[Photoshop] The Legendary Goalkeeper

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Rate, critique etc.
I've been meaning to make something for a while, but I guess my slump didn't help.

 

[Lord Snow]

8/10

 

[bajram]

7/10

 

[WastedMonkey]

nice work dude

 

[Escorpiius]

It's nice, very similar to the one you're using.
The C4Ds are nicely placed though black doesn't got that well with the background. The colors are nice apart those of c4Ds as an overall.
I don't like the text. Make a text-less version also. If you want to keep the text for focal purposes, make the font smaller and not inside that box thingy, it ruins it.
Overall, it can be improved. If I'm not mistaken, it was a stock and not a render, right? So, good job.

 

[~Law~]

Size and text is too big imo and the right side is too dark.
8/10.

 

[Zer0X]

8.5/10

 

[Alternative]

Why does everyone hate large text and boxes? XD;

But anyway, I made some more with those suggestions you suggested Escorpiius, and maybe more critiques?

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[Aenigma]

Why does everyone hate large text and boxes? XD;

But anyway, I made some more with those suggestions you suggested Escorpiius, and maybe more critiques?

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Yeah these two are much better, but I still think the right side is too dark. Nice overall, 8.6/10

 

[Dino]

Why does everyone hate large text and boxes? XD;

But anyway, I made some more with those suggestions you suggested Escorpiius, and maybe more critiques?

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These two are much more better...but like Blue above me said, the right side is too dark >.>