The Final Fight Chapter II Confrontation

[sagewendel]

Sakura:Naruto, wake up it's time to head out.
Naruto:Sorry sorry i slept in. let me get out of my pj's and i'll meet you there.
Sakura:k see you there
NARRATOR:Naruto gets out of his pj's.For those of you that want to know how this happend, well the leaf entering the hidden sound on a mission but the sound thought it was an act of war. The leaf tried to reason but they didn't listen, when news of this spread they were shocked by this so the earth country declared war and with the sand on there side they helped the leaf. The rain village depresed with loss of there god got very angry with the leaf and declared war. thats how it happened now back to the story. Enjoy.
Shikamaru:Where were you Naruto we have been waiting forever. It's such a drag.
Naruto:Sorry sorry slept in. So lets get going.
Yamato:I agree, alright, Naruto,Hinata,Kiba your with me.
Kakashi:Sakura,Shikamaru your with me.
Hinata:Yes.
Naruto:Alright.
Sakura:Yes sir.
Shikamaru:Alright. This mission is such a drag.
Kiba:Yes.
Kakashi:Alright it's settled. Dispart
NARRATOR:So they headed there seperate ways. Hmmmmmm I wonder how team Naki is doing.
Fora:Lets get going. Wara lead them the other way
Wara:Alright i'll lead them the other way. They will never find out untill they catch up.
NARRATOR:So they went there seperate ways to, but they didn't know they went seperate ways too. doomed to meet.
Kiba:I smell 2 people coming this way.
Naruto:Do you think it could be team Naki.
Yamato:Don't know but prepare yourself. We might be in for a fight.
A knife comes through the trees.
Hinata:KNIFE, DODGE.!!!!
They all dodge it.
Naruto:Who are you? Come on out you coward.
Fora:Alright, i'm Fora and this is my partner Taran. we are team Naki
NARRATOR:Now off to kakashi's side
Kakashi:Here they come. Brace yourself.
again, another knife come's through the tree's
They all dodge it like the other's.
Sakura:Show yourself
Wara:You won't get any info out of me without a fight.
Kakashi:Stand back she is stronger than she looks, i'll handle it.
so they step back.
NARRATOR:Sorry, i have to end it here. There will be another one coming your way soon.
To Be Continued


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[sagewendel]

Thank you for reading. Have any problems just leave a comment and i'll try and do it in the next one
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What should i name the next one.

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[Sharingdork]

that's pretty good, expect the Hinata's lines are really light, but overall, it's pretty good. keep it up, and i can't wait for the next chapter

 

[DarkPhoenix]

1st: why knife? not kunai?
2nd: please provide more details than just saying they dodged it since its hard to get hooked when you can't place a concrete situation or scenario for a person to imagine.
3rd: I like where you're going with this but you need to make it more intricate.
4th: kakashi already knows the enemy is quite strong just by looking at them? unless there is a supporting reason it becomes very weird...

 

[Sharingdork]

1st: why knife? not kunai?
2nd: please provide more details than just saying they dodged it since its hard to get hooked when you can't place a concrete situation or scenario for a person to imagine.
3rd: I like where you're going with this but you need to make it more intricate.
4th: kakashi already knows the enemy is quite strong just by looking at them? unless there is a supporting reason it becomes very weird...

1. kunai knife -_-
2. i agree
3. that would help
4. maybe their chakra flow gave it away (?)

 

[sagewendel]

thnx i'll keep that in mind for the next one



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[Sharingdork]

oh, my. you like the emotcons, don`t you?

 

[sagewendel]

yes i do
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