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Raijin "The Dragon" Hawke


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Raijin "The Dragon" Hawke
Raijin "The Dragon" Hawke
Raijin "The Dragon" Hawke
Raijin "The Dragon" Hawke
Raijin "The Dragon" Hawke
Raijin "The Dragon" Hawke
Raijin "The Dragon" Hawke

”Are We Perfect Mistakes Or Almighty F*ck Ups?”
Basic Information

Name: Raijin Hawke
Nickname: The Dragon, Possessed Demon, Death Sentence
Gender: Male
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Age: 19
Clan: Inuzuka
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Looks:

Mabari
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Mabari is a large ninken with short brown fur and a small tail. Mabari has a length of 6ft and a width of 3 feet meaning that he can easily be ridden by his master/partner. He has bright yellow pupils with black sclera along with a black snout that is shorter than most ninken's giving him more of a bears appearance when combined with his extremely muscular body structure. These large muscles allow him to chomp through stone with ease as well as smash said stone with his powerful paws.

Raijin
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He is a tall and brawny individual that stands at 6’5. Hawke has short black spiky hair that connects to his full beard. His eyes are bright yellow with animalistic black pupils, a characteristic of the Inuzuka clan. He has fair flawless skin with the exception for a scar he got as a kid that starts on the his right cheek and goes up at a slight angle, cutting across his nose, before ending just below his left eye.
He wears a thick black leather long coat with red accents that, covers up his chainmail underneath, that covers the back of his legs and is always completely closed off by several buttons and leather strips. Above his thick leather shirt is A thick iron neck guard that covers up the front of his neck and upper chest and is fastened into place by several strong leather straps along the back of this neck guard is a dark gray fur mount that offer warmth. On his right arm connected to the neck guard is a gauntlet composed of the same iron as the neck guard and is also thick as well as capable of blocking free-form weapons. This gauntlet has red accents of red fabric, which lines the inside that pokes through the small gaps where the straps are to allow free range of movement. This gauntlet has several spikes and along the shoulder as well as at the elbow area along with sharp claws at the end of the gauntlet, which covers the entire arm region, capable of piercing skin with ease similar to a sword. On his left arm all he has on is a fingerless black glove covered in metal shards as well as several runic red tattoos all around his arm. He also has a mole tattoo on his wrist, also crimson, allowing faster summoning. Around his waist is a simple leather belt with a fur lining that allows easy access and storage for his weapons and scrolls. Said belt is fastened by a large metal spiked buckle. Below the belt is a pair of slightly faded black jeans and a pair of brown leather boots. Above these boots are shin guards that are made of the same metal as his gauntlet and neck guard, except it is slightly thinner so it doesn’t weigh him down when running, and is secured in place with several thick leather straps.. Along the back of these shin guards is a spiked blade just above the back of the ankle, capable of cutting through flesh like a knife. The front of the guards that also covers his feet also are covered in the spike designs allowing the tip of the foot to stab into the target. On the glove he has a fuinjutsu seal that allows him to summon fuma shuriken should he need them.
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Personality:
Mabari
Mabari is a relatively lazy and relaxed ninken, despite his size and appearance he only shows aggressive tendencies towards those he is directed at or whenever he feels threatened.
Raijin
Raijin Hawke is a relatively relaxed carefree person with a go with the flow type of philosophy usually.
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Unless he is either provoked or angered by something which tends to cause an adverse effect on his personality almost as if he is possessed or another person is speaking through his body which is how he got his nickname, possessed demon. His eyes begin to glow red throughout and the scar on his nose begins to warp and move to form a circular pattern around his right eye. This offers no real benefit in battle per se so much as it just means he is getting serious and that his sadistic side will come out.
Village Info

Village of Birth: Konohagakure
Village of Alliance: Amegakure

Rank ~ S-Class//Chakra Info ~ 1000

Ninja Rank: S - Class
Specialty:

Raiton[single]
Suiton[fast]
Ninjutsu
Elements:
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Earth release - S.I.T.
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Fire release - S.I.T.
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Lightning release - Mastered
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Water release - Mastered
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Wind release - S.I.T.

Your ninjutsu:
Ninjutsu - Mastered
Moles - Signer
Inuzuka Techs. - Mastered

(Bunshin No Jutsu) - Clone Technique
Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:A clone made of the user that can move but(cannot use any jutsu)This clone is merely an illusionary projection of the user.
Note:The clone jutsu can be made with different elements and is a D-Rank jutsu under its own element(Mizu/Water Tsuchi/Earth Sumi/Ink)

(Bikoku Ninjutsu) - Shadow Stealth Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:This jutsu lets the user follow the target covert by concealing the users presence.

