[Adventure] The Good Things Never Last

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A contour against the blood,
A trace against the skin;
A blueprint in vivid ink,
Sketched out on a whim.

Comely drawings forever saved,
In irregular, pale lines;
Drawn on the skin and stinging out;
From many dire times.

My memories of bad times,
Fables of future past;
Reminders of that old saying,
"The good things never last."
 

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Beautiful, nice work bro I always appreciate some good poetry on the forums.the first four lines I didn't know what you were referring to though but from line five it began to male sense.
 

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Awesome:eek: from the title I thought the poem will be about mortal nature of human beings or fickle nature of life which it does convey.

But after reading it I realised it's about the memories which we cherish and etch on our skins as tattoos!!!

Short beautiful and deep.<3
 

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Awesome:eek: from the title I thought the poem will be about mortal nature of human beings or fickle nature of life which it does convey.

But after reading it I realised it's about the memories which we cherish and etch on our skins as tattoos!!!

Short beautiful and deep.<3
Thank you bro. :) (yep either tats or scars)
 
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