[Other] The Evolution

Vega

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Another great poem!
I really loved how you took Sasuke's negative revolution and twisted around to create Naruto's way for "evolution". Genius play on words. I also felt some of the emotions Naruto would convey, nice work :)
 

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Great poem as usual man :) I agree with Vega on your choice to use the word Evolution to represent Naruto's way in contrast to Sasuke's Revolution. I also like how you had Naruto thank Sasuke for giving him the chance to meet his father.
 

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Thanks bro, I'm glad you enjoyed it! :)
Well, they do contrast eachother, and I'm sure this would be the kind of response Naruto would give to Sasuke's poem.

:hooray
 
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