult to digest the story...if you know what I mean xd
But there's nothing you can do about it lol. Releasing it 2 years back was good thing you did. Cuz imagine you releasing these things right a week b4 the manga reveals a change in its story line xd


Don't worry you won't fail. I've read enough of your stories to know what type of a writer you are. So I know, it won't be too difficult for you :)


Well in that case, I'll try to cover up everything about the chapter from next time :D


1. Ah, I get it now :p

2. Still clueless xd

4. So your next goal should be to find out how many letters it can support by writing bigger FFs xd
Hehe, you're not the only one who has been forgetting what happened on chapter 3 I assure you :p

Oh, I didn't think of it that way, but yeah, perhaps that is so!

Glad we meet eye on the last thing at least xD;)

Yeah I know, although it seems like you were ignoring the other things when you said that thing about Neji, and all the other ones that have died in the manga, but still are here in my FF :p Releasing them now would completely alter things indeed. I would probably kept the core, but everything after the kages met would probably look a bit different.

Well, if not too difficult, then at least very difficult, lol. Btw, with chapter 9, things are starting to progress again, and I'm very curious on how I'll do the following chapters after that, even though I already have everything laid out and noted down.

1: :p

2: Have you even seen the movie? xD :p

4: Haha, not going to happen. Will never, and then I mean never, write anything as big as this one. Chapter 8 will hopefully mark the turning point and the future of shorter chapters xD So when we look back, we will say: "how on earth did he manage to write such a long chapter??" ;)

Btw, Chapter 9 is 100% done (polished, grammar corrected, names colored, finalized, read-through, etc). This is a process I usually do when I'm about to release a new chapter, so when I normally say that a chapter is done, I still have 1-2 hours of release-process to go through before I can release it... But now that I've already done this with Chapter 9, all I need to do is copy it from my PC, paste it into a new thread and press post. Should take about 10-20 seconds, lol. So now I can start focusing on chapter 10:zonder::scorps:
 
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Another GREAT defining Chapter
Thanks mate :p I appreciate any and all comments I can get these days ^^
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On other notes, I'm not sure when I'll release chapter 9 yet. Like I said in my previous post, when I'm about to post it, it should take about 20 seconds due to the fact that I'm 100 % done with it. We shall see... I might release it today, or stall for tomorrow! ;) Trying to come up something to write on chapter 10 at the moment o_O
 

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NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO.

Amazing Chapter just when the edo fight was about to begin.. :( :T_T:
o_O I bet you're a new reader seeing as you've just recently joined?^.^
Haha, that was the point of the chapter, but I'm not stoping you from reading the next :p;)
 
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THIS. WAS. AWESOME!!! :crazy:

It's certainly loooong... but most def worth the time.
2 things stood out the most here: the S06P's resurrection plan and doing the impossible, by reanimating shinobis that have experienced the Demon Death seal.
I just knew he was going to do that to Naruto... make him face the people he will not hurt... I see an emotional end to this battle... *Please don't let Naruto die*

That damn Kabuto doesn't belong in hell... he should go further than that. xd
His greed's going to be his down-fall, thinking that he can control the S06P.

Great chapter Michael92 and about that Expendables 2 reference... I'm lost. :)
 

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THIS. WAS. AWESOME!!! :crazy:

It's certainly loooong... but most def worth the time.
2 things stood out the most here: the S06P's resurrection plan and doing the impossible, by reanimating shinobis that have experienced the Demon Death seal.
I just knew he was going to do that to Naruto... make him face the people he will not hurt... I see an emotional end to this battle... *Please don't let Naruto die*

That damn Kabuto doesn't belong in hell... he should go further than that. xd
His greed's going to be his down-fall, thinking that he can control the S06P.

