The Legendary Sage of Konoha Returns 6 [21]

[Kuroi Honoo]

I'll try to keep this short

3: I'm not sure whether or not I should be glad or sad that the prophecy thingy tormented you so much, but I'm glad it made a impact on you

4: 50 chapters easy? I'm unsure actually, if I don't hit the 50th mark with TLSoK, I might still hit it within the same universe O__O I've written something about the future of my FF at the end of my next chapter, so you'll have to wait until then to see what I mean

5: Now that you ask, I'm not sure what I would have done If Kishi had been faster than me, lol.

6: He sure is O__o Nope. In fact, I never really got into all of the characters and coupling, just some of the main ones. I did mention something about konoha 11 in chapter 2, but it was quite vague indeed. Not sure if I'll ever go into them all in a deeper form later on or not. Not sure if I have time and space at this point to be honest.

3) By all means you are allowed to feel whoever you want xd And it all worked out thankfully so... lol

4) Well it seemed like you were being sarcastic so I thought to do the same but what I really meant was that when you put your mind to it you could accomplish anything.

5) xd

6) Okay that’s what I thought and I see. I suppose I thought you paired most of Konoha 11 lol

 

[Michael92]

3) By all means you are allowed to feel whoever you want xd And it all worked out thankfully so... lol

4) Well it seemed like you were being sarcastic so I thought to do the same but what I really meant was that when you put your mind to it you could accomplish anything.

5) xd

6) Okay that’s what I thought and I see. I suppose I thought you paired most of Konoha 11 lol

I'm so glad that you and Irfan finally caught up, and I'm really excited to show what I have in store for you guys later on. This is only the beginning of the action

 

[MarBellarke]

This one has out-done the others.... Just like Trey Songz said... "SIMPLY AMAZING!"

No one should bash this chapter about him being over-powered.
He worked hard for it and we've all been looking forward to this. This was Tobi's goal... he knew it was attainable, but he was missing one piece of the puzzle... Naruto.
I loved the flow! I loved how how each event blended splendidly with the next... the flashbacks occur just at the right moment.

The resurrection scenes shouldn't be challenged either. Pain used his jutsu to resurrect the victims from his onslaught of the Leaf. Naruto's jutsu was similar... he's stronger, so as expected, its effect would be different.

Look out Kishimoto... I would love to see you top this.

 

[Michael92]

This one has out-done the others.... Just like Trey Songz said... "SIMPLY AMAZING!"

No one should bash this chapter about him being over-powered.
He worked hard for it and we've all been looking forward to this. This was Tobi's goal... he knew it was attainable, but he was missing one piece of the puzzle... Naruto.
I loved the flow! I loved how how each event blended splendidly with the next... the flashbacks occur just at the right moment.

The resurrection scenes shouldn't be challenged either. Pain used his jutsu to resurrect the victims from his onslaught of the Leaf. Naruto's jutsu was similar... he's stronger, so as expected, its effect would be different.

Look out Kishimoto... I would love to see you top this.

Awesome post

Yeah, I do agree with you. I thought that this was my best chapter yet, until I released Chapter 8 that is And thanks ^^

Finally someone agrees 100% with me on this xD I was starting to think that it was just me whom could see this happening at the end of the Naruto Manga

Haha, yeah xd

Keeo those reviews coming my friend ^^

 

[MarBellarke]

Awesome post

Yeah, I do agree with you. I thought that this was my best chapter yet, until I released Chapter 8 that is And thanks ^^

Finally someone agrees 100% with me on this xD I was starting to think that it was just me whom could see this happening at the end of the Naruto Manga

Haha, yeah xd

Keeo those reviews coming my friend ^^

Spoke it like I saw it.

"...until I released Chapter 8 that is...".... are you kidding me? better?.... I can't wait until I reach it. xd

 

[Michael92]

Spoke it like I saw it.

