[Photoshop] The future is attacking

R4mbl3

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Nice.
I wish you would have added a little more red though. To bring out his goggles.
 

Roby

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Looks awesome bud! :D
 

-Carnage-

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Lighting:
overall it's ok....but a little too many random light sources..which causes too many focals
the lighting is exaggerated
the lighting on the render's right side is too strong, it made the head white...
try using curves to adjust the brightness.

Depth:
there's a little depth on there...but not enough
the c4d placement is random, it ruins the flow of the signature

Text:
it looks like little effort was put into the text, try putting as much effort on the text as you do to the sig
but the placement is good ^.^​


overall, u need to focus on deph(alot), lighting(try making it "make sense" not random light sources), keeping a single focal point(the render should be the main focal point)... and put a lot more effort on the text...since they seem to be your weak point.
keep improving ;)
 
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