Kwalker394
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Welcome to my Fan Fiction 
Hope you guy's like it, this is my first time writing and actually publishing my work so other's can read and comment on it xd lol So lets begin shall we? This is a prologue of the story to come. The setting takes place about 20 years after the 4th Great Ninja war outside of some ruins of the battle field. So here we go!!!!
The sun is setting making the sky and clouds turn a light orange, haze of purple, and a dark blueish color. The clouds are beginning to combine and form over the ruins. As it starts to drizzle down rain there are kids talking and running in the distance.
Hoshi: Come on Akahana its just over this hill.
As Hoshi points to his left Akahana finally catches up to him nearly slipping due to the rain.
Akahana: Wait Hoshi I don't think we should be doing this. It could be dangerous to travel this far from the village just to see a stupid ruin.
Hoshi: Awe come on don't be such a girl.
As Hoshi say's this lighting begins to strike in the sky and rain begins to fall harder.
Akahana: But I am a girl dimwit. And besides it's raining harder we should really go back.
Hoshi: Don't be silly it's right there look, see there's nothing to be worried about.
Hoshi points down into a big wide open area that goes deep in the earth where Tobi's hideout was during the 4th war. As Akahana and Hoshi looks down a large bolt of lighting strikes inside the hole causing a huge flash of light, lighting up the night sky. Both Hoshi and Akahana fall back startled from the flash of light.
Akahana: *Screams* See I knew we shouldn't have came out here so far away from the village. That lightning strike almost hit us Hoshi we should go back now and get out of this storm.
Hoshi: I am sorry Akahana your right let's go back.
As they are about to turn to walk back to their village the earth below the cavern of Tobi's old hide out begins to crumble. Rocks start falling into a deeper cavern. The side of the hideout where Hoshi and Akahana are standing begins to crack and crumble.
Akahana: Hoshi that's not a good sign is it?
Hoshi: No it's n....
As Hoshi is about to end his sentence he and Akahana begin to fall. Acting quickly Hoshi reaches into his ninja pouch and grabs a kunai with wire. As he grabs Akahana hands wrapping the wire around her forearm. Hoshi then channels his chakra into the kunai and stabs the stone wall forcing the kunai to go into the wall deep enough to withstand weight but still dragging them downward at a fast pace. The kunai then catches and jerks both Hoshi and Akahana. The jerk is so sudden Hoshi loses his grip on Akahana but the wire around her forearm stops her from falling to her death.
Hoshi: Akahana are you ok!? Are you hurt!?
Akahana: *gripping her teeth in pain* My arm hurts but other than that I am ok.
Hoshi: I'm sorry Akahana I'll find a way out of this I swear and I'll take you right back to the village.
Akahana: *looks down speaking softly* It's ok Hoshi.
Hoshi begins to look around for anything he can climb on. He see's a mouth of a cave to his right. Rocks still crumbling beneath them.
Hoshi: Ok Akahana I'm gonna swing you to that ledge over there ok? I want you to grab it and climb up ok?
Akahana: Are you sure?
Hoshi dosnt answer. He then swings Akahana to the ledge slowly getting closer and closer to it.
Hoshi: Ok Akahana grab it.....NOW!
As Hoshi says this he cuts the wire connecting the kunai and Akahana allowing the motion of her to carry her upwards and over to the mouth of the cave.
Akahana: *Screams*
Akahana grabs the ledge for her life and then climbing up crawling fast inside the cave away from the edge. She then sits by the wall knees up to her head crying. With two Kunai's Hoshi beings to shimmy his way to the cave.
Hoshi: (hears Akahana crying) Akahana are you ok whats wrong?
Akahana: (leaps at Hoshi hitting him) Don't ever do that to me again Hoshi, never, never, never!!!
Hoshi looks down at her with a sad look in his eye's.
Hoshi: I'm sorry Akahana, really I am. Lets hurry back to the village ok?
Akahana looks up at him sobbing now.
Akahana: Ok let's (sob) go.
As they stand up and move to the edge of the cave they look down and see a cavern of pitch black darkness.
Hoshi: Whoa I'm glad we didn't fall all the way down there. It goes on forever.
Right after Hoshi says this they both see a red eye looking up at them shining through all of the darkness.
Akahana: Uhhhh Hoshi wh....who is that?