Great chapter Michael92 and about that Expendables 2 reference... I'm lost. :)
Thanks :D I love your reviews, like always my friend ;)

Okay let's see... Haha, yeah Kabuto has surely gone insane (Naruto's words), lol. Who knows if he'll be able to or not. Quite frankly, even I'm not sure of the outcome. All I know is whether he'll be able to do it or not or if Naruto manages to stop him in time. We shall see, and only time will tell ;) Resurrecting Madara and Orochimaru as well was originally not in my plans, but seeing how epic Madara is in the manga, I just had too. It's going to be pretty interesting if Kabuto keeps his promise of giving the Edo some consciousness later on :rolleyes: ;)

If Naruto will die? Hmm...

Lol, if you didn't get it, you'll see what it was on the next chapter, as I've revealed it there in the "after-thoughts" of the chapter.
In fact, I'll head there now to check out your comment :p ^^
 

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Thanks :D I love your reviews, like always my friend ;)

Okay let's see... Haha, yeah Kabuto has surely gone insane (Naruto's words), lol. Who knows if he'll be able to or not. Quite frankly, even I'm not sure of the outcome. All I know is whether he'll be able to do it or not or if Naruto manages to stop him in time. We shall see, and only time will tell ;) Resurrecting Madara and Orochimaru as well was originally not in my plans, but seeing how epic Madara is in the manga, I just had too. It's going to be pretty interesting if Kabuto keeps his promise of giving the Edo some consciousness later on :rolleyes: ;)

If Naruto will die? Hmm...

Lol, if you didn't get it, you'll see what it was on the next chapter, as I've revealed it there in the "after-thoughts" of the chapter.
In fact, I'll head there now to check out your comment :p ^^
Haha, np. :)
 

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Its not big,not at all. I finished it in 25 mins. Make yore upcoming chapter more larger then it that i can read for at least one hour ;) And i still remember your words in chapter 6th "This is also probably the longest chapter I've ever written and most likely the longest chapter I'll ever write...". You lied to your words xd Did'nt you? :D
Now on chapter, again you did an amazing work. Its epic bro. I found this one better then original naruto. Story is at his best right now in both:p but you surprised me with your story more then kishi ;) i can make a guess about his story but cant about your and there are only 2-3 plot no jutsu in your story(like tobi defeated,naruto got control over jubi so easily) but there are a lot of plot no jutsu in kishi,s story. So i found your story more better :)
There are many points i like in this chapters:-
1. The way sasuke & naruto saved kakashi from akashi, reminds me starting of naruto :p
2. Akashi turned good,not sure its a trap or not :p
3. Guy back :D really happy to see him back to the life(yet it against rules but still i'm happy)
4. The conversation between jubi and naruto
5. Jubi stopped naruto to revive guy,i really enjoyed jubi's speech there. he seems to be very smart :p
6. I didnt expect gaara in final four but i like you add him :p
7. The way they one by one select their opponent(totally kishi style :D), reminds me that sasuke arc/konoha genin vs sound four arc.
8. The way kabuto introduced last six edo tensei(hokages,jiraiya and kushina) was outstanding. Kabuto was sounding like a true villain there. I love that :D
9. Naruto's new sealing techniques are awesome.
10.Naruto: Was that all he got?(cant stop my laugh here :D)
11. "brother from another mother" xdxd
12. I was right about suigetsu :D lets see what he can do against sasuke
Now few things i didnt like:-
1. Naruto again revived one more dead person(yet i'm happy guy alive) but its kinda again rules for me.
2. Only bad guys are getting down, all good guys are still alive!! At least let some few good guys die.
3. The conversation between ino,tenten,temari etc and between kakashi,A etc during naruto was fighting against 30 edo tensei. Its just like how kishi skipped natuo/bee/kakashi/guy vs Tobi/tailed beast fight :p but i can understand it;)

Again you proved you are best writer on base(for me). This chapter is epic,love it. Keep it up bro :) all the best :)
 
