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I've decided to try rebooting my long forgotten and dead Social Group (it had been a year since the last post before I rebooted it), so please tell me whether you think that is a good idea or not xD :p: Also, remember to vote on the poll on top of this thread!

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The Legendary Sage of Konoha Series, All Previous Chapters [In Chronological Reading Order]:

The Legendary Sage of Konoha;

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Sasuke Chronicles;

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Kakashi Chronicles;


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The Legendary Sage of Konoha Returns;

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The Legendary Sage of Konoha Returns, Chapter 20;
The Sennin-Bijou Mode, and the God of War!:​

Naruto: A little earlier, you said that the battle had only just begun... For once, I agree!!

Flying off at immense speed from the bottom of the whirlpool, the Sage had no time to react as Naruto suddenly stood face to face with him, knocking him off the smaller elemental dragon with a powerful punch.

SoSP (Static Voice): Ugh!

Naruto: Do not... underestimate me!!... Do not... underestimate my ninja way!!!

Naruto then Smashed his fist down in the back of the smaller dragon with powerful force, causing it to lose its grip on the bigger six headed elemental dragon, as it tumbled over and fell through the sky. Fukasaku and Shima then followed up by piercing their black chakra swords down in it as they ripped it wide open with countless slashes. Naruto then jumped forward towards its head, as a massive red chakra sword formed in his hands.

Naruto: Arrrrrrgh!!!

Piercing it right through the smaller dragon's head as they hit the sea, a massive source of water shot up in all directions, and a bloodbath without equal painted the sea red. Leaping off at great speed, Naruto flew over to the Sage, who was still flying through the air. Just as he was about to reach him however, the six headed elemental dragon came between them as all six heads fired up each of their elemental attacks right towards him. However, instead of evading the attacks, Naruto raised his sword as he and the two toads swept the attacks aside as they cut off three of the heads of the dragon in the process, causing it to let out a massive roar. But before Naruto managed to finish it off, he noticed a Rasenringu coming in from the rear as he managed to get a block up just in time.

*Bang!!*

Causing an massive explosion, Naruto went flying through the air as a trail of smoke was left behind. Crashing to the sea, Naruto then quickly got up to his feet again as he saw the six headed elemental dragon's cut off heads regenerating back.

Shima: The heads are back?!

Fukasaku: Don't you remember?? The only way to defeat that dragon is to cut off all of its heads at the same time! We already went through this when we fought them not long ago with Sasuke against Tobi!

Naruto: Right...

The Sage had already got on top of the dragon, as he was keeping his distance from Naruto. From the sides, the Sun and Moon Dragons came flying in, and the three Titans of the Earth also jumped in between Naruto and the Sage. From under him, beneath the sea, three shadows appeared as they got closer and closer.

Shima: This new appearance of yours Naruto... It surely comes with some benefits doesn't it??

Fukasaku: Not only is the cloak bigger and stronger, protecting us from incoming attacks, but we also have two swords each to fight with...

Shima: And not to forget that your Rinnegan is shared with us right now, meaning that we now have the same advantages of shared vision as Pain had when Jiraiya fought him in his final battle...

Naruto: Heh, this is only just the beginning... Fukasaku, keep an eye on the shadows beneath us, Shima, keep your eyes focused on the Earth Titans in front of us... I'll set my target on the Sage himself!!

As the three shadows was just about to break out of the sea beneath them, Naruto then leaped off without even looking down as he maneuvered between the three Earth Titans, knocking the Mountain Troll off its feet in the process, jumping through the air, between the Sun and Moon Dragons, and appearing right before the Sage himself with a Rasengan of titanic size in hand.

SoSP (Static Voice): You're fast?!

Naruto: Take this!!!

Smashing the Rasengan right into the Six Headed Elemental Dragon, causing a major explosion, Naruto then suddenly disappeared as the Sage went flying through the air. From a distance, the Sage watched as a bright light appeared on several different spots on all of the Titans, as blood suddenly spilled out from those marks, and massive trees began to strap themselves around the Titans.

SoSP (Static Voice): ?!

The Titans then tumbled over as the Killer-whale was tossed up high in the air towards the Sage at rapid speed.

SoSP (Static Voice): It can't be?!?!

Hitting him dead on high up in the air, the Sage and the Killer-Whale went crashing into a nearby mountain, causing the earth to rumble heavily.

Naruto: *Pant, pant* So this is what this new power-up can do... I'm able to use Mokton (Wood Element) too now... *Smirk*

Shima: Your Flying Thunder God was even faster than normal!!

Fukasaku: Even so, one blow is not enough to kill off these Titans, those attacks only left scratch-marks. We need to do more powerful series of attacks, like we did when we dealt with that smaller elements dragon earlier...

Shima: Naruto, to your le-...

