The final fight

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Chapter 1. Turning the tables
It's a dark and stormy night , as the two of them face each other at the Valley of the End. It's been a full 2 years since they've last exchanged blows . Naruto dawns his red cape showing is status as the Sage of Konoha. Sasuke standing on Madara's statue,Naruto on Hashirama's.

Naruto: Sasuke i wont hold back. If you really intend to destroy the Leaf I'll be forced to stop you.

Sasuke:Naruto.....I've already told you once before. You will be the one i kill first. If thats what you've agreed to, then let's settle it here.

Naruto: i guess i have no choice. Here.

Naruto reaches into his pocket and pulls out sasuke's old leaf headband.

Sasuke: Heh! What did you bring that garbage for?

Naruto: it's not garbage. It's proof that we're fighting on equal terms as leaf shinobi.

Sasuke has a flashback of Naruto saying the same thing once during their fight on the hospital roof.

Sasuke: I've long since cut my ties with that village. That same village who had my clan murdered! AND I WONT FORGIVE THEM FOR THAT!

Naruto: Heheh. I guess i should've known . But like i said before, i can understand your hatred, because i could've taken the same path. Its settled then..from here on out we communicate with our fists.

Naruto tosses over the headband towards sasuke, Sasuke tooses a kunai at the cloth of the band sending it flying into hashirama's statue.

Sasuke vanishes in blinding speed toward Naruto

He appears behind him with his sword drawn to naruto's back

Sasuke: Die!

He stabs Naruto through the back..piercing his heart . A puff of smoke appears

Sasuke: Hmph, same old tricks i see.

The real Naruto appears behind sasuke with sage mode activated. He sends sasuke flying with one punch.
Sasuke crashes into the chest of Madara's statue.

Sasuke: UGH!!

Naruto: not exactly the same old trick huh...
Naruto cracks a smile

Sasuke leaps over off the statue onto the water below.Naruto also leaps down.

Sasuke: i see. So you have been preparing for this moment. But i still stand by what i say. You will die by my hands.

Naruto : ( i could have killed sasuke with that punch..but i just cant. I know there is a way to win without killing him)

Sasuke activates his sharingan

Sasuke: (that wasnt a normal punch. If i take too many of those im done for)

Sasuke summons a large shuriken and throws it at naruto
Naruto easily jumps over the shuriken

Sasuke appears above Naruto's head aiming to drive his sword down through him.

Naruto snaps sasuke's sword in mid air in a similar fashion that he did to pain's chakra reciever.

Sasuke:!!!!

Sasuke thrusts his body in order to kick Naruto with a mid air roundhouse kick.

Naruto catches it with his elbow while while grinning at sasuke . Naruto pushes his leg away and punches sasuke in the stomach

Sasuke: !!!Uugh!!

Sasuke lands in the water.

Sasuke quickly pulls himself together and stands.

Sasuke: ..... (what the is going on?! He couldnt even touch me during our last fight until he used his nine tails.)

Sasuke has a flashback of him being the one sending Naruto flying back with one punch during their first battle

Naruto: You seem surprised sasuke.

Sasuke: i mustt admit Naruto , whatever training you've done. It worked..but you're still not my equal. Im not convinced yet.

Sasuke: Fire Ball jutsu!

Naruto dodges it but is met with five small shurken

He pulls out a kunai and deflects them... Sasuke quickly .comes behind him with a chidori

Naruto releases the chakra from his feet and falls into the water in order to dodge sasuke's attack

Sasuke: (he's gotten good)

Naruto creates a shadow clone under water to form a giant rasengan

The rotation from the giant rasengan causes a large whirlpool under sasuke.

With sasuke being sucked in Naruto jumps out high from under the water

Sasuke summons another large shuriken and throws it toward Naruto

It lands causing a puff of smoke killing off the clone

Sasuke: another one!?

Sasuke has now been sucked under water only to see naruto swimming toward him

Sasuke unleashes his full bady chidori causing a electrical current in the water..

Naruto is hit by the electricity..,...... somewhat stunned by the electricity he tries to swim up to escape sasuke' attack..

Sasuke follows

They both Shoot from the water forcefully.


Naruto : shadow clone Jutsu!

2 clones appear on each side of Naruto..they form a rasengan in each of the original's hands.

Sasuke: that wont work against me

Sasuke activates his Mangekyo Sharingan and forms the susanoo rib cage

Naruto's clones grab his arms and throw him toward sasuke..