(Henge no Jutsu) - Transformation Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description: Henge no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique, which every ninja learns at the Ninja Academy. Henge allows the ninja to transform themselves into any person or object. This allows the ninja to move with stealth or to trick their opponents.

(Gokan Sakusou) - 5 Senses Confusion Disorder

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:N/A
Damage Points:N/A
The user throws an explosive kunai at their target and the mist spreads threw the air.This jutsu causes the opponent to be hit by attacks even though they think they dodged it or countered it.This effect lasts for 2 turns.

(Kawarimi no Jutsu) - Change of Body Stance Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description: Kawarimi no Jutsu is a basic Ninjutsu technique. When in danger the ninja will quickly substitute themselves with another nearby object. This can be a block of wood or even another person. This allows the ninja to quickly flee and hide while the original object takes the brunt of their opponents attack.

(Nawanuke No Jutsu) - Escape Skill

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:Using chakra the user can escape from being tied down(only works with non-chakra ropes).

(Kakuremino No Jutsu) - Magic Cloak Of Invisibility Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:The user will pull out a cloak that is pre designed for their use.Then by using ninjutsu they make the cloth blend into the background(Konohamaru used this to follow Naruto in episode 2 and got caught because he was holding the cloak wrong).Skilled ninja can see through this jutsu(Rank c and above)

Background Info

History:
”The Beginning”

Hawke was born in the Konohagakure like most if not all of his clan before they moved shortly afterwards when he was still a baby along with his parents, his sister, and ninkens. He grew up like most in the Amegakure until he turned 4 years old which is when both his training started and he got his ninken. Four years later after finishing his basic training of free-form taijutsu with his father, Fenris, and mother, Leliana. He entered the academy shortly afterwards before graduating and becoming a Genin. Meeting his team and getting along with them for the most part with ease before going on several missions.
”Chunin Exam”

After he turned 10 he convinced his teammates to join him in participating in the Chunin Exam so that he can move on to harder missions along with his teammates not realizing that you get different responsibilities along with his new rank if he passes. After breezing through the exam he became a Jounin. Although his friends became only Chunins not being able to put on as good of a show as Raijin did. But they still helped one another whenever possible the first couple of years after they ranked up.
To Be Continued

After a couple years he became S-class and gained access to harder missions as well as became a inspiration for his siblings and his friends students. But most importantly he managed to convince his childhood friend and crush to go out with him.
Other
He carries scrolls, shuriken, tags, wire, and kunia in his pouch on his hip.
He carries a large amount of these in his pouch on his hip.
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He carries a large amount of these in his pouch on his hip.
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He has a great sword strapped to his back that he can wield with one hand due to being trained to do such since essentially birth. The sword is 6ft long and 1ft wide.

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He has a single dagger strapped to his back at a horizontal angle just above his pouch giving quick access.
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His CW.
(Jookaa No Sotokokkaku) Joker’s Exoskeleton
Type: Weapon
Rank: S
Range: Short
Chakra: N/a [+5 per turn][+20 per transformation][+10 chakra blade mode]
Damage: N/a [+15 to Kenjutsu][+15 to Inuzuka Techs.][+10 to Elemental Techs.][+20 for CB Mode]
Description: Joker’s Exoskeleton is a dark colored armor that is composed of chakra metals and a light weight Aluminum alloy, thus making it very tough to pierce through and impervious to normal free-form weapons and throwable items. The armor is skin tight and is connected to the user by a Fuinjutsu seal on the inside allowing it to passively absorb chakra for the abilities while at the same time giving the user complete knowledge over his/her chakra network in case they are under Genjutsu, they still must break free of it on their own/the normal way. One of the abilities of the armor is to transform the appearance of the arms allowing the user to be able to either improve the damage of techniques relative to the weapon used for the Jutsu, naturally a knife for Kenjutsu and Claws for Inuzuka techs. The weapons the suit can transform into are a Bladed Whip, Large Sword, and Claws. The whip can be used with some elemental techniques in place of a sword or the users hand but only offers a small boost to damage due to some chakra mixing in from the suit’s supply. The chakra blade form simply increases the cutting power of the weapons that coming from the armor, allowing the ability to cut through free-form weapons as well as do more damage nothing more. Due to the rank of the weapon as well as the materials the armor provides resistances to C-rank elemental jutsu with the exception of Lightning due to the metallic nature it’s resistance is only D-rank. The suit has sharp claws around the finger area to begin with but they are the equivalent to a free-form sword. The suit has a built in filter allowing it to not be effected by normal pathogens as well as flash bangs and the sort due to the dark 2 way screen that covers the eyes.
Notes:
~Chakra Blade Mode (CBM) requires one turn cool downs and lasts 2 turns.
~CBM counts as one of the jutsu allowed per turn.
~CBM can only be used 4 times a battle
~Transforming or changing weapons can be done as long as chakra is available
~Transformations require 1 turn breaks between uses.
~Transformation lasts 2 turns and counts as 1/3 jutsu allowed per turn.
~The sword is 2 ft thick and 3 ft long.
~The claws are 1 ft long and 3 inches thick.
~The whip can stretch to be 20ft long and is covered in blades.