Naruto: I know... We share the same eyes now, remember?? *Smirk*

From the left, the Sun Dragon fired up an intensely hot attack as it headed straight for Naruto.

Fukasaku: Right...

Naruto: I know...

From the right, the Moon Dragon also came flying in as it fired up a blizzard right at him.

Shima: Are you...

Naruto: Not yet...

The two attacks closed in at him, as they got nearer and nearer.

Fukasaku: Flying Thunder God??

Naruto: *Smirk* Not yet...

Gravitating in mid air, right above the sea, Naruto stood idle by as the two attacks were inches from crashing into him.

Naruto: Now!!

As the two attacks were supposed to crash into him, their attack-routes were altered as they flew by him on each of his sides instead.

Fukasaku: Shinra Tensei (Almighty Push)... Not bad.

Using the Shinra Tensei of the Rinnegan, Naruto altered the attacks' route to go passed him on his sides instead, as the two attacks headed in opposite directions, straight for the two dragons. Due to their rapid speed, the two dragons had no time to react, as the Sun Dragon's attack hit the Moon Dragon, and vice versa.

Shima: It's... super effective!!

Naruto: Hehehe...

The two dragons tumbled over as they went crashing towards the sea. Some kilometers away, the Killer-whale was suddenly sent flying through the air again from the land, as it dived back in the sea. From the rubles of the mountain, a massive chakra source shot up in the air.

Naruto: He's back...

Fukasaku: That's the same as??

Naruto: It's his technique after all...

Flying up in the air, the Sage then suddenly appeared before Naruto in the same form as he was, although his Sennin-Bijou Mode was a bit different... It was powered up by dark chakra, and the face of the Jubi appeared on each of his shoulders...

Shima: On his shoulders... that's-...?!

The Sage then began spinning rapidly around as countless Bijou bombs went flying from his shoulders towards Naruto.

Naruto: Shit...

Dodging in between some of them, Naruto raised his sword as he flew towards the Sage, meeting him head on. In counter, the Sage also formed a massive sword in his hand, as they clashed together high up in the air, exchanging countless blows between them. The three Titans of the Earth and Sea watched them from below, still restrained by the wood element. Seemingly all of the Titans of the Sky had been taken care off, when suddenly, the Six Headed Elemental Dragon came flying in once more towards them.

Naruto: Damn he's strong!!

Fukasaku: You'll have to keep up with him!!

The Sage's sword got bigger and darker as he slowly began to overpower Naruto. The two Jubi faces on his shoulders then began to spit mini Bijou Bombs as they attached to the Sage's sword.

Shima: He's?!

SoSP (Static Voice): Don't think you've won just yet!!

As he said, a violent explosion appeared between them as they both went flying in opposite directions. The Sage quickly turned around mid-air as he landed on top of the Six Headed Elemental Dragon, leaping off at great speed towards Naruto.

Naruto: Shit-... Ugh!

Before Naruto managed to regain his balance, the titanic dragon crashed into him, sending him flying towards the sea. From below, the other Titans had been able to break free from the Wood Element, as the Mountain Troll then swung his club and hit Naruto dead on. But the attack did not stop there!... The T-Rex and the Dragon-Worm combined an attack, as they both fired up two massive beams right for him, also hitting him dead on as Naruto almost caught on fire.

Naruto: Ughaaaaarhg!

As the attack ended, Naruto slowly fell through the air as the Elephant Rhino aimed to pierce right through him with its horn.

Fukasaku: ug-... get out now!!

Using his last strength, Fukasaku performed Shinra Tensei as Naruto's direction was altered enough for him to hit the horn on the side, rolling down the side of it, before the Elephant-Rhino tossed him off towards the Octopus who smashed all of its tentacles at him at the same time, sending him far down into the sea.

Naruto: *Blub...blub...blub...*

As he was still sinking down, the Killer-Whale appeared as it swallowed him whole. Naruto sank through its stomach, as he got confined by some of the creatures inner-cells...

Naruto: Is this.. the end??

Jubi: Oh for heaven's sake, haven't we already been through this??

Naruto: ...

Jubi: With my regeneration- and healing power, plus the protective Sennin-Bijou mode you are in now, you're almost invincible... Those attacks didn't even leave a scratch on you, now go and do some real fighting you damn P*ssy!!

Naruto: !!

Before Naruto managed to think things through, the Killer-Whale spat him out at intense speed, as Naruto shot up from the sea, and landed on top of the Six Headed Elemental Dragon.

Naruto: Ugh!

Falling on his back on top of the dragon, Naruto was barely able to move as the dragon was flying around through the air. The Sage, whom also stood on top of the Dragon, then walked over to him as he positioned himself beside him.