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Its not big,not at all. I finished it in 25 mins. Make yore upcoming chapter more larger then it that i can read for at least one hour ;) And i still remember your words in chapter 6th "This is also probably the longest chapter I've ever written and most likely the longest chapter I'll ever write...". You lied to your words xd Did'nt you? :D
Now on chapter, again you did an amazing work. Its epic bro. I found this one better then original naruto. Story is at his best right now in both:p but you surprised me with your story more then kishi ;) i can make a guess about his story but cant about your and there are only 2-3 plot no jutsu in your story(like tobi defeated,naruto got control over jubi so easily) but there are a lot of plot no jutsu in kishi,s story. So i found your story more better :)
There are many points i like in this chapters:-
1. The way sasuke & naruto saved kakashi from akashi, reminds me starting of naruto :p
2. Akashi turned good,not sure its a trap or not :p
3. Guy back :D really happy to see him back to the life(yet it against rules but still i'm happy)
4. The conversation between jubi and naruto
5. Jubi stopped naruto to revive guy,i really enjoyed jubi's speech there. he seems to be very smart :p
6. I didnt expect gaara in final four but i like you add him :p
7. The way they one by one select their opponent(totally kishi style :D), reminds me that sasuke arc/konoha genin vs sound four arc.
8. The way kabuto introduced last six edo tensei(hokages,jiraiya and kushina) was outstanding. Kabuto was sounding like a true villain there. I love that :D
9. Naruto's new sealing techniques are awesome.
10.Naruto: Was that all he got?(cant stop my laugh here :D)
11. "brother from another mother" xdxd
12. I was right about suigetsu :D lets see what he can do against sasuke
Now few things i didnt like:-
1. Naruto again revived one more dead person(yet i'm happy guy alive) but its kinda again rules for me.
2. Only bad guys are getting down, all good guys are still alive!! At least let some few good guys die.
3. The conversation between ino,tenten,temari etc and between kakashi,A etc during naruto was fighting against 30 edo tensei. Its just like how kishi skipped natuo/bee/kakashi/guy vs Tobi/tailed beast fight :p but i can understand it;)

Again you proved you are best writer on base(for me). This chapter is epic,love it. Keep it up bro :) all the best :)
Haha, I guess my final work in TLSoK series, which will be a one shot/short movie type of deal will suit you fine then, when it arrives some time in the future :p xD;)

Yeah I know, lol. The thing is that I at that point felt that I would never be able to beat its length, but as you can see, it did happen after all xD So I'm not sure what the future will bring, but this time I'm quite certain that chapter 8 will be my biggest standalone chapter ever, lol. We shall see indeed :scorps: ;)

2 - I have some plans regarding Akashi :p You will have to wait and see ;)

7 - Yeah, that was in fact my inspiration for choosing the "plot style" of the upcoming battles :p

8 - Yep, that was probably my favourite part so far in my FF :p I was literally shaking in excitement when writing it, lol.

1 & 2 - Yeah I know, I'm bad at killing off main/canon characters from the Naruto series xD I think I've only killed off Kitsuchi and Chojuro so far, and that's saying a lot I suppose, lol. I suppose I never found the right time to do so really, and killing off major character seemed to be a bit out of my right to do or something... I just never felt it fitted, though there's actually... I'll leave it at that, lol. ;)

3 - Yeah, the chapter would have become way too long if I was going to portrait that too, but it really wasn't part of my plan to show either, but I guess it would have been kind off cool to see, huh? The truth is, I'm more excited about the upcoming fights than showing that part off as it would have taken up too much space and time, and I didn't really feel like writing that battle to begin with.

Awesome review mate! :D
 

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Man this was pretty long chapter.......but it is definately one of the best chapter u have written so far....
Now that u have mentioned about the sage's tomb, i wonder if madara in the original manga know's about it. I mean its possible that it might have inscribed in the uchiha's stone table about the sage's tomb or maybe the bijuus(kurama or hachibi) would know about it.....what u think about it......!!!!=D=D
 
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