The Legend of the Gutsy Ninja. (Under Construction)

[geekysoul]

I'm starting to build my own FF. So my FF is set 2 years after the 4th Great ninja war. Naruto is still a "GENIN" ! xd Sasuke is still an evil with his team called TAKA. Taka is working with the AKATSUKI and Orochimaru. Akatsuki's Members are still a mystery for me, i'm still thinking of it. Only Onoki and some Fodder ninja's were killed during the war and OBITO. Yes, you read it right. I dont think Obito should be a main villain on my FF. and i think that's enough ? hehe. like the title says, this is still under construction. so i may changed up a little. but i will update you. i just wanna your opinions. So ? Am i doin it right ?

 

[Tobinaulak]

Why should it be not right? In FFs the writer can do as he pleases. Eg even tobi can be izuna

 

[geekysoul]

Why should it be not right? In FFs the writer can do as he pleases. Eg even tobi can be izuna

no ! i mean, if my FF would be a FAIL ? xd

 

[Tsuki]

Well, it's your fanfic, so I don't think it's up to use to say if you are doing it right or wrong.
But I just want to give you some advice (after reading your post) it's very important to space out your text when making a fanfic in order to make it more confortable to read.

So: use the "enter" button as much as you can ^^

 

[geekysoul]

Well, it's your fanfic, so I don't think it's up to use to say if you are doing it right or wrong.
But I just want to give you some advice (after reading your post) it's very important to space out your text when making a fanfic in order to make it more confortable to read.

So: use the "enter" button as much as you can ^^

Ah ?! OKAY !!!
THANKS FOR THE ADVICE !!! +REP

 

[Tobinaulak]

no ! i mean, if my FF would be a FAIL ? xd

have courage

 

[Tsuki]

Ah ?! OKAY !!!
THANKS FOR THE ADVICE !!! +REP

You're welcome ^^

 

[geekysoul]

have courage

yo ! yo ! thanks for cheerin me up ! +REP