SoSP (Static Voice): My oh my, you really are a tough nut to crack Naruto-Kun!! But fear not, I'll make this quick and painless...

Naruto: Kabuto, you...

Still not able to move, Naruto's eyes widened as the Sage fired up a Rasenringu to strike at him.

SoSP (Static Voice): Now this is the end... No more playing around, no more tricks up your sleeve, no more trying to be a smart-ass! This is a lost cause, time you realized that... Nothing you, or any of your friends can do, will be enough to stop me this time... After I'm done with you, I'll destroy Sasuke and the rest of the alliance, I'll destroy everyone you've ever care about and erase them from this world! And yet, there is nothing you can do!! You hear that?! Nothing! It's over, you're finished, I've won, Naruto-Kun!! Kehehehehe, ahahahaha!!

Naruto: *Smirk*

SoSP (Static Voice): What are you laughing about you worm!! Don't you see? You're not even able to move anymore...

Naruto: Ahahaha! What I found funny, is the fact that you're not able to differ the real me... from a clone!!

SoSP (Static Voice): What?!

Suddenly, the Sea beneath them exploded in a massive whirlpool, as the six Titans of the Sea and Earth got tossed around in a violent thunder-storm. The Naruto laying in front of him then suddenly vanished, as a hand was struck right through the Sage's back.

SoSP (Static Voice): A clone eh... I should have known better...

Turning his head around, the Sage realized that Naruto stood behind him, as he had pierced a Reaper Seal Rasengan through his back, as he slowly began to disappear into it.

Naruto: The Super Deadly Reaper Seal Rasengan... or the Wormhole Rasengan, if you'd like, had finally reloaded... If you had been present while I sealed the previous Hokages, Jiraiya, my mom, Madara and Orochimaru, you would have known what I'm capable off...

SoSP (Static Voice): Sigh... I guess this is the end then...You win... I DON'T think so!!

As the Sage was slowly being dragged into the Reaper Seal Rasengan, he suddenly reappeared some meters in front of Naruto instead, unaffected by the attack.

Naruto: ?!

SoSP (Static Voice): You forget one important thing... This is my dimension!! My will is reality, and nothing you do will change that! Only the Sage is able to cancel this technique, you can't win!!

Leaping off towards Naruto, with his Sennin-Bijou Mode sword, ready to strike, the Sage crashed with Naruto, whom quickly brought up his own sword as the two began to exchange countless strikes and blows between them. The Thunder Storm began to get more and more fierce, as the Titans below were tossed around in the violent whirlpool.

SoSP (Static Voice): I'm impressed that you're able to affect this dimension this much with your chakra Naruto-Kun, but I still have some tricks up my sleeve!

Naruto: ?!

Suddenly, the remaining Titans below began to merge with each other, as a creature with no description available appeared, ten times the size of the Jubi, reaching above the very sky itself.

Shima: What is??

Fukasaku: That's not real?!

SoSP (Static Voice): You're right about that!! Nothing in this dimension really is!

Naruto: Nonetheless, I will still defeat you!

Firing up a Rasengan, Naruto tempted to knock the Sage off the Six Headed Elemental Dragon, but the Sage quickly countered, as he used Naruto's own Rasengan, by grabbing on to his hand, to send him off instead.

Naruto: Ugh...

As he was flying through the air, Naruto tried to regain his balance as he saw the monstrous creature closing in on him. Managing to regain his balance right before he hit the ground, Naruto was gravitating in the air, as the Elemental Dragon, with the Sage on board, landed on top of the Titan's head.

Fukasaku: This is impossible! That thing should not exist, it does not exist!!

Shima: How do we beat that thing?!

Naruto: Hmm....

Jubi: Naruto!!

Naruto: ?! Ma, Pa, keep an eye out for me...

Hearing the Jubi talking to him from inside, Naruto quickly closed his eyes as he ventured inside himself to talk to him.

Jubi: You know what this means right...

Naruto: ...

Jubi: The final option... That's the only thing you can do now...

Triggering a flashback in Naruto's memory, he thought long and hard on the words of the Sage.

*Flashback Begins*

'"Hmm... So anyways, you'll have to summon the Giant Toad of Mt. Myo to be able to fight my Titans..."

Naruto: Your Titans??

"You'll see soon enough... If you take a deep breath, you should already realize that I've transferred my knowledge on how to summon him..."

Naruto: ?! How did you...

"This is my dimension after all, it's done telepathically through your subconscious... However... If that should fail, there is but one thing left that you can do..."

Naruto: ??

"And that is first to use the Sennin-Bijou Mode..."

Naruto: Sennin-Bijou Mode?!

"You are a Toad Sage, right? The Sennin-Bijou Mode is a combination of the Tailed beast's raw power and the abilities granted through Sage Mode... If you combined those two, you'll be able to experience power like never before! What's even better, is if you're a true Sage, and are able to use Toad Summons in your Sennin Mode, then you'll be able to even reach the next stage, the final stage... The Stage I was able to reach just before my death..."