Hoshi: I...I don't Kn....Know. Lets ge...get out of here no...now!
Hoshi looks over to his left and right and see's no way out. He looks down again expecting to see the red eye but its no wear to be found. He hands Akahana two kunais and tell's her to follow him as they slowly climb up the cliff.
Hoshi: Akahana we musn't tell anyone where we were or what we saw. If anyone knew we'd get into so much trouble and we will be grounded for life.
Akahana: I understand Hoshi, let's just get home.
:This setting is now in the Hidden leaf village where Kenesu Hinokami is at the Ichigo Ramen Shop with his friend, master, and Hokage Naruto Uzimaki eating some ramen and talking.:
Kenesu: So Naruto Sensei your treat today right?
Kenesu say's this with a huge grin on his face laughing.
Naruto: (laughing with him) You never change do you Kenesu? I don't know where you get it from.
Kenesu: Well I am your student after all Sensei. Maybe I picked it up from you after all you did learn from the best yourself you know.
Naruto: Yes it's hard to believe its almost been this long.
Naruto looks down at his ramen that was just handed to him looking at his reflection with a sad look on his face. He comes to and realize what he's doing takes a pair of chopsticks and dig in with a big smile on his face.
Kenesu: Sorry Sensei I shouldn't have mentioned anything.
Naruto: No it's ok it's in the past anyways. They all would have wanted me to move on anyways. I should look to the bright future not the dark past.
As Naruto say's this an Anbu messenger appears behind Naruto and whispers in his ear. With a nod and a sudden halt to Naruto's movements the Anbu messenger disappears as Naruto stands up quivering.
Kenesu: Is there something wrong Sensei?
Naruto: It cant be it...it just can't!
Naruto pulls out some money and lay's it on the counter of the Ramen Shop and quickly run's out side and jumps roof to roof to the Hokage's Manor. Kenesu quickly follows him both leaving fresh newly made ramen behind on the counter. As Naruto enters his office there are 4 Foreign ninja's awaiting his arrival with urgent new's.
Naruto: What is wrong!? This cant be happening! There is no way HE can be back.
Well that's it people. Tell me what you guy's think and if I should keep going with the story. Hope you all enjoyed it
Hope you guy's like it, this is my first time writing and actually publishing my work so other's can read and comment on it xd lol So lets begin shall we? This is a prologue of the story to come. The setting takes place about 20 years after the 4th Great Ninja war outside of some ruins of the battle field. So here we go!!!!Prologue
The sun is setting making the sky and clouds turn a light orange, haze of purple, and a dark blueish color. The clouds are beginning to combine and form over the ruins. As it starts to drizzle down rain there are kids talking and running in the distance.
Hoshi: Come on Akahana its just over this hill.
As Hoshi points to his left Akahana finally catches up to him nearly slipping due to the rain.
Akahana: Wait Hoshi I don't think we should be doing this. It could be dangerous to travel this far from the village just to see a stupid ruin.
Hoshi: Awe come on don't be such a girl.
As Hoshi say's this lighting begins to strike in the sky and rain begins to fall harder.
Akahana: But I am a girl dimwit. And besides it's raining harder we should really go back.
Hoshi: Don't be silly it's right there look, see there's nothing to be worried about.
Hoshi points down into a big wide open area that goes deep in the earth where Tobi's hideout was during the 4th war. As Akahana and Hoshi looks down a large bolt of lighting strikes inside the hole causing a huge flash of light, lighting up the night sky. Both Hoshi and Akahana fall back startled from the flash of light.
Akahana: *Screams* See I knew we shouldn't have came out here so far away from the village. That lightning strike almost hit us Hoshi we should go back now and get out of this storm.
Hoshi: I am sorry Akahana your right let's go back.
As they are about to turn to walk back to their village the earth below the cavern of Tobi's old hide out begins to crumble. Rocks start falling into a deeper cavern. The side of the hideout where Hoshi and Akahana are standing begins to crack and crumble.
Akahana: Hoshi that's not a good sign is it?
Hoshi: No it's n....
As Hoshi is about to end his sentence he and Akahana begin to fall. Acting quickly Hoshi reaches into his ninja pouch and grabs a kunai with wire. As he grabs Akahana hands wrapping the wire around her forearm. Hoshi then channels his chakra into the kunai and stabs the stone wall forcing the kunai to go into the wall deep enough to withstand weight but still dragging them downward at a fast pace. The kunai then catches and jerks both Hoshi and Akahana. The jerk is so sudden Hoshi loses his grip on Akahana but the wire around her forearm stops her from falling to her death.