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Claws(enhanced with chakra)
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Sword(Forms on back of right or left arm allowing both hands to be used)
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Bladed Whip(Forms on back of right or left hand allowing both hands to be used)
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Theme Song and Background Music:


[video=youtube;sbZiSU2YoUI]https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=sbZiSU2YoUI[/video]

Battles

Won::pkun:
Lost::pkun:


Not sure if it's needed but permission to
make this bio(same character model)~

~Approved~
 
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Why you salt?
I didn't mean it in poor taste. I've only ever seen ZK with it for like forever. So seeing someone else with it...it feels wrong. I know he picked someone else but still...I've known ZK since I started and he had that girl avatar back in 2011.

No hate for the bio but for someone else taking it. It's okay man but please don't lower our expectations of the character. Do him justice and improve with him. If you do, even ZK will approve. :3
 

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I didn't mean it in poor taste. I've only ever seen ZK with it for like forever. So seeing someone else with it...it feels wrong. I know he picked someone else but still...I've known ZK since I started and he had that girl avatar back in 2011.

No hate for the bio but for someone else taking it. It's okay man but please don't lower our expectations of the character. Do him justice and improve with him. If you do, even ZK will approve. :3
Well in order to improve him I would need training and I'm currently doing that. And ZK gave me his blessing.:bdpf:

On a side note do you even know what game this character is from? Or rather are you a fan of the series?
 

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I've seen your bios you don't have the right to criticize anyone. But then again most people just get a bio shop to do it like a bunch of lazy *sshats.
Don't talk shit about Shonen; boi gets strength from hate. Watch yourself, he's gonna be the next Scorps.

OT: "You can only win the game when you understand that it is a game. Let a man play chess, and tell him that every pawn is his friend. Let him think both bishops holy. Let him remember happy days in the shadow of his castles. Let him love his queen. Watch him lose them all."
 

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Still for you to criticize my bios that much, I expected something god-like from your bios
I don't criticize the bio just your character choice in all honesty your bios aren't that bad I just hate the characters you choose. i.e.Spectra.

Nah i love dragon age Its one of My favorite games but The biography is not as good as i had hoped and besides whenever i see this bio it reminds me of ZK
Do you play Inquisition online pretty fun especially with friends? Sorry I didn't want to go to a bio shop although in all honesty I could have easily just looked at their templates and more or less copied it but I don't have time for that. And yeah I know I expected that people would say it reminds them of ZK's bio but meh.

Don't talk shit about Shonen; boi gets strength from hate. Watch yourself, he's gonna be the next Scorps.

OT: "You can only win the game when you understand that it is a game. Let a man play chess, and tell him that every pawn is his friend. Let him think both bishops holy. Let him remember happy days in the shadow of his castles. Let him love his queen. Watch him lose them all."
:wut:What does the first part mean?

I know the quote from ZK's bio.
 

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I love Spectra and don't care what anyone says
You're entitled to your opinion on that show and character the same way I am. Just because I'm not a fan doesn't mean you have to follow me just know that my opinion is negative of what is the show called Bakugan?:wut:
 

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I don't criticize the bio just your character choice in all honesty your bios aren't that bad I just hate the characters you choose. i.e.Spectra.



Do you play Inquisition online pretty fun especially with friends? Sorry I didn't want to go to a bio shop although in all honesty I could have easily just looked at their templates and more or less copied it but I don't have time for that. And yeah I know I expected that people would say it reminds them of ZK's bio but meh.



:wut:What does the first part mean?

I know the quote from ZK's bio.
I do play inquisition, the dragon age series is one of my favorite games. Online, not really that much since i dont know many people who play it, i just enjoy the massive world and story.
 

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That's what places you in my hit list
Proceeds to sarcastically cower in fear Please sir anything but the list?!
:sigar:Bakugan sucks and you know it.

I do play inquisition, the dragon age series is one of my favorite games. Online, not really that much since i dont know many people who play it, i just enjoy the massive world and story.
I do perilous and nightmare runs all the time just for fun with lvl 1's. So me and my friends play the game a lot. Although I do enjoy the story I mainly just create new characters every few weeks to give me something new to do since I learn something new everytime minus one of my characters, female elf rogue assassin. What console are you on?

:sweat:I got distracted and started blabbering on....
 
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