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Whoa, that post was great :p Well don't say that you don't have any friends? :-/ And no worries at all, I did take it as a compliment, and only wanted to explain my situation and how I felt on the subject as your post intrigued me to do so ;) But yeah, I don't really have a burning passion for writing anything else than FF, at least not now, but your compliment really means a lot, and I'm glad that you bothered to actually come up with such a statement, a statement that has lit my writing spirit to even high grounds ^^ For that, thank you my friend
Glad to have made such an impact. Though, I'm only 17, so I'm not wise enough to sprout my beliefs to my peers. I do think I know what I'm talking about when it comes to writing.

P.S.-I'll start reading it soon. I promise.
 

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Glad to have made such an impact. Though, I'm only 17, so I'm not wise enough to sprout my beliefs to my peers. I do think I know what I'm talking about when it comes to writing.

P.S.-I'll start reading it soon. I promise.
Hehe, well everyone's opinion matters, no matter the age, *** or ethnic background ;)

I'll be looking forward to it then, as you seem to be one with a lot on your mind, a lot of great things that is :p^^
 

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Another superb chapter! :)

I loved the conversation between Naruto and the Juubi... trust me you got an unique imagination... I swear it was flawless.
The battle was intense as well... but... pleaaaaase don't kill Gai :'(. xd

Where do you got your inspiration?
 

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Another superb chapter! :)

I loved the conversation between Naruto and the Juubi... trust me you got an unique imagination... I swear it was flawless.
The battle was intense as well... but... pleaaaaase don't kill Gai :'(. xd

Where do you got your inspiration?
I was hoping that the conversation between Naruto and the Jubi didn't feel too long:p And I think the reason it turned out so well (IMO), was because of the SoSP element included...
Check the next chapter to find out :p;)
It started out small, and then it evolved into something big xD The manga itself and reading other FFs, as well as watching countless movies I suppose xd=P

Thanks for reading and commenting!^^
 

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I was hoping that the conversation between Naruto and the Jubi didn't feel too long:p And I think the reason it turned out so well (IMO), was because of the SoSP element included...
Check the next chapter to find out :p;)
It started out small, and then it evolved into something big xD The manga itself and reading other FFs, as well as watching countless movies I suppose xd=P

Thanks for reading and commenting!^^
Np. :)

About the Juubi conversation... it was great and it seems concrete.... you've just created another worthy journey for the character.
Sometimes I would sit and try to think of a storyline that could build up on the manga... but I'm not that good when it comes to expressing my thoughts through writing. You've done it superbly and have unknowingly even incorporated some of my thoughts.
 

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Np. :)

About the Juubi conversation... it was great and it seems concrete.... you've just created another worthy journey for the character.
Sometimes I would sit and try to think of a storyline that could build up on the manga... but I'm not that good when it comes to expressing my thoughts through writing. You've done it superbly and have unknowingly even incorporated some of my thoughts.
Thanks. I'm glad to see that I still have it in me after all these years, and that I'm able to inspire such posts from my readers ^^
Yeah, I often use my own thoughts, ideas and predictions in my FF as well. Anything special that matched? =)
 
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Thanks. I'm glad to see that I still have it in me after all these years, and that I'm able to inspire such posts from my readers ^^
Yeah, I often use my own thoughts, ideas and predictions in my FF as well. Anything special that matched? =)
Like the part where one of the real sons has survived... I mean who else to believe than the one that really knows.
The other ideas were minor.
 

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Like the part where one of the real sons has survived... I mean who else to believe than the one that really knows.
The other ideas were minor.
Yeah, although this was before the whole Tobi's identity was revealed thing, so who knows how my FF would have turned out if I began writing a year later or so :p But I guess that goes for a lot of the elements in my FF.
 

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Yeah I know you've been :p And I would probably have progressed much further than this if it hadn't been for my writing-roll being cut short because of school, four months ago >_> But yeah, I'm back, and chapter 8 is already done as well! ;)

Your praise are too good my friend, but thanks for having that much faith in me ^^
Well he doesn't have complete control yet as the Jubi isn't cooperating at the moment, but I guess only the future will tell what will happen ;) Glad you liked the story of the SoSP and the interaction between Naruto and the Jubi. That was actually a part that I didn't have in my original plans for this chapter, but it just popped in my head when writing.
Well the reason that part might seem a bit long is because the flashback in it is actually a scene from chapter 14 of the original - in it's full form, so I kind of pulled a Kishi there and had a complete, already seen flashback for the first time in my writing career.
Yeah poor guy, he always loved her to the end, and Mei's daughter will play a bigger role later in my series, but her father will never be revealed as I don't really have a character for the role, lol.

Hehe, that was indeed one crazy moment of my FanFiction indeed, but if you have an excellent memory, or just itchy fingers to re-read chapter 3 of this sequel, you would already know the answer to your own question, whether Gai survives or not ;)

Well the only reason he's still alive and overpowered is because he's been injected with Hashirama cells, is directly linked to Kabuto through his binding seal, and his curse mark gives him some sort of regeneration technique, or else he would have been dead long time ago for sure. Chapter 8 will show you what happens next ;)

Yeah, I always had in mind for Kabuto to become the final villain, ever since I planned that Naruto and Sasuke were going to fight Tobi during the chaos of the war. I just think that Kabuto has more character potential, and Tobi/Obito's character has already been used to it's extend in the manga. I also like Kabuto as a villain more too as he reminds me in many ways of Orochimaru, whom was the most badass villain of all time, lol.

If Suigetsu is the spy? That's a good question :p All I can say is that the spy's identity will be revealed in the next one ;) Whether he's a new character or an already established one.

Thanks for your review my friend, it means everything, and yeah, thank you for your condolences.
JUST read the chapter 3 and i found Guy will be alive:D
i was right about suigetsu :scorps:
 
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