Hoshi: Akahana are you ok!? Are you hurt!?
Akahana: *gripping her teeth in pain* My arm hurts but other than that I am ok.
Hoshi: I'm sorry Akahana I'll find a way out of this I swear and I'll take you right back to the village.
Akahana: *looks down speaking softly* It's ok Hoshi.
Hoshi begins to look around for anything he can climb on. He see's a mouth of a cave to his right. Rocks still crumbling beneath them.
Hoshi: Ok Akahana I'm gonna swing you to that ledge over there ok? I want you to grab it and climb up ok?
Akahana: Are you sure?
Hoshi dosnt answer. He then swings Akahana to the ledge slowly getting closer and closer to it.
Hoshi: Ok Akahana grab it.....NOW!
As Hoshi says this he cuts the wire connecting the kunai and Akahana allowing the motion of her to carry her upwards and over to the mouth of the cave.
Akahana: *Screams*
Akahana grabs the ledge for her life and then climbing up crawling fast inside the cave away from the edge. She then sits by the wall knees up to her head crying. With two Kunai's Hoshi beings to shimmy his way to the cave.
Hoshi: (hears Akahana crying) Akahana are you ok whats wrong?
Akahana: (leaps at Hoshi hitting him) Don't ever do that to me again Hoshi, never, never, never!!!
Hoshi looks down at her with a sad look in his eye's.
Hoshi: I'm sorry Akahana, really I am. Lets hurry back to the village ok?
Akahana looks up at him sobbing now.
Akahana: Ok let's (sob) go.
As they stand up and move to the edge of the cave they look down and see a cavern of pitch black darkness.
Hoshi: Whoa I'm glad we didn't fall all the way down there. It goes on forever.
Right after Hoshi says this they both see a red eye looking up at them shining through all of the darkness.
Akahana: Uhhhh Hoshi wh....who is that?
Hoshi: I...I don't Kn....Know. Lets ge...get out of here no...now!
Hoshi looks over to his left and right and see's no way out. He looks down again expecting to see the red eye but its no wear to be found. He hands Akahana two kunais and tell's her to follow him as they slowly climb up the cliff.
Hoshi: Akahana we musn't tell anyone where we were or what we saw. If anyone knew we'd get into so much trouble and we will be grounded for life.
Akahana: I understand Hoshi, let's just get home.
:This setting is now in the Hidden leaf village where Kenesu Hinokami is at the Ichigo Ramen Shop with his friend, master, and Hokage Naruto Uzimaki eating some ramen and talking.:
Kenesu: So Naruto Sensei your treat today right?
Kenesu say's this with a huge grin on his face laughing.
Naruto: (laughing with him) You never change do you Kenesu? I don't know where you get it from.
Kenesu: Well I am your student after all Sensei. Maybe I picked it up from you after all you did learn from the best yourself you know.
Naruto: Yes it's hard to believe its almost been this long.
Naruto looks down at his ramen that was just handed to him looking at his reflection with a sad look on his face. He comes to and realize what he's doing takes a pair of chopsticks and dig in with a big smile on his face.
Kenesu: Sorry Sensei I shouldn't have mentioned anything.
Naruto: No it's ok it's in the past anyways. They all would have wanted me to move on anyways. I should look to the bright future not the dark past.
As Naruto say's this an Anbu messenger appears behind Naruto and whispers in his ear. With a nod and a sudden halt to Naruto's movements the Anbu messenger disappears as Naruto stands up quivering.
Kenesu: Is there something wrong Sensei?
Naruto: It cant be it...it just can't!
Naruto pulls out some money and lay's it on the counter of the Ramen Shop and quickly run's out side and jumps roof to roof to the Hokage's Manor. Kenesu quickly follows him both leaving fresh newly made ramen behind on the counter. As Naruto enters his office there are 4 Foreign ninja's awaiting his arrival with urgent new's.
Naruto: What is wrong!? This cant be happening! There is no way HE can be back.
Well that's it people. Tell me what you guy's think and if I should keep going with the story. Hope you all enjoyed it