Naruto: Final Stage??

"The final stage grants you access to the third stage of the Bijou Mode, as well as access to the Ultimate Summoning... The one I designed to protect the earth against supernatural beings, like the Jubi and the Titans... If you can access this stage, then you truly are my successor, and even my summoned body will not be able to compete then..."

Naruto: I...

"As I told you previously, the seal I placed upon myself limits my powers in this resurrected stage, and although I'm able to use all my techniques, the final stage of the Bijou Mode, as well as the God of War, requires my consciousness intact to perform..."

Naruto: The God of war?!

"You will see soon enough... Our time is running short, and I can sense that guy slowly taking over... however, there's but one more thing I need to find out first..."

Naruto: And what's that??

"Your true resolve..."

Naruto: ...

"This dimension is called the Overworld, or Skyworld if you'd like. This is where I created the Great Toad Sage, as well as the Nine Tailed Beasts from the Jubi's chakra, sending his body out of this world, creating the moon... My other Dimension is called the Underworld, which is the Dimension I sealed away the Nine Titans of this world to... If this Kabuto guy is able to utilize my true ability, he's probably going to transfer you and I there... To be able to cancel my technique, you'll have to use the Legendary Weapon..."

Naruto: The Legendary Weapon?? As in one of the Six Treasured Tools??

"No... You'll have to use the Goddess Sword... But to be able to use the Sword, you'll have to prove yourself worthy as its wielder..."

Naruto: The Goddess Sword??... Hmm... The Jubi did mention it earlier, but he said he would tell that story some other time...

"The Sword can only be wielded by a living person, so even I can't cancel the technique once I've gone through with it in this state... and to be able to prove yourself, you must..."'

*Flashback Ends*

Naruto: Let's do this then...

Venturing back to reality, Naruto then quickly preformed some hand-seals as his Sennin-Bijou Mode began to transform. The Jubi's chakra cloak then extended high and wide up into the air, as Naruto hoovered up from the ground and up into the air, as his Sennin-Bijou Mode took upon a titanic shape.

SoSP (Static Voice): Is that Madara's Perfect Susanoo?? No... This is different... And much bigger!!

A massive armor formed around him and two gigantic swords appeared in each of the Jubi's chakra hands, as Naruto's new Mode stood far up in the sky...

Naruto: I'm not done yet!!

Between Naruto and the Sage, a dense and gigantic smokescreen appeared as a summoning towering as high up in the air as the deformed Titan itself, suddenly stood. Looking similar to Naruto's new mode, the creature looked metallic, more like a gigantic statue than a living being.

Naruto: With the final stage of the Bijou mode, the Super Sennin-Bijou Mode, and the God of War itself... I will triumphant!!

SoSP (Static Voice): Come then, Naruto-Kun!!

*The Battle goes into its final stage!!*​

~ End Chapter 20​

* Naruto's Final form appears! Will it be enough to stop the Titans? Find out, Next Time! *


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Fun Facts & Author's Note:

1: Like I said at the beginning of this chapter, I've decided to try rebooting my The Legendary Sage of Konoha Base, Social Group, to see if people would still be interested in keeping it alive or not. Please tell me what you think!: Also, remember to vote on the poll on the top of this thread if you haven't already!

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2: Do you listen to the music I've posted on the top and bottom of the last few chapters?? If so, do you or do you not like it?? Please answer! O__O

3: I think I beat my own record at getting this chapter done, as I only used about two hours to write the rough layout... And I usually use between 3-6 hours per chapter! O__O I guess that's an improvement, haha =p

4: You've probably noticed that I haven't had too many fun facts lately?? Well the main reason is because most of the recent chapters are done from scratch, and I don't really have too much to say about them. I do have a major part of Chapter 27 done though, that I did over a year ago, so stay tuned for that, haha! xD

5: I openly challenged the great RokuNR himself on his profile last week, by stating that I've set my eyes on overtaking his record breaking number of FanFiction awards (I got 11 so far, he got 14)... Do you think I'll be able to accomplish that? O__o

6: The final sequel of this series is starting to take form with The Legendary Sage of Konoha's Legacy, and I've finally laid out the outline for TLSoSP (The Legendary Sage of Six Paths) as well. My head is already set upon the future, and those two FFs are going to be a lot of fun to do! I'm not sure which one I'll do first yet though, as I may do them both at the same time. Then I also got the "Short Movie" to do, so we shall see indeed.