"...until I released Chapter 8 that is...".... are you kidding me? better?.... I can't wait until I reach it. xd

Well, the start of it might seem a slow, but from the middle to the end... especially the end xd That's probably my favorite moment in my FF so far. The end/cliffhanger of Chapter 8, lol

 

[+Kyon+]

once again great chapter(how many time i have to say it???)
Its not a large chapter,not at all. Hardly took 20-22 minutes to finish
Now on the chapter, i really dont know how to start or from where to start review The way you show the fight sequence,conversation sequence etc etc is just like a professional writer. I love almost sequence in this chapter. I dont know what to say about it,i failed to find words to explain my review.
Things i like in this chapter-
1. The way naruto beat jubi and sealed it into himself
2. Naruto mastered Dead demon seal
3. Conversation between Naruto and jubi
4. Tobi's comeback
5. Naruto's supernova element/bloodline explosion
6. Naruto's new powers with Jubi chakra
7. Uses of FTG
8. Sakura still after sasuke?? xd is not she?
9. Flashback between naruto and oonki
10. these lines - "Uchiha Madara/Uzumaki Madara (In Unison): Impossible?! How did you acquire such a powerful technique?!

Senju Hashirama/ Uzumaki Sasuke (In Unison): It doesn't matter now, *Pant, Pant*... with this technique... my ultimate jutsu... I will finish you off, once and for all!
(ii) Hashirama/Naruto (In Unison): This time, there won't be another battle!

Tobi: !!

Hashirama/Naruto (In Unison): With my newly developed jutsu, you will die!

11. A lot of other stuff like cry babies on sasuke's death xd etc

Things i didnt like-
1. Jubi starting help naruto very soon
2. You pushed sasuke very much,he should be dead soon like killer bee
3. Both sasuke and bee got back to life, at least let some good guys die too
Overall its an epic chapter. At a place reminds me Haku vs naruto & sasuke
So. . . . . . thats all

 

[Michael92]

once again great chapter(how many time i have to say it???)
Its not a large chapter,not at all. Hardly took 20-22 minutes to finish
Now on the chapter, i really dont know how to start or from where to start review The way you show the fight sequence,conversation sequence etc etc is just like a professional writer. I love almost sequence in this chapter. I dont know what to say about it,i failed to find words to explain my review.
Things i like in this chapter-
1. The way naruto beat jubi and sealed it into himself
2. Naruto mastered Dead demon seal
3. Conversation between Naruto and jubi
4. Tobi's comeback
5. Naruto's supernova element/bloodline explosion
6. Naruto's new powers with Jubi chakra
7. Uses of FTG
8. Sakura still after sasuke?? xd is not she?
9. Flashback between naruto and oonki
10. these lines - "Uchiha Madara/Uzumaki Madara (In Unison): Impossible?! How did you acquire such a powerful technique?!

Senju Hashirama/ Uzumaki Sasuke (In Unison): It doesn't matter now, *Pant, Pant*... with this technique... my ultimate jutsu... I will finish you off, once and for all!
(ii) Hashirama/Naruto (In Unison): This time, there won't be another battle!

Tobi: !!

Hashirama/Naruto (In Unison): With my newly developed jutsu, you will die!

11. A lot of other stuff like cry babies on sasuke's death xd etc

Things i didnt like-
1. Jubi starting help naruto very soon
2. You pushed sasuke very much,he should be dead soon like killer bee
3. Both sasuke and bee got back to life, at least let some good guys die too
Overall its an epic chapter. At a place reminds me Haku vs naruto & sasuke
So. . . . . . thats all

20-22 minutes to finish you say? Well that's a lot by "normal" standards, lol. Though I like them this size too ^^

Glad you like it my friend ^^ I think you managed to cover it all basically

I don't have too much to say at this point, as you already know what comes next. But a wonderful review mate, and I really appreciate that you took your time to come up with it, even if the chapters are starting to get a bit old ^^

 

[sanninuto]

well, simply amazing I'm speechless

 

[Hori]

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Loved it!

 

[darkstar94]

hahaha........funnily im not able to decide if it was an awesome chapter or a totally nonsense chapter.....!!