Naruto smashes a rasengan to the front pair of susanoo's ribs.

Small cracks appear on susanoo's rib cage

Sasuke:!!!

Naruto: (what? Just like madara....?)

They both fall to the water and quickly dash back from each other.

Sasuke: Naruto You've improved you're definitely not the same loser u were in the past. But there is no way you escape this.

Sasuke's eye begins to bleed...

Next Chapter: No Holding Back!!

Please give me your feeback I put a lot of thought into it
 
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nice..its great...
i like how ur using actual "ninja-like" tactics instead of OP techs
and i also like how naruto and sasuke sort of switched places from their last fight xd
 

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nice..its great...
i like how ur using actual "ninja-like" tactics instead of OP techs
and i also like how naruto and sasuke sort of switched places from their last fight xd
Thanks man...I appreciate that... yea I don't like the dbz feel that kishi has placed..but those are their powers and I'll have to touch on that aspect sooner or later-_- lol
 

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it good but you made it seem like sasuke would have gotten beat/killed with 1 punch and made it were he got beat up the most
 

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it good but you made it seem like sasuke would have gotten beat/killed with 1 punch and made it were he got beat up the most
Lol...I see ur a sasuke fan...yea man..he would have died...but naruto didn't surround that punch with senjutsu...he can kill people with one punch if he does that....BUT he couldnt bring himself to do it....keep an open mind as sasuke didn't have his shirngan or MS activated...and when I'm on the next chapter naruto will wish he had killed him..just be patient..I know how to "not be biased". Lmao..

Ps if it makes u feel better..sasuke would have killed Naruto with his sword had sai not have saved him when it was teamn yamato vs sasuke...

P s s. Its not that sasuke got beat up the most....its to show the growth of naruto and the reason why sasuke shouldn't and won't berate him anymore....thus I named it"turning the tables" because this time Naruto was the one with a strong start..like sasuke in the first fight
 
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It's nice.

It would be better if A.) Correct grammar..and no abbreviation. Ex. Ur

Personal preference but I would like it better if instead of using a normal font you used italics ..ya know?
 

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It's nice.

It would be better if A.) Correct grammar..and no abbreviation. Ex. Ur

Personal preference but I would like it better if instead of using a normal font you used italics ..ya know?
Thanks...I'm aiming to have the best fanfictions on NB. I didn't even notice the "ur". Good eye....I guess I'm so use to internet grammar..lmao
 

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Feels like Dejavu?! Looks good to me XD

I do agree with the grammar like "ur" being you're and what not. Figured you had placed it in such a manner just to save time before you re-wrote it for the post!
Guys. Also give KGB kakuzu credit....he helped me. Capture. The essence of the characters a bit more and that really helps the story
 

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Guys. Also give KGB kakuzu credit....he helped me. Capture. The essence of the characters a bit more and that really helps the story
Hahaha I would say the credit has been given where it was due lol. All I did was shorten Sasuke's lines to try and match his attitude (I mean the things he was saying already matched what he might say, hit not as close to how he may say it)....you did pretty much everything XD
 

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Hahaha I would say the credit has been given where it was due lol. All I did was shorten Sasuke's lines to try and match his attitude (I mean the things he was saying already matched what he might say, hit not as close to how he may say it)....you did pretty much everything XD
And don't forget correcting me on susanoo. capturing the actual essence of the character is what makes a fanfic feel real and ur corrections help set up for the next chapter.... So yes u deserve credit because I will make u my official editor...lol
 
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Lol...I see ur a sasuke fan...yea man..he would have died...but naruto didn't surround that punch with senjutsu...he can kill people with one punch if he does that....BUT he couldnt bring himself to do it....keep an open mind as sasuke didn't have his shirngan or MS activated...and when I'm on the next chapter naruto will wish he had killed him..just be patient..I know how to "not be biased". Lmao..

Ps if it makes u feel better..sasuke would have killed Naruto with his sword had sai not have saved him when it was teamn yamato vs sasuke...

P s s. Its not that sasuke got beat up the most....its to show the growth of naruto and the reason why sasuke shouldn't and won't berate him anymore....thus I named it"turning the tables" because this time Naruto was the one with a strong start..like sasuke in the first fight
yea im a sasuke fan lol but killing him in 1 punch would make sasuke look way to weak and the twist from the final valley was a nice touch anyway
 
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