7: Ever since chapter 7 of this sequel, I've bluntly given references to my upcoming FF about the Sage through the dialogues of the Jubi and the Sage himself in this FF. I can't think of too many of them at the moment, other than the Jubi telling Naruto that he would reveal more of the Sage's story and the Legendary Sword "some other time" in Chapter 7... That's a real Fun Fact for you I guess, haha =p

8: I have a feeling Escorpiius, and perhaps even some others, will get a feeling that I've been inspired by Dragonball with Naruto's power-ups... The fact is, I've never seen or read (there is a manga, right?? xD) any DB, and all I know of the series is that the Main character is super strong and flies around and shit, haha. Thinking about it, I actually got these ideas by remembering my childhood when I watched Digimon... Because in Digimon, they always had a form of upgrading themselves all the time =p Oh, and there's actually a reference to Pokemon in this chapter somewhere too xD

9: A lot of points this time around, and I must say that I had much fun doing this chapter, and I'm set at writing full speed ahead towards the end of this series! We're not quite there yet, but I think I should have managed to finish this series by the end of August, if not sooner! Anyways, that's all I have for now. Hope you enjoyed this chapter, and please remember to thank me if you did! I would appreciate that, as well as any comment! ^_^ And as always people, have an awesome day! ;D
 
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Shima: It's... super effective!!
Heh heh heh
I usually listen to the music, it's mostly Two Steps from Hell though so I don't even need to play since I've listened to them quite a bit.
On to the chapter - I'm glad you're showing us all these power-ups the way you are, you can't really do it prior to the crucial moments because it'll ruin the cliffhanger and I really like your usage of flashbacks :p I can't wait to see more of what you're aiming for with this final bijou-mode powerup =D As always, I will be looking forward to your next release!
 

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Heh heh heh
I usually listen to the music, it's mostly Two Steps from Hell though so I don't even need to play since I've listened to them quite a bit.
On to the chapter - I'm glad you're showing us all these power-ups the way you are, you can't really do it prior to the crucial moments because it'll ruin the cliffhanger and I really like your usage of flashbacks :p I can't wait to see more of what you're aiming for with this final bijou-mode powerup =D As always, I will be looking forward to your next release!
Haha, played a lot of Pokemon huh?? =p
I got into them last year, and since then I was hooked. I try to mix it up a bit though, but I'll use TSFH on a few more chapters to come, at least at the end of them ;)
The next few chapters will wrap it all up bro! Stay tuned ^_^
Thanks, glad you liked it :p
 

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Claps claps claps!!!!!!! Now this is what i was expecting from you. What a chapter bro,totally epic :)

I loved whole chapter,line by line. Epic fights with mind blowing power ups. Naruto is/will be like a god now. I dont know how to give a review of this chapter,its one of the best chapter and fight between sage & naruto is on a another level,you never seen before.

Starting of chapter is awesome with naruto's super fast action packed attacks:p and bad day for ' That Dragon ' =D After that finally naruto started to use rinnegan and the he used shared vision,who says naruto is fool??? He is cool =D

After this, attack on sage(good to see naruto using Rasengan basic form) and FTG level 3 i think :p(the Sage watched as a bright light appeared on several different spots on all of the Titans). Sage,titans all in one shot. This is totally amazing. But real thing start from here, Wood Release!!!!!! Better then hashirama. If this is not enough then wait, here comes raw power. Bad day for sage and whale too i think =D

Now my most awaited, Shinra Tensei =D and he used it with perfect timing, What an awesome way to attack dragons by each others attack. So once again, who says naruto doesnt use mind U_U

Now its Sages turn(he is god of naruto universe aftera all, not going to die so easy). " It was powered up by dark chakra, and the face of the Jubi appeared on each of his shoulders " its amazing with a horror feeling(dont know why horror feeling here :p). I wish i could see this fight. Biju bombs from shoulders ,This power/technique is totally mind blowing and naruto fly between these by Dodging bombs is more mind blowing then it =D " mini Bijou Bombs as they attached to the Sage's sword " no word to describe my feelings while i was reading it :p

The way Sage and titans attack naruto one by one in was nice and how fukasaku saved him was also nice. And once again in stomach of titans... I think they are in love with naruto :D

You know one of the best thing in your ff/writing style is that when we start to think that this is the final power up and enemy will be dead now,Then you make opponent more strong and we think how much powerful he is or what will our hero do now :p its like SURPRISE =D

Now kabuto got overconfident and fooled by a clone was a nice move,naruto's fav jutsu i think :D

I was like " what??? so easily?? " when naruto use that sealing rasengan but again you are a genius writer bro(hope you got what i'm meaning here), Sage is back. And you also keep in mind that naruto's attack should be effect sage's dimension (they are very very strong after all) so The Thunder Storm is the best thing to show it :)

Now a new form of titans,mixture of all =D Plus ten times the size of the Jubi, reaching above the very sky..... I think it can play with moon by using it as a football =D

Flashback on perfect time,as expected from you :p second thing you nicely adjust flashbacks during story,just like kishi :p Your writing skills are really amazing :)

All things sage told,underworld,overworld,about great toad sage,titans are very nice, give a mysterious feel :p You should write a whole chapter about these things. Dont know whats is Goddess Sword and its powers but cant wait to see it. Also give a little information about it if possible in next chapter.

" final stage of the Bijou mode, the Super Sennin-Bijou Mode, and the God of War " wow!!!!!! Is there a limit of naruto's power ups???? =D Joking, great going. Now finally naruto is equal to titans in size :p And what is " Ultimate Summoning" ?????? Another summon???? What will it be??? Powerful then titans,jubi???? Is this war of god???? I'm excited now =D. Tell me one thing, from where you get this much imaginations????? You know, bigger and bigger and bigger :p i think naruto's latest summon is 10km long in height :p

So fight is going to its final stage,cant wait for it,release next chapters asap :p Epic chapter this one, great going, keep it up bro :)

Fun Facts & Author's Note:

1.ummmmmmm.............i'm not sure that much people are interested in it

2. i dont listen music :p

3. i dont know about time but this chapter is epic :p

4. Your Fun Facts & Author's Note are like a little FF :p

5. " Do you think I'll be able to accomplish that " ???? I think?? Are you joking???? I dont think because I'm 100% sure you will break his record;) :win:

6. Ummm....... Okkk =D no comments :p You get a very long planning :p

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8. Same here, I've never seen DB :p

9. Thanks for this great chapter :)
 
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Since I'm on my laptop now, I can reply.

It was a good chapter for what it was. I give it a 8/10, mainly because I like the series. I've already talked to you about my dislike for major power-ups.

I'm probably going to be ground into the dust when you create your Sage FF...

I won't stand a chance with the amount of fans you have.
 

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This was a good chapter! Final form xD yey
Thanks mate ^_^

Great Chapter Keep it up

The God of War and Goddess Sword are overpowering Naruto but

The opponent is an overpowered being
Thanks =)
Well, the Goddess Sword and its real purpose still need to be revealed ;)

Claps claps claps!!!!!!! Now this is what i was expecting from you. What a chapter bro,totally epic :)

I loved whole chapter,line by line. Epic fights with mind blowing power ups. Naruto is/will be like a god now. I dont know how to give a review of this chapter,its one of the best chapter and fight between sage & naruto is on a another level,you never seen before.

Starting of chapter is awesome with naruto's super fast action packed attacks:p and bad day for ' That Dragon ' =D After that finally naruto started to use rinnegan and the he used shared vision,who says naruto is fool??? He is cool =D

After this, attack on sage(good to see naruto using Rasengan basic form) and FTG level 3 i think :p(the Sage watched as a bright light appeared on several different spots on all of the Titans). Sage,titans all in one shot. This is totally amazing. But real thing start from here, Wood Release!!!!!! Better then hashirama. If this is not enough then wait, here comes raw power. Bad day for sage and whale too i think =D

Now my most awaited, Shinra Tensei =D and he used it with perfect timing, What an awesome way to attack dragons by each others attack. So once again, who says naruto doesnt use mind U_U

Now its Sages turn(he is god of naruto universe aftera all, not going to die so easy). " It was powered up by dark chakra, and the face of the Jubi appeared on each of his shoulders " its amazing with a horror feeling(dont know why horror feeling here :p). I wish i could see this fight. Biju bombs from shoulders ,This power/technique is totally mind blowing and naruto fly between these by Dodging bombs is more mind blowing then it =D " mini Bijou Bombs as they attached to the Sage's sword " no word to describe my feelings while i was reading it :p

The way Sage and titans attack naruto one by one in was nice and how fukasaku saved him was also nice. And once again in stomach of titans... I think they are in love with naruto :D

You know one of the best thing in your ff/writing style is that when we start to think that this is the final power up and enemy will be dead now,Then you make opponent more strong and we think how much powerful he is or what will our hero do now :p its like SURPRISE =D

Now kabuto got overconfident and fooled by a clone was a nice move,naruto's fav jutsu i think :D

I was like " what??? so easily?? " when naruto use that sealing rasengan but again you are a genius writer bro(hope you got what i'm meaning here), Sage is back. And you also keep in mind that naruto's attack should be effect sage's dimension (they are very very strong after all) so The Thunder Storm is the best thing to show it :)

Now a new form of titans,mixture of all =D Plus ten times the size of the Jubi, reaching above the very sky..... I think it can play with moon by using it as a football =D

Flashback on perfect time,as expected from you :p second thing you nicely adjust flashbacks during story,just like kishi :p Your writing skills are really amazing :)

All things sage told,underworld,overworld,about great toad sage,titans are very nice, give a mysterious feel :p You should write a whole chapter about these things. Dont know whats is Goddess Sword and its powers but cant wait to see it. Also give a little information about it if possible in next chapter.

" final stage of the Bijou mode, the Super Sennin-Bijou Mode, and the God of War " wow!!!!!! Is there a limit of naruto's power ups???? =D Joking, great going. Now finally naruto is equal to titans in size :p And what is " Ultimate Summoning" ?????? Another summon???? What will it be??? Powerful then titans,jubi???? Is this war of god???? I'm excited now =D. Tell me one thing, from where you get this much imaginations????? You know, bigger and bigger and bigger :p i think naruto's latest summon is 10km long in height :p

So fight is going to its final stage,cant wait for it,release next chapters asap :p Epic chapter this one, great going, keep it up bro :)

Fun Facts & Author's Note:

1.ummmmmmm.............i'm not sure that much people are interested in it

2. i dont listen music :p

3. i dont know about time but this chapter is epic :p

4. Your Fun Facts & Author's Note are like a little FF :p

5. " Do you think I'll be able to accomplish that " ???? I think?? Are you joking???? I dont think because I'm 100% sure you will break his record;) :win:

6. Ummm....... Okkk =D no comments :p You get a very long planning :p

7.

8. Same here, I've never seen DB :p

9. Thanks for this great chapter :)
Glad you loved it bro, as i sure enjoyed writing it to the fullest!! :cool: xd

Haha, I thought I would have to had some real fast forward action, and this was the way to go. A lot of back-to-back fighting in this one, and the power-scale is beyond everything I've had to write before. I'm almost not sure how to deal with it, hehe ;p

Haha, playing football with the moon xD I actually saw a video game trailer from the game "Asura's Wrath" two years ago, and it was this trailer that inspired me to think: "No size is too big to fight"... Check it out!:



The boss is like a planet in comparison O__O
Though, my FF's Titans won't die that easily, haha :p

I am going to O__O I've said it a couple of times already that I'm going to do a FF about the Sage's life :p

The God of War is the ultimate summon, as explained it was designed by the Sage to protect the Earth from supernatural beings like the Jubi and the Titans.

I think it might be bigger, haha xD

The next week, I'm going to try and write the remaining chapters of this sequel, as well as organizing the beginning chapters of the final sequel and the new FF about the Sage. Once I'm done writing Chapter 21-26, the rest is going to go uber fast ;)

Only time shall see what I'll be able to do with the remaining part of this story I guess ;)

Damn! this battle completely overshadowed dbz in terms of destructive power.Great chapter once again =D
Oh?? xD Thanks mate :D

woah totally epic..!!! :whip: insane, final stage bijou mode:nosebleed: i'm speechless ,,
Thanks mate, glad you liked it ^_^

Since I'm on my laptop now, I can reply.

It was a good chapter for what it was. I give it a 8/10, mainly because I like the series. I've already talked to you about my dislike for major power-ups.

I'm probably going to be ground into the dust when you create your Sage FF...

I won't stand a chance with the amount of fans you have.
Oh! That's right, you have a FF about the Sage too, right?? Maybe I should draw inspiration from that then ;):cool:
Haha, I don't think that FF will be too amazing, as I'll use it more as a springboard rather than as a main FF, but we shall see ;)
 

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Another amazing chapter. This battle was on the destructive level of DBz, yet on the intellectual side of Naruto. These new forms you're showcasing are awesome, plus the combined rinnegan of Shima, Fukasaku, and Naruto is brilliant! Keep up this amazing effort!xd
 

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Love this chapter. I have thoroughly enjoyed the whole series. Although I do hope Naruto eventually gets to kick Kabuto's butt. *****
 

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Love this chapter. I have thoroughly enjoyed the whole series. Although I do hope Naruto eventually gets to kick Kabuto's butt. *****
New reader?? :D
So you've read through and caught up with my series from scratch? O__O Well that's great ^_^ Warms my heart to see newcomers, haha ;)

Glad to hear that you like my whole series, and not just my final chapters (as I personally feel that there's a gap between the original work and the sequel when it comes down to quality, and perhaps even quantity, hehe).

Haha, we shall see indeed ;)
 

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I was surprised by how much stronger Naruto/both elder toads had become and Naruto as well has a chakra sword-I really like that idea ^^ However, the Six-headed Elemental Dragon is another worthy opponent due to its regeneration. Finally, the Titans appear as I wondered where they were lol Naruto having Mokuton hmm...the only thing I can think of is that it also belonged to the Rikudou beside Hashirama and somehow was passed over to Naruto. Wow, the Rikudou powered-up in a big way and I liked his Sennin-Bijuu Mode appearance ^^ Now he too wields a sword-awesome! I asked myself how much more damage can Naruto take on? However, the Juubi’s quote about how impervious Naruto was, had come to my mind but its statement solidified it for me. This is unreal-Kabuto simply won’t quit no matter what. As if each Titan weren’t a handful enough, now they’ve merged into a being bigger than the Juubi O.O A final Sennin-Bijuu Mode stage-now I see so this is seemingly Naruto’s last attempt and by the looks of it, I think this unlocked power will be enough to defeat him once and for all. I liked Kabuto’s underestimation XD Once again another fantastical well written action-packed chapter overall! ;)

About Fun Facts & Author's Note:

2: Actually, I don’t but this is not because of your taste in music rather a time factor. When I read you FFs-I may or may not have enough time to even finish reading as I’m too thorough a reader. Regardless, I’ll attempt to listen when I can ;)

3: Indeed it is for that length only around 2 hours?! Thats crazy as it takes me anywhere from a span of days to finish a single chapter -_-

4: Always looking forward to what you release ^^

5: I think its very possible :)

6: Thanks for the info even though I’ve most likely been filled in (bad memory -_-)

7: Yes, Dragonball was first then Dragonball Z was a sequel were manga and then transitioned into an anime-you should definitely check it out! So you were into Digimon as a child huh-that’s cool. What about Pokemon?
 
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I was surprised by how much stronger Naruto/both elder toads had become and Naruto as well has a chakra sword-I really like that idea ^^ However, the Six-headed Elemental Dragon is another worthy opponent due to its regeneration. Finally, the Titans appear as I wondered where they were lol Naruto having Mokuton hmm...the only thing I can think of is that it also belonged to the Rikudou beside Hashirama and somehow was passed over to Naruto. Wow, the Rikudou powered-up in a big way and I liked his Sennin-Bijuu Mode appearance ^^ Now he too wields a sword-awesome! I asked myself how much more damage can Naruto take on? However, the Juubi’s quote about how impervious Naruto was, had come to my mind but its statement solidified it for me. This is unreal-Kabuto simply won’t quit no matter what. As if each Titan weren’t a handful enough, now they’ve merged into a being bigger than the Juubi O.O A final Sennin-Bijuu Mode stage-now I see so this is seemingly Naruto’s last attempt and by the looks of it, I think this unlocked power will be enough to defeat him once and for all. I liked Kabuto’s underestimation XD Once again another fantastical well written action-packed chapter overall! ;)

About Fun Facts & Author's Note:

2: Actually, I don’t but this is not because of your taste in music rather a time factor. When I read you FFs-I may or may not have enough time to even finish reading as I’m too thorough a reader. Regardless, I’ll attempt to listen when I can ;)

3: Indeed it is for that length only around 2 hours?! Thats crazy as it takes me anywhere from a span of days to finish a single chapter -_-

4: Always looking forward to what you release ^^

5: I think its very possible :)

6: Thanks for the info even though I’ve most likely been filled in (bad memory -_-)

7: Yes, Dragonball was first then Dragonball Z was a sequel were manga and then transitioned into an anime-you should definitely check it out! So you were into Digimon as a child huh-that’s cool. What about Pokemon?
Thanks mate :D I really appreciate your reviews ^_^

The legendary sword is going to the most important factor of this FF, as it will play a role later on. See the notes regarding it on my next chapter, or the one after (not released yet, and I haven't decided when the "reveal" will fit best, haha).

There is actually a reference to Pokemon in this chapter, when Shima says; "It's... Super Effective!!" XD

I know this is a short reply, but I truly enjoyed your review my friend, my brother ;)
 

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Finally back from my deep slumber lol xD

For once, it felt so good to read your FF, cuz its been so long since I read your last chapter.

I honestly cannot give you a full-on review cuz I've lost the flow of the quality (not the story). As in, I know you write average, above average, excellent stuff, so I need something to compare this chapter with....n I don't remember how I felt, the last 3 chapters lol.

But as a fresher, it was way above average stuff.
 

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Finally back from my deep slumber lol xD

For once, it felt so good to read your FF, cuz its been so long since I read your last chapter.

I honestly cannot give you a full-on review cuz I've lost the flow of the quality (not the story). As in, I know you write average, above average, excellent stuff, so I need something to compare this chapter with....n I don't remember how I felt, the last 3 chapters lol.

But as a fresher, it was way above average stuff.
Thanks bro :p It's always hard to get back into a flow of something you haven't checked out in a bit, and honestly, I don't remember much about this chapter beside its start and end. I think it was action packed, but perhaps more of the same. Things take a different turn next chapter though and I believe that from chapter 22-24, I've managed to justify myself a bit, if I can say that, haha ;)

Thanks again, will be looking forward to your reviews on my other chapters bro ;)